Abnormal Mage, Your Magic Is Wrong, Right?

Once you see around 290, you don't have to look back. The subject matter is quite good, but the plot is too exaggerated. It's exciting but I don't dare to enjoy it to the end. The protagonist Guang Weizheng is the kind who puts the overall situation first. The kind of person who harms others' own interests and then says that the overall situation is the most important thing and it's okay.

It has its own new setting and different magic system. The writing style is more relaxed and a bit funny. It is getting better and better. I look forward to the future performance! There is a high probability that there will be no female protagonist, and I will like to write career stories.

It should be a slow-burning type, with smooth writing, humor, and no obvious poisonous points. Unlike Tomato, I want to complain every few sentences. Unfortunately, I'm used to the fast and invincible type. This one is a bit slower, and my imagination doesn't seem to be that big.

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Another book that starts off well, but starts to lose its word count as it goes on. The setting of the book is good, a lot of thought has been put into the world structure and power system, the details are complete, and the route is clear. In terms of plot, the time travel and exploration in the first part are well and carefully written, and the characters are also quite vivid and distinct. Overall, the first hundred chapters are worth reading. The shortcomings are also obvious, the character layout is too small. In a rather grand world setting, most of the characters, even if their power has reached extraordinary levels, are short-sighted and careless. Some are neglecting public affairs for personal gain, some are unjust for profit, some are high-minded and low-handed and only engage in moral kidnapping, and some are idiots who want to imitate others and pretend to be cool... In addition, starting from the school arena, they can easily write five or six chapters, which is really hard to catch up...

It's a very good book, the content is similar to Nine Star Poisonous Milk, but it doesn't matter, it's quite interesting to read. The key point is that the plot advances very quickly, without interruption, and in a step-by-step manner. The characters are also quite good, they are decent and have normal brains, and they can recognize that the protagonist has traveled through time, and the villain is not mentally retarded. It is good that there is no heroine. In the face of the righteousness of the family and the country, it is not that the love between children is not good, but that there are very few writers who can write about the love between children and the righteousness of the family and the country. Write what you are good at. Another point is that the title of the book is simple and clear, just like "Nine Stars Poisonous Milk" below. Many people like to read it. This book is all good. If the results are not good, it means there is no traffic. How to do this? Ask the editor. The biggest advantage of this book is that it has no obvious shortcomings and is very comfortable to read.

It's a bit interesting, not a traditional cool novel. I like this kind of writing. The pace is okay, but it is really slow, but just don't write poisonous points. It would be better if there is no heroine. In many books, the emotional scenes of the heroine are not well written and they are forced to write. It is really unnecessary.

Yes, although there are still some shortcomings in the writing structure, it is already above average. I would like to point out some shortcomings to Brother Yibai. I feel that the protagonist upgrades too quickly. Some descriptions of friendship and emotion are not sufficient because of the rapid improvement. Some of them are good, but they can be read. Yes, I feel like I can still write about it. After all, there is another world, and there is no very detailed description. Only Yamatomon has more. I think the growth system of Warcraft can also be said in more words. There is also a big hole. The origin of the system is not mentioned. Although I am not very curious, I still feel that it is better than nothing. I hope Brother Yibai's next book will do better

I clicked on it as a fun read, but then I found that the pace was a bit slow, and it was easy to miss the plot if I skipped through it. After I took my time and read it carefully, I found that the writing is indeed good. In terms of plot, the writing is okay and smooth, and the logic of the supporting characters' actions is also clearly explained. The latest chapter is over 300 chapters, and the world view is slowly unfolding. This is a book worth reading on Tomato. It is a very good novel that I have read recently.

Heard Chapter 363. Travel through the monster-killing upgrade flow. The overall story is relatively smooth, the writing is humorous, and the three views are correct. Some scenes were not designed very well, such as the amnesia scene. Some scenes were forced to be added, but later on, they were not careful and were not afraid of being discovered. In the end, they confessed to the leader of the Candlelight Army, Uncle Xu, and Fa Xiao, and the reactions of these people were not very logical. There is also a lack of emotional scenes for the male protagonist. I hope he can have a good relationship during his college years. Overall, this is a pretty good novel. I would like to give it a five-star support and encouragement. Keep it up! Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

The worldview is very upright and there are not so many conspiracies. Positive energy without being biased, with love [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The power system and some small plots, including the protagonist's golden finger, can see some traces of the Nine-Star Poisonous Milk, but it has its own new things. The dialogue process of the characters does not have the awkward speeches with missing brain stems like many novels. It can be considered as qualified food and above. It would have been nice if I had read this book later.

