After Playing the Role of a Passerby, He Was Regarded as a Member of the Protagonist Group

I will be a long-time fan from now on, and apart from other things, there are very few articles of this type. The comic cosplay forum also has a system. There are really very few articles on this subject, and even fewer of good quality. I have only found three or four so far! And this is not just one world, there will be other worlds that I like to travel to quickly, with a bit of a villain flavor. Although it seems beyond expectations, everything is actually under the control of the protagonist! It's just not too cool! As long as you maintain this quality and keep writing, madam, you will definitely become popular! A small knife is pleasing to the eye, but a big knife is not afraid. Anyway, someone else will be the one to kill him in the end, and he will never be able to kill the heroine. So you can use more knives. Even though people say they like happy endings, in fact the tragic plot will make it more unforgettable! I like this kind of thing because no matter what the role is, it is fake. It can only hurt others, but it will never hurt the protagonist himself. What's more, there is also the factor of fast travel. It seems that the only drawback at present is that there are too few updates, really too few!

The setting of this book is that the protagonist, as a creator and promoter of the plot, needs to gain the attention of the audience, similar to the position of the mastermind behind the scenes. I personally believe that the protagonist should have strong control over the plot, which highlights the important position of the protagonist in the audience's heart and can more easily stir the audience's heartstrings. This is also one of the important points of this book. In fact, I think that in articles with this type of theme, whether it is the main plot or the branch plot, the protagonist should appear as a planner, leading the direction of the plot, and deeply affecting the characters in the plot. As the protagonist who the reader can substitute to a certain extent, this moderate refreshing point can improve the perception. Some people think that the protagonist has disappeared. I personally think it is because this point has not been achieved. There are two reasons for this. One is that there are too many branch lines, and these branch lines have no strong relationship with the protagonist in terms of look and feel. I guess the author may have added these branches for the purpose of enriching the world view, but in terms of results, these branch lines make quite a difference. Some readers are in a fog. It can be said that in a novel with this comic structure, this kind of result is foreseeable. The solution to this problem is also very simple, that is, the protagonist controls the formation of the comic and shows the reader the process of creating the comic. This sense of control can not only provide readers with fun, but also strengthen the connection between the main line and the branch line.

Probably the viewing time is relatively short... The current progress is about one-third) Overall, the author's creativity is very good, the subject matter is very novel and the imagination is great, including the fact that the dialogue between the inner and the system does not use quotation marks is very detailed. After all, it is still what is thought in the heart. However, the shortcomings of writing this way are also obvious. It is a bit difficult to distinguish the author's narrative and the psychological activities of the characters (especially the protagonist). In addition, you can feel that the author wants to express a lot of things, but there may be some places that are not easy to understand due to the lack of writing skills. All in all, I still like this book very much and look forward to the author's subsequent growth in writing skills🥰

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The plot is new and interesting, but the barrage discussion caught my eye. It would be fine if they were unified to the end of the article, but it would be an uncomfortable experience to be stuck in the middle.

Wow, it's a new book, take a bite😋 It smells so good, have another sip😋 It's so delicious, have another bite 😋 Budui! 😩😩 So bitter😞😞 Don't worry, keep eating😋😋 So bitter😩😩 Hao Chi😋😋 So bitter😩😩 Hao Chi😋😋 ... Why is it gone? 😡😡😡😰😰😰😭😭😭😭

4 Stars is the ultimate score, including five stars (seems like it's troublesome if the tomato score is too high) This is truly excellent short wear, the content is wonderful Lots of foreshadowing, and a lot of sugar knives If you love to eat, novelists like us should eat this kind of knife [crying] The first story is really exciting, and the writing is also very good. You must come and see it (I can't eat the knife alone) I hope that the new world can be so exciting after the big year (The pressure must be quite high [blowing kiss])

Nice! I dare say this is definitely one of the top twenty books I have ever read! (Those popular ones like Toka don't count) It's very attractive and I finished reading it before I knew it.

