The first eighty chapters are okay, but the rest are not well written, so don't worry about the too watery parts.
It's over, here's to a new book.
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As a ninja who traveled through time and became the Uzumaki clan, the starting system is gone. Uzumaki Maple Forest can only rely on the dropped novice gift package Menma template to continue to develop.
Facing oncoming dangers and enemies, sorry.
"This is a parting gift!"
"Big Spiral Yu!"
Reader comments
Xixi, author Sang, your works are very good. I hope you can write well. We will not treat you badly.
The update is very stable, with five chapters updated daily [Learned]
It's pretty good so far, I'll have to wait and see for the later stages.
It's barely okay, but it gets more and more boring as you get to the back.
Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, and Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years. Yuwen Tuo has waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng has waited for Xie Ling for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, and White Snake has waited for Xu Xian waited for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yushu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a man was lying weakly on the bed. His face was pale, but the corners of his mouth were trembling slightly. Tears shone in the corners of his eyes. He murmured in a hoarse voice: "Don't forget to update..."
To be honest, the first part is okay, but there are some problems in the second part, which makes the whole book not rated very high. It is recommended to read the first half, and you can read the rest at will. I hope the author can publish a new book, I'm looking forward to it
It's okay. I feel like the main character is a bit old.
Where has the nine-faced Su Po Ke gone?
It's a bit flawed for me... But still okay [eating melon]
(So keep your heart in mind [laughing evilly])
The writing is quite good, and it can be updated, five chapters a day, but I wouldn't mind if you can add more [please update]
The overall feeling is quite good. It is one of the few novels about Menma. Although there are still some flaws in some places, it is still very good.
Okay, ok, ok.
It's just so-so, I can see it but I don't know how old the main character is. . .
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Very good very good
It's so short but very pretty.
There's no point in going back to hiding your identity.
It's pretty good, but the heroine's storyline is a bit weird. It's rare to see a book about noodles, please keep reading [Chigua]
Fortunately, it just feels a bit bland. It feels like the protagonist has been resting on his laurels without any direction to improve his strength. Well, come on.
Xixi, author Sang, your works are very good. I hope you can write well. We will not treat you badly.
The update is very stable, with five chapters updated daily [Learned]
It's pretty good so far, I'll have to wait and see for the later stages. It's barely okay, but it gets more and more boring as you get to the back.
Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, and Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years. Yuwen Tuo has waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng has waited for Xie Ling for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, and White Snake has waited for Xu Xian waited for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yushu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a man was lying weakly on the bed. His face was pale, but the corners of his mouth were trembling slightly. Tears shone in the corners of his eyes. He murmured in a hoarse voice: "Don't forget to update..."
To be honest, the first part is okay, but there are some problems in the second part, which makes the whole book not rated very high. It is recommended to read the first half, and you can read the rest at will. I hope the author can publish a new book, I'm looking forward to it
It's okay. I feel like the main character is a bit old.
Where has the nine-faced Su Po Ke gone?
It's a bit flawed for me... But still okay [eating melon] (So keep your heart in mind [laughing evilly])
The writing is quite good, and it can be updated, five chapters a day, but I wouldn't mind if you can add more [please update]
The overall feeling is quite good. It is one of the few novels about Menma. Although there are still some flaws in some places, it is still very good.
Okay, ok, ok.
It's just so-so, I can see it but I don't know how old the main character is. . .
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Very good very good
It's so short but very pretty.
There's no point in going back to hiding your identity.
It's pretty good, but the heroine's storyline is a bit weird. It's rare to see a book about noodles, please keep reading [Chigua]
Fortunately, it just feels a bit bland. It feels like the protagonist has been resting on his laurels without any direction to improve his strength. Well, come on.