HP：留学后和魔药教授he了

It's beautiful and interesting. The only unpleasant point is that the heroine always wanted to be sorted into Hufflepuff, but Dumbledore intervened and she was sorted into Gryffindor. It's really good to watch. The updates are stable and almost never interrupted (only once in my memory). The storyline is also very interesting and quite fresh. Personally, I think the only highlight is that I went to Gryffindor. Apart from this, I really don't think there is any problem. When I look at it later, I feel that the match between the heroine of the Lion House and the Snake King is also quite wonderful, a combination of Chinese and Western, a lion-snake alliance. After all, Snape wanted to mess with the Gryffindor troll every day, and ended up falling in love with a Gryffindor. If you are not particularly surprised by the point I mentioned before, I still recommend that you read the following.

It's good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The oriental heroine written by the author has the feeling of an Eastern monk. After all, we Easterners have seen a lot. Although we have never seen anything in the West, we know everything about it and we won't be impulsive when dealing with some problems. It's good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

So far, it is the best book that combines fantasy and HP, and the cp is Snape without OOC. The portrayal of other people is also more respectful of the original work without too many filters. It makes sense for Si Jiao to fall in love with the female protagonist later on. People like ss who pursue power can only escape from Lily's shadow by this kind of dimensionality reduction attack. I'm really looking forward to the emotional scenes that follow.

Overall, it's good, the writing is good, and the character's personality is okay, but there is one thing that may be a thunder. [At least I was completely beaten by thunder.] The heroine has so many foreshadowings in the previous chapters and has been saying she wants to enter Hufflepuff. However, in Chapter 20, the Sorting House ignores the heroine's opinion and directly goes to Gryffindor [The Sorting Hat can't see through the heroine before asking for her opinion, but in the end she doesn't listen] I don't reject the Gryffindor heroine, I just want to enter Gryffindor, and there are so many Hufflepuffs ahead of me. Okay, I'm just writing this down to avoid thunder for those who are angry. If you don't mind, this book is still very interesting.

The perfect heroine, but I can't stand it anymore. Let's talk about the advantages: the heroine is really a guiding friend + a guiding lover. She is tolerant but has a bottom line, and is sophisticated but not slick. It can be seen that the author really loves the three little ones, and it has also solved many misunderstandings and disagreements caused by various reasons in the original work. Their understanding and guidance are just right, and they look very warm. Let's talk about what I don't like: the protagonist has no personal growth. It can be seen that the author loves the heroine very much and gave her a good growth environment. She is a very perfect girl, so this leaves the character with very little room for growth. The fun part is mainly concentrated in the plot part where she helps and guides the three little animals and Si Jiao, so when the story deviates from the main line, the farming part becomes a bit thin, because there is no difficulty. Another thing that I can't understand (only for me personally!!!) Is that the protagonist is still too young. Her interpersonal relationships and behavior are very measured and mature, which is very different from her immature appearance in her teenage years. I can't even stomach this pair of cps because she's too young. Although the plot makes Si Jiao younger, there is no spark in the relationship between the two (for me personally). Does anyone understand the energy? It's not there yet. At the same time, because of her cute and real side, the protagonist is a better match for Draco in my opinion (just my personal opinion!) I think you can watch it if you like farming and feel sorry for Sri Lanka (the preference is all obvious). You can also watch it if you like this heroine. Generally speaking, it's not a loss to invest in.

This is definitely the best HP I've ever seen! I really like this hp. This is the only one with a heroine who won my heart💓. She takes the initiative to help others but does not make people feel embarrassed. She is cheerful and warm but does not hurt others. She is sincere and kind but will not be manipulated by others. There is no other hp at all. Such duplicity, Holy Mother, nosy and other bad thoughts and behaviors are not consistent. I did not deliberately lick the trio and the professor, and I did not self-righteously do good for others. I completely relied on my own efforts to drive the people around me to be willing to take the initiative to get closer, follow my heart, and never force or point. So far, the sense of proportion has been grasped very well, it is too strong, it is very comfortable to watch, I really yearn for it [Sending Hearts], and it handles the worldly affairs very well and I admire it. It is worthy of Taoist culture. The most important thing is that the heroine has a lot of things to do of her own and has her own career. I really like the heroine to focus on herself! ! ! I won't put most of my thoughts on love. Although this is a CP novel, I think it will be more attractive to develop more plot lines. It is full of interesting information! Awesome! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] It's not enough [crying] It's not enough at all [crying] [crying] It's like I finished reading the book just after I opened it [crying] [crying] [crying]

It is an interesting novel, the characters are reasonable, and the interaction between the heroine and the professor is very promising. Especially the plot of the battle of wits and courage is quite exciting. Unfortunately, it is not finished yet, and it is a bit heart-breaking to wait for it to happen.

