The Opening Mark [Wedge] Creates a New World of Ninjutsu

Damn it, it's so beautiful, it's not enough. Please update more.

Not bad [like], it looks good [cool], but the update is a bit slow, you need to work hard [strike hard], prepare more and save the manuscript [working on it], don't stop updating, otherwise it will be uncomfortable again [grievance]... [Like post] [please update]

The idea is quite good, I like this one. In the early stage, the main purpose is to seize supplies, which will be used to distribute war dividends to all Sand Shadows. There is nothing wrong with this idea. I still need to comment, because I'm afraid the author won't have the motivation to update suddenly, so I'd like to show that people are still reading [Like] Come on, author, and write well.

Come on. Now I like to read fanfics about other villages. The streets of Konoha are in ruins.

Very good, the protagonist has his own understanding and resourcefulness

So far, it can be said that there is nothing wrong with this book. In terms of plot, rhythm and logic, it can be read. It is already a very good Naruto fan novel in Tomato.

Let me guess who the heroine is. The heroine must be Gaara!

Yes, it's a good book about other villages in Naruto

It's pretty good to watch, and it's well written and recommended. I just hope there aren't too many female protagonists in the back.

Come on! Among Naruto books, this book is also a good read.

It's still relatively good-looking, but it also has flaws, but my interest in the plot development allows me to endure it, and I hope it will be updated quickly. It would be nice if there were not so many female characters who have some strange feelings towards the protagonist. I am very worried that they will suddenly become a harem and affect the development of the main plot. I just want to see the strength, power and career development of the protagonist.

I have read a lot of Naruto books, all of which traveled to the Konoha family, which is not interesting. This one, the little brother of Sand Shadow, is getting bigger and stronger step by step, creating new glory. It is more interesting, but there are too few updates. I hope the author will update it.

Although there are many Naruto fans, it is still rare for a village to develop as a shadow. So far, it feels very good and very interesting. I hope the author will update it more. [Top post]

Overall, it looks pretty good, but when I talk about the reason why Uchiha doesn't appear on the battlefield later, I think there's something wrong. It's because Konoha doesn't let them go on the battlefield, it's not that they don't want to go on the battlefield. The more people this group of Uchiha lunatics died on the battlefield, the more serious they became. Pink eye disease broke out. Konoha wanted to control the number of their Sharingan evolutions, so they were not allowed to go to the battlefield. We need to waste them on the guards in the village and let them have conflicts with the people in the village.

Get Orochimaru over, change the technology, and study thoroughly what kind of blood stains you need, or research a nuclear bomb, use a seal scroll to bring it into Konoha and detonate it. No one can withstand the tens of millions of degrees of heat, Konoha will be directly vaporized, and those who survive will also be radiated [smile]

For a record, it scored 6.9 When added to the bookshelf Now 7.0 A book whose score does not match its quality. If it scores nine points someday, come and poke me [eating melon] So far, the protagonist is rational, has a clear purpose in doing things, has a correct outlook on life, and the story is logical. I recommend reading it. What I'm more worried about is the start of Kazekage. The initial combat power is too high, making it difficult to write subsequent content. If the quality remains the same as in the early stage, I will keep following up for updates. Five stars

From a niche perspective, it is indeed a bit risky, but from the perspective of subsequent writing, the author's writing style and conception are quite excellent. It is an excellent work in the Naruto genre and is worth reading. And he is not too obsessed with his own cultural and creative world. He knows how to set up foreshadowing, find freshness, add charming female characters and other content that meets the public's preferences. The rationality and high-altitude perspective of the protagonist Luo Sha can be seen in the author's calmness and deep rationality in writing. The author's background in the original work is not bad either, and he deserves to have a lot of experience. However, adding pirate content to Naruto-type works makes it more than just adventure. As a simple reader, I can understand and even like the author's informal moves to make the article more interesting and readable. But from the perspective of a critic, I'm afraid that this "innovation" will definitely bring about negative reviews, so I won't go into details. In conclusion, I still have great support for the author, and in terms of quality, conception and readability, this work is a rare masterpiece. Five-star praise, go for it author! ! [Like] ps: If you want to mix it with other well-known works, you may need to inform readers in advance that it cannot be used as a creative idea alone, otherwise the evaluation of critics and fans of the original work may become harsh.

I can only say that it is much better than other Naruto fans. It looks like it has some minor problems, but it's not a big problem.

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As a Hokage, it makes sense to have two more wives, right? , Jingu + Yecang, it's no problem to accept it. What happened to the decades of tiredness and enjoyment [Chigua]

Books, you really want to read them at the time, but if you keep them on the bookshelf, you won't take a look at them. So, if you have any manuscripts saved, send them all out. If you don't have any, please take a few days off to finish coding them all 24 hours a day. Don't worry, you won't die if you don't sleep for a few days and nights. I've tried it for you.

It feels very good, there are no bad points, I look at things from the perspective of a movie, and being able to directly see the reminder means that it is really good, at least for me, it is worth watching.

The early stage is still a relatively good start.

The author's writing is very good, just don't finish it badly.

It's okay, you still need to pay attention to the details. There is a saying above that it is better to put the icing on the cake than to provide help when the time is right. This thing is inserted into the Naruto. No matter how you look at it, it is strange.

The book is not bad, and it has something new among the repetitive Naruto fanfics. But how can you read the author's works without looking like a eunuch? Hope it can be completed successfully.

Finally, it's not about Konoha. It's very interesting. Keep up the hard work.

This novel is really good among Tomato's Naruto novels, and it's at the food level among Tomatoes. This last setting is a bit strange

It's pretty good. Although there are some signs of having more female protagonists so far, there is still no actual action. I hope there won't be more female protagonists.

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