Wolf Heart Crazy Play

I don't want to say that this content is a bit too straightforward. It's the same as the reading draft. It's all from a third-party perspective and the narration is explaining something. It's too discouraging. Moreover, I read the plot of the first few chapters and I don't even know what I'm writing. After writing more than 800,000 words, only two or three people commented. This is a problem with the plot of the novel and the way it is written. If you want to explain the settings or something, it's best not to write them out in a straightforward way, but to insert them through dialogue, which is more natural and makes the plot more interesting. Or you can write a separate chapter to write about these settings, and you don't know what type of novel this is from the beginning. I can't even figure out what this is. Whether I am writing about the background or the plot, I just wrote a lot of it, and fell into the trap of a new author. Let's put it this way. The content of this novel is boring and dull, just like a running account. The main line is not clear and obvious. There are too few descriptions. It is just explaining. It is difficult for people to imagine the picture and lacks a sense of substitution. Just like the documentary, I have read more than 4,000 hours of novels and summed up some experiences. The text and sentences are too dull and unvivid. AI can really be used to polish them, and I can modify the words based on my own understanding. There must be more dialogue in the plot, and the words must be more life-like. It must be combined with the background in the novel to adjust the tone. To adjust the tone, if you want to introduce the background, you can explain it vaguely through the dialogue between the protagonist and other secondary characters. This will not make the background content too boring. Like writing about villains, you can switch between multiple perspectives, from small characters to middle management to upper-level rule. For example, Explain it from the perspective of a civilian. For example, if you directly say "this villain is very bad", it will definitely not be as vivid as "passers-by say, 'he bullies us every day. However, write more about what happened to the protagonist during his lifetime, and then pick up the plot. If you really want to write it, you can use the first chapter to write about the causes and consequences of why the protagonist traveled through time, design coincidences, add dialogue, add description, use less narration, and I can't see what the title is about. The title needs to be changed, such as "Return" Although a title like "I was born to be the patron saint of wolves in another world" is not so elegant, such a novel will attract readers. Compared with those written by Wen Zou Zou, it is a minefield that new authors must not touch. Those kinds of titles require a certain writing background and an audience of readers before they can write. It is difficult to start from scratch.

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