It's good to read, Brother Yi is a nice person. Although the 400 to 500 chapters are a bit too fast and it's not comfortable to read, but the writing is great, and it has a happy ending, which is very good I've wanted to complain for a long time. In this book, the word "magic" is replaced by "skill", which doesn't feel inconsistent at all ()

8 Points Advantages 1. There are relatively few poisonous and urinary spots, the writing is logically clear, and the writing is excellent! 2. The protagonist is relatively upright and has a moral bottom line, which is very good. 3. No knife, no knife, no knife Disadvantages 1. Not very imaginative and more conventional 2. Some of the content is not smooth. For example, the protagonist's question about whether to hide the loot is rather blunt, but the writing of the latter character's transformation has improved. Overall, this is a seemingly enjoyable article, but in fact it is an emotionally complete and human-building article [Like][Like][Like]

In terms of content and writing, I personally think it deserves 9 points or higher, around 9.3. The plot is not too procrastinating. Some people's highlight is the game interlude. Because this is fine for me, I will explain it in advance. I prefer this kind of bland writing style. Looking at the whole article, there are not many places where adjectives are piled up. If there are, they are mostly in combat and skill descriptions. It is understandable that the score is increased due to personal preference. This is a rare book that I can read in one go without any impatience or skipping chapters. You can say that I have low vision, but I still think this book deserves a high score of 9 or above.

I accidentally discovered a book. After reading the introduction, I thought the setting was quite interesting, so I started reading. As a result, I gradually became fascinated by it. I haven't seen such a book in a long time. It has no poisonous points, and it does not need to be forced to stir up tears or force the characters to die to express emotions, but The expressions hidden between the lines, friendship, family, family and national conditions, all in all, I am very satisfied with this book and like it in all aspects. Reading and listening to books during my recent busy studies is a kind of spiritual and psychological comfort. I thank the author and I am also looking forward to the author's next new book. Come on!

It's pretty good. Others always say that a lot of it is nonsense, but that nonsense only fills in some content. The procrastination of the plot also supplements the description of the world environment. The further you read, the better it gets [please update]

Reading record: The overall plot is a very good novel. The protagonist is neither humble nor overbearing, gentle and kind. After revealing his identity, he immediately worried about his close friend. The supporting characters attracted me very much. I saw through the protagonist's military minister, but I also recognized the protagonist, Uncle Xu, who is the protagonist's backing. The lack of a female protagonist is also a big plus. Good luck to the author.

Overall, it's good. When I started reading Physical Mage, I thought it was another novel about physical training and magic. But unexpectedly, he still took the magic route. The writing style is not particularly sophisticated, but the description of the characters is particularly profound. Moreover, the protagonist's personality is not that of a virgin, nor is it mindless and cruel, but rather a tough ordinary person. This is not special at all, but it seems particularly novel. If you keep writing and the whole thing doesn't collapse, it can be said to be a good book.

The writing is very good - it is not a traditional invincible novel. The characters have brains and the overall writing style is very relaxed. It is just too little. It should be updated a hundred chapters a day.

Actually speaking, I should give this book a four-star rating, but I gave it a five-star rating because it is pretty good among so many Tomato novels. In my opinion, the progress of the protagonist's training in the later period is too fast and unreasonable, but the world created by the author and the image of the protagonist are both very good, so I am willing to give it five stars. Then, as a female reader, the book does not have too many sexual gazes on women and more dirty jokes than other male-oriented novels. It is not very explicit, so it looks okay. Finally, I feel that the protagonist always mentions the system when he gains abilities. It feels like a pitfall that has not been dealt with well, or maybe I missed it because I skipped reading in the middle. Overall, this is a novel with flaws that do not hide its flaws, although the flaws are a little big.

More than 500 and almost 600 chapters have been updated. Overall, it seems to be quite good. The characters have basic IQs and have their own thoughts. Questions about the identity of the protagonist are all well portrayed. At least for the characters, I think a 9.8 Is not too much. If someone says that some characters are not good, then there is nothing they can do. A book that is all about truth, goodness and beauty is really boring. The plot is also okay. I can't describe it in words. Some of the routines are quite effective. The plot progresses very quickly later on. From the high-level mage to the taboo, it can be said that it took off directly. It can also be understood that the high-level magic crystals and super-levels are funded by the military and do not need to work hard by themselves. It is naturally fast. Regarding hydrology, I have divided it into several categories. The author cannot be considered a big hydrology, but there are some settings that need to be written. Although you can guess it without writing, some readers will criticize you if they don't understand it. If you write it, they will keep talking about water. Some invincible novels can be said to kill and kill all the way, which is quite satisfying in a novice novel. This should be called a narrative invincible novel. In the beginning, I worked hard and compared it with others of the same age. It is not until the mid-level to high-level enters the military's sight that it starts to become stronger. The high-level is almost in a take-off state, and it feels like it is about to end. Come on, give it a complete ending.

After reading it briefly, the author's writing style is excellent, his thinking is clear, and there are many shining points. The shortcomings are also obvious. As a reader who has read the full text, I will comment below. 1. There is a lack of a heroine. The author's portrayal of brotherhood is adequate, but the book seriously lacks the rendering of other emotions, including family affection (most of the people involved are out of responsibility and pity), love (there is no heroine at all, and none of the supporting characters are in love. As for the one at the beginning, the supporting characters do not count) 2. The rhythm in the middle and late stages is a bit uncontrolled. It is still at the first level around Chapter 200, it has reached the third level around Chapter 400, and it has reached the fifth level after Chapter 550. When I read Chapter 200, I felt like I was halfway through the table of contents. Why am I still on the first level? It must be a eunuch story. But fortunately, it was pulled back in the later stage, and the reasonable ending does not count as a eunuch. 3. The world view is slightly narrow, and it has been going back and forth in the "channel", and it has always been "strengthening". The expansion is not enough, and the impact of alien beasts and magic on other aspects is almost not mentioned. This is also an important factor affecting the fullness of the plot. 4. The psychological portrayal is outstanding, and the scene where Marshal Chu explodes his waistcoat is the most exciting part of the book. I look forward to the author continuing to develop it in the next book. It is a very good book, but as for the background, the book is a little short, and many details can be explained more clearly. It is worth reading for book lovers. (You can use your brain a little)

This book is really unique. At first glance, the setting may be mistaken for cliché literature, but in fact it has a rich connotation and conveys a lot of thought-provoking philosophical thoughts. The characters no longer have the stereotype of fast-food slap-in-the-face literature, and instantly become three-dimensional and vivid. A masterpiece that dares to be completed. Simple words tell a fantastic story, making people have endless aftertaste and hope for life and human nature.

I've finished reading it. It's a decent book. I can't say whether I liked it or not. I probably wouldn't recommend it to my relatives and friends. The biggest highlight is the characters. The protagonist, including the supporting characters, are quite unique. Whether one is lovable or not is a matter of personal perception, and the difference is huge, but uniqueness is an objective situation, so it is worth singling out and praising. The biggest problem is pacing. The author himself said that the writing was "relatively watery". This is reflected in the explanation of the same thing over and over again and across several chapters, which seems procrastinating. Not only that, the protagonist's growth curve arrangement is also very interesting. It often happens that after crossing a level, all the previous problems are solved, the power system is different, and the new system looks like playing house to the old one. It's not that it's impossible to write like this, but it gives people a very fragmented look. Combined with the fact that the author likes to talk about settings, logic, and character psychology in large sections, it can only be said that the flavor is unique, and ordinary people may not be able to eat it. But no matter what, the author has finished writing this book, and I have read it. I still admire it, and hope that this author, who has repeatedly said that he is a newcomer in chapter reviews and other places, can make greater progress and write better stories. Above, I was going to give it three stars, but I gave it four stars as a token of encouragement.

The structure is relatively rigorous and the logic is clear. The protagonist and villain also have online IQs. What I like most about it is that the protagonist will not shout and kill over trivial things. Conflicts can be resolved instead of mindlessly turning into hatred. In terms of combat, since he is a melee mage, the descriptions are quite enjoyable. In terms of daily life, many people think it may be superficial, but I feel that daily life is still not enough written. I think it is good to mix some relaxed and happy daily life between the bloody battles. After all, life is not just about fighting and killing. In addition, the female characters in it have almost no highlights, almost nothing. The last 1/3 of the chapter obviously starts accelerating. If it weren't for a college student competition, the teammates in the early stage would be basically useless. Overall, it's pretty good. If you like to read more relaxed articles, you can check it out.

I finished this book in 5 days. I felt a little bad when I saw the reviews of this book at first, but in line with the principle of reading in a book shortage, I still read it. To put it simply, the overall plot is relatively tight and not too delayed. However, I feel that the plot of this book is a bit fast. If it were slowed down, at least I could write about 200 chapters. The plot of this book starts to advance quickly from the middle, but the plot is reasonable and not too tearing, but it always feels a bit empty. The character descriptions feel quite good, relatively delicate, and the world view is also very good. This book spends a lot of space to improve the world view, and it seems to be very immersive. I read a lot of comments saying that they are unhappy and useless. I feel okay. I fully put it into it and weighed the pros and cons. It is similar to the choice of the protagonist. The protagonist of this book is not a protagonist with an extreme personality, but more like an ordinary person. Overall, this book is only 4 stars, but I still give it a 5 star support.

Very good, a logical and smooth alien story. (Soul Penetration, Microsystem) The power system is not perfect enough, but it does not affect the plot development of the novel. Advance quickly and your combat power will soar without feeling aggrieved. The company of friends and the care of bosses make you feel happy. Good.

After reading it, I would like to share my opinion: The writing is good, generally very smooth, and the characters are gradually outlined in the early stage. The writing is very vivid, each has its own characteristics, and there is no blind plot. You can see the inner growth of the protagonist step by step, from being cautious in the early stage, cautiously playing his original self, to the recognition and belonging later, well... There are twists and turns, and there are also places that make people smile. It is thoughtful and comfortable to watch, and the quality is quite high! ! Really recommend to everyone! Of course, I would also like to thank the author greatly and wish you success in your work and good health.

Very pretty. The author's writing style is good, and the plot arrangement is also reasonable. Whether it is protecting the common people within the scope of his ability, or the later conflict with the Xiao family and his son (currently seen here), he is portraying a flesh-and-blood, courageous and strategic person who understands the principle of great ability and great responsibility, and has a normal outlook on life, a positive character that is in line with reality. There are no all kinds of bloody plots, such as the loop of beating the young and the old, the plot of various women throwing themselves into each other's arms, etc. It's quite novel and overall worth seeing.