This is a world where the strong prey on the weak. The vast universe is filled with endless opportunities, but also countless abysses. Li Ke rises from an utterly average underachiever to become Earth’s top mecha pilot. But that’s still not enough. He must venture out among the stars and into a far wider world. Family, friendship, and love: he needs them all…
After reading a few chapters, I feel that it's okay. It's the author. Punctuation marks are free and you can use more punctuation marks, such as player + name +: "(player's words)", and then the paragraphs can be divided into more points. Well, that's all for now Please add a comment. Author, you can rearrange the layout and put some of what you want to say in (), otherwise it will look too awkward. I read Chapter 13 and it feels a bit bland, and the protagonist develops too quickly.