The writing is good, really good. It is a rare work written by Tomato with excellent writing. It's a pity that after seeing the scene where An Quan and An Yanxi had a disagreement, I got angry. In my opinion, An Yanxi's behavior and practices are double standards. This is not a problem in itself, because it is okay to regard "double standards" as character characteristics. The problem is that the author doesn't think so, and the subsequent plot design is obviously biased towards An Yanxi (An Quan's family was just broken, but An Yanxi lost his sister). At the same time, from about chapter fifty-five to the current update, the content of this book has been in a depressing atmosphere, making it unreadable. The pace is a bit slow and there are too many characters. How long does the author plan to write this first copy?

What's nice is that it's written very carefully, because the author is a novice and can understand it. But, it is very detailed. Just like reading the text description version of the comic, the heroine actually does not occupy much space. It feels a bit like a pseudo-group portrait. The heroine is positioned throughout the short story but there is not much actual space.

The word "quick travel" can be banned, because the author writes it so well that every world is difficult to level (although the first world has not been completed yet). It is not recommended to do it without thinking, because you will not be able to understand the plot (it may happen that others are crying and you are full of questions) Anyway, it's really well written and makes me feel emo [grieved] all the time.

It's really good-looking, such novel writing, especially for someone like me who reads novels and uses the images in his mind. This is like a comic, it's so good, so good! It's a group portrait, and I also like the other characters very much. It's a new take on an old story, and the plot perspective is quite different. It will describe some comic storyboard displays, and it's very graphic!

It's generally okay, a group portrait book. Just two small suggestions: 1. When transitioning or describing scenes such as memories, you can mark them with special symbols, otherwise it will look really messy. 2. When talking to the system, you can also use special symbols to frame it, otherwise it will feel strange like a narration.

You must keep writing, it's really good. It's worth it. I spent almost half an hour browsing the recommendations, and finally found gold. As soon as I calculated, I found that the time when this book was on the recommendation list happened to be the day when I became more diligent and updated it for several days in a row, so you know what I'm going to say, right? I feel a lot more active after reading these barrages. Although, what is the probability that a knife is good for physical and mental health? ? (Wu [thinking], poor tide Zai, I feel like there is a bigger conspiracy (knife), the old thief Ni... Hiss, what am I going to say?

It looks good, but the shitty yellow button appears too suddenly, and it makes me cry so much.

It really impressed me. I can really see the comic in the story through the text, or I can imagine their story through the text. Oh, I don't know how to express it. Anyway, it is very interesting. Highly recommended!

Beautiful, so beautiful. It's so good that I want to explode. The author please update me soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! "Look at things, look at the sky, look at the earth, look at the sun, look at the moon, look up, look down, and see other people always have highs and lows." The second line on the left side reads, "Laugh at the past, laugh at the present, laugh at the east, laugh at the west, laugh at the south, laugh at the north, laugh here and there, laugh at your own ignorance." So update soon. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please update me soon. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

To be honest, I am tired of reading comics, but this one still gives me a refreshing feeling. The first three chapters are very fascinating. If you read it patiently, you will find that it is a growing masterpiece. The protagonist created by the author is very satisfying, smart and has the feeling of a script team. The only regret is that it is not updated regularly. Of course, the most regrettable thing is that it is not a completed work. Okay, that's it. Finally, I hope the author keeps writing and doesn't give up, because I will be heartbroken.

The picture quality is quite good, maybe because I don't read comics very much, so I don't understand some parts very clearly, and the heroine's appearances are a little less, but I think her line is pretty tear-jerking. There is one scene where the bear-infested snow-ridge dumpling is forced to turn black and become an enemy formation. Camp, it feels pretty good to put this kind of setting here, but the female protagonist appears a little bit, so I couldn't help but scroll down quickly to find the female protagonist. The story is very good, with a complete main line and multiple branch lines. The original story feels like a group portrait.

The subject matter of this book is quite refreshing. It has the feeling of breaking the fourth wall. It is like the author and the readers communicating in the step-by-step plot. The author also often plays some jokes in the barrage to increase the interest. These are all advantages. When reading, it is better not to substitute the heroine, a time traveler, into the character "An Fuyou", but to treat "An Fuyou" as a living character in the comic, and other characters are very important to the comics. The emotion of "An Fuyou" can only be for An Fuyou, not for the heroine, otherwise it will look very weird. The heroine can only use the identity of "An Fuyou" intermittently to promote the plot. Otherwise, you will feel that many characters' interactions and barrage methods in the book are completely incomprehensible. There is an isolated "who am I, where am I and what are you doing", which is a very confusing and incomprehensible feeling of the characters' behavior.

It is a really good novel. It has a long plot, but twists and turns, lots of imagination, and good writing. The characters' personal characteristics and foreshadowings are very clear, and the psychological description is excellent. The contradictions and conflicts in the characters' hearts, the collision of good intentions and malicious intentions, reality and warmth, make people tearful and funny, and are elastic. There are many scenes, but they are mainly used to relieve emotions and provide explanations. Of course, they are also used to analyze the plot and character questions, as well as to feel immersed and express inner emotions. It is a very good novel, but it is too short [laughs][laughs][laughs][crys][crys][crys] Big boost, author, I will always follow you

Very nice ꒰⑅°͈꒳ °͈꒱･*♡♡♡ I have read a lot of role-playing articles, and this one is also very interesting✩*:.˶˃ ᵕ ˂˵ .:*✩ Great support, author੭ ᐕ)੭

It's nice to watch [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] The reminder keeps ticking, ticking, ticking, till I get tired of it.

Very good, very good, very interesting, but when I came back after the high school entrance examination, I found that the author had stopped updating [laughs] [like] It's okay, it's okay, as a qualified reader, I can figure out the plot.

It's so beautiful. I love watching it. I really like the character design performed by Sister Bao. That's why you let me watch it while it was still being serialized. I cried so much TT

It's better than expected, and the plot is very interesting. But the picture quality is a bit poor and can make people feel confused. If I feel bad in the future, I will give it a four-star rating [exploration] Good? (· ∀︎ · д ·) Not good?

It's beautiful. I really really like the sisterhood. I eat it. The teacher's writing is really graphic, and it feels like I'm really reading a comic. I especially like the confession of Xiao Yanxi and his classmates singing K, which gave me goosebumps. Moreover, the interaction between the barrages is really interesting (real). I can watch it all day. Has the teacher ever considered writing a side story about the barrages (whispering). Moreover, looking at this novel from the perspective of the barrage, regardless of the current perspective of the protagonist, really moved me and made me very excited (it's delicious and I love it) Woohoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, I am, that's why I'm so sad. . . Teacher must continue to write down!!!

A very good novel. I have read many similar ones. Usually a story ends in about forty chapters. The author can tell that one story is much longer than others, so I feel that the three stories in the introduction will take at least 600,000 words to complete. But the author is much more I don't want to think about New Frequency. It suddenly broke the chapter or stopped writing. It would be extremely uncomfortable. Now I thought that the first story should be almost finished, so I read the first one, but it ended up being broken and uncomfortable [face covering]. There is nothing to say. I hope the author can finish the three stories mentioned in the introduction [please update]

It's so good to watch, Fu Fu is always strategizing and it's so exciting, and the descriptions are really like I'm watching anime or comics. The really strong 2.5D is so interesting, and every character is very vivid. Long live Fu Fu. I thought that the heroine and the original protagonist are two branches. I didn't expect that there are descriptions of meeting all the important characters and having a good impression of the heroine. Oops, I was stunned. If you are the strongest little lolita on earth, come and do it. Even though I knew it was the heroine who set up the situation, it still made me very moved and sad. . The author, please come back and fill in the holes as soon as possible.

It's so beautiful. Even though I know it's fake, it still hurts my heart 😣 But it's just this battle that's so cool! More knives come to my mouth, hahaha, Fu Bao is so cute The author will definitely stop updating the medicine. Even if it's just for me, can you update a few more chapters🥺