The writing is good, it doesn't humiliate women, the plot is interesting, and it is very comfortable to watch. The author is well aware of Aunt Luo's cold humor and poisonous tongue, and the writing style is very close to the original work, which made me extremely happy to read it. The heroine is well portrayed, a little sun who grew up in love, but is smart and knowledgeable about the world, has great strength, and is also very cute. Who doesn't like it, and I like it too. The setting descriptions of the two systems of magic and immortality are very detailed, as well as the detailed explanations of alchemy, potions and herbalism. The setting monsters will enjoy it. Regarding the management of the farm, the writing is not at all perfunctory, it is really running a farm! Original capital accumulation, capital turnover, animal and plant breeding, sales, technical issues, personnel recruitment, confidentiality, and crisis public relations are all covered, which is very surprising. Although there is a cp, the cp is still Snape, but because of the strong writing power, I have to say that the emotional line is very well written. Snape's character is very considerate. The core "ambition" and "self-suffering" of this character are described by the author very, very well. If you like watching Snape, this is it... Snape A series of issues about Pu - age difference, being a Death Eater, eavesdropping on the prophecy that led to Lily's death, the promise to protect Harry, the dead White Moonlight - the author did not avoid these issues, and used a lot of pen and ink to describe them, gradually bridging the gap between the two people. In addition, the relationship between the heroine and Snape is not the traditional "sunshine girl uses love to influence the old man" narrative. Jiang Jiang is very good in her own right, and she loves herself the most. The relationship line is very low, and the two people use each other's process from being friends to being ambiguous. They are evenly matched in terms of intelligence. And it was Snape who first confirmed his feelings and confessed his past. So for me, a person who is very picky about CP, this emotional line can be said to be completely harmless! There is also a single arrow of Draco, which is also very well written (Xiaolong, a kid with a unicorn wand core can be so bad🥺), and it turns out that if the writing is good, you can do whatever you want! I don't understand the single arrow of the black dog. Maybe it's because Sirius really liked the days when he was a dog herding. Due to the number of female characters in the original work, there are not many female characters in this article, but it can be seen that the author is very careful and writes with a lot of love and blessings. It writes about Hermione's intelligence, kindness, and decisiveness, and gives Mrs. Weasley the opportunity to make money... In addition, it also arranges a more reasonable elf liberation movement, giving Dobby, Winky, and Kreacher a better ending.

It's really touching, you can't stop watching it! ! ! Come on, madam! ! ! The way the heroine and Sri Lanka get along is also very interesting to me! There is no OOC in Sri Lanka, I love it! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

If there is no cp, what a beautiful book it is. It's really beautiful, but forgive me for accepting the age difference of incompetence. It's my own problem. I don't accept men who have had White Moonlight in the world of novels [face covering]. But the writing of this book is really good and the story is good. Unfortunately, I can't accept that the heroine is only 13 years old. I have a cp with Snape. Whether it's about growing up or not, I accept incompetence [laughing] I don't think it matters. I recommend reading this book. The character is basically normal and the logic is good.

This is the best Sri Lankan fan fiction I have ever read. Snape here has higher strength and is more confident. The key is that he can directly express his love when he has a mouth. Because Jiang is his student, he has always been very restrained, not daring to reach out and hug him back when Jiang hugs him. Sometimes he would secretly be jealous, and he would welcome and reject others, and he would be abstinent and seductive at the same time. The heroine has both high intelligence and is good at playing straight. She has a clear goal and has her own career. It is a love that is evenly matched. It is very easy to watch. There are no bloody misunderstandings. The pull of each other in love is so sweet that it does not make people feel tired. It makes people feel pink bubbles popping up in their hearts.

The heroine is very good, her character is also very good, the collision between Chinese and Western cultures is also very good, the characterization is also good, not too OOC, but I feel that I have been saying to go to the Badger Yard, and suddenly I was "forced" to go to the Lion Yard. I was really shocked, and I went to the Lion Yard with the CP of the Sri Lankan Education Office. Ahhhh, you can quit if you can't stand it. Just keep watching if you can. It's still very good to watch.

Nice! Although there are already many fanfics about this Oriental student studying abroad, the setting in the article is very novel! The heroine's character is also very likable. I think the fusion of Tao and magic is well interpreted without feeling too disconnected. Anyway, I like it very much!

It's good-looking, good-looking, really interesting. I think our countrymen are like this. I really like the heroine. I feel that the others are also very real and not OOC. In short, it's good-looking.

Character design: Although the heroine is only 13 years old in the early stage, due to her own experience (original background, sect responsibilities, various responsibilities, the author handles it very well, without the clichés of ordinary novels), her behavior will be more detached. I personally feel that it is also possible that the heroine was born in the Tao of Immortality, and the education she received since childhood is similar. Although she is a detached person, her character can be clearly seen through the author's description, which is more childlike than she should be at her age. The author's control of the characters is very good. Many such characters will be shaped by the author into mentally retarded babies who are expert in handling important matters one moment and curious about everything the next. This heroine is undoubtedly excellent and lovely, and she has a strong and attractive soul. Lingmu feels like the dawn, like the grain rain falling thinly in the valley, refreshing but not cold. Ooc: One thing to say is that the characters in this story are very close to the original work in HP that I have read, especially Snape. At first, he looked down upon the heroine, uh,,, but in the middle period, he became a simple partner for mutual benefit, and then in his heart, he regarded him as a confidant? I don't know if this is the right way to describe it. The author's description of the whole process is smooth and coherent, and it doesn't feel abrupt. You will also think that if there is a spiritual mu, Snape will indeed develop like this (this is my personal opinion!!!! If you disagree!!! Please ignore me!! Fork it! Thank you) As for what will happen to Snape in the later stage, I am still waiting for it, hahahahahaha Plot: The plot has a long-flowing rhythm with no nonsense, which I personally like. Hahahahahahaha. It doesn't create suspense at points already known to the audience. This really struck a chord with me! And the whole plot is about Lingmu, telling the daily life of Lingmu in school, the daily life of farming and making a fortune, and the slow and detailed candy, hahahahahaha, very appetizing! Summary: This is a rare HP fanfic, and the author is awesome!

If I could only read one HP fanfic by Sri Lankan CP in my life, I would choose this one without hesitation. It is full of laughs, logical and consistent with the original work. It can be seen that the author has certain writing skills. Even though I came to read it for the purpose of teaching CP, I was still so amused by the funny plot in the article that I rolled on the bed and was so happy. As a person who has a very low tolerance for OOC and childish writing, he still relies on the CP of Sri Lankan religion and the sub-generation. Putting these conditions together, it can be said that I deserve to be hungry and deprived of food for more than ten years after watching "HP". I have read all the well-known books, but it is difficult to avoid the "old man on the subway looking at his mobile phone" plot. Later, I simply retreated and let myself go. This book was recommended to me by Tomato for some reason, probably because the last book I read was a Western fantasy. I am extremely glad that I clicked on it, because this book is one of the least OOC descendant novels I have ever read. It can be seen that the author has thought of many ways to make up for the age gap, and the two did not cross the line of close interaction before graduation and adulthood. The relationship developed naturally. They could also kiss the heroine x other people's CP before adulthood, including but not limited to Hermione and Draco. In my opinion, the author tried his best to follow the plot of the original work but change many of the tragedies of the original work, so that many childhood regrets can be rationally resolved and invisible. I couldn't help but sigh with satisfaction. I stayed up several late nights and took almost a week to finish reading it. The author was indispensable for this - the author liked to reply to paragraphs of comments too much and was so funny. If he missed a joke, wouldn't it cost me 5 yuan less to read? Although this book is still being serialized, the plot has advanced to the point where Si Jiao and the protagonist are together, and my expectations before entering the trap have been satisfied. Readers who are waiting can enter the trap as soon as possible. Let me say something ugly: even if the author stops updating, the current story is full enough, making us believe that if there are any twists and turns in the future, the heroine and the others can easily overcome them and bring the story to a perfect end. What's more, the author is really overly diligent and frequently updates more than once a day. Come and join the team! ! ! Don't make me beg you! ! ! Summary: It's fun to watch, it fits the original plot, it's logical, there's no obvious OOC, your emotions go naturally, and you won't lose money if you invest in it. After three brushes, the more I look at it, the more I see it. It has been almost a year since I last read this book. It has really effectively cured my regrets about Sri Lanka since childhood. This is the meaning of fandom...! The character design of the heroine is also very good. Although I have seen some people saying that Sijiao is not worthy of the heroine, for me, saying so is too much. It should be that the author regretted it after reading it and felt that Si Jiao was a very good person, so he created such a good heroine. But I agree that the heroine can live a good life wherever she goes. This is how grown-up women should be. [Love]

Nice! Highly recommended hp sub-generation! CP Snape and the Chinese students who cultivate immortality! I think this configuration is absolutely amazing. The author is such a genius. How could he come up with such a suitable pