Jiajiu*

It's really unbearable to have first-class qualifications and no one wants it. Even if there is some foreshadowing, it's hard to be interested in reading it. But the author's way of writing is really interesting.

Good article, highly recommended.

The book is full of hardships and joys, and it is difficult to get rid of the truth!

The plot is okay, but it feels like the time is a bit too short. It would be nice if some daily plots such as cultivating immortals are added. I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is pushed away by events every time, and various conflicts are integrated into one. But cultivating immortals is not just for seeking freedom and freedom. Well, practicing the exercises all the time is just like going to work in real life. It feels like another kind of cage. Write about the protagonist's hobbies, daily life, the beautiful scenery you see, and the little interesting things you encounter. It would be great to lengthen the timeline and sandwich it in, slow and urgent.

The rhythm is very good, neither too fast nor too slow. The setting is probably that of cultivating immortals in ancient times. There is not much to say. If I have to say it, it is too sudden that the test jade token is broken. There is no explanation why it is broken. Of course, I may have skipped it.

The fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold. The talented male protagonist He Liangchen has made his way through various hardships with courage and wisdom. Although he got off to a bad start, the results of his training have begun to show. We look forward to the follow-up plot.

Keep up the good work, I like novels with brains, but the main characters in new books in the future should not be too cowardly! ! ! A good book is what you need to think about, and the plot comes second! ! ! It's better not to be too self-righteous as the protagonist, otherwise he will look like a clown! ! ! The above is my review

The author's imagination is wide open and his ideas are wonderful. The plot is compact, the writing is fluent, and the story is interesting. Recommend. Come on, author. I have read more than thirty chapters, and the writing is really beautiful. Come on, author＾0＾~

The writing is excellent and has a lot of imagination. The story is novel and has many foreshadowings. The reading is ups and downs and fascinating.

A very nice novel. The author's writing style is very sharp and smooth. The story description is wonderful and beautiful, and the characters are lifelike. I give the author a big thumbs up [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]

Come on, it's a very good semi-traditional fairy tale that doesn't taint the bad habits of urban trendy novels.

It still feels a little bit worse, but overall it's pretty good.

Good times and good scenery know how many times, it is the right time to cultivate immortality and attain the Tao. It is a good article [like] [like] [like]

A thousand-mile horse often exists, but a bole does not always exist. Good looking👍 Exquisite, a masterpiece

The story is very exciting, the content is substantial, the characters are delicate, and the sentences are smooth and natural. It is not enough to read. I give it five-star praise and encouragement.

A bit like early immortality novels

I really like to see the author cheering hard

Not bad, not bad, really good

It's okay to watch, but it's a bit lacking.

I have been following this book for a long time, it is really good! The story is wonderful, the suspense is high, the writing is sophisticated, five stars [like][like][like]

This is a fantastic journey with fascinating stories!

A nice book

A rare good book [like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

Why is the rating so low? Gravesweeping, come on＾0＾~

Reading this book is like tasting a pot of good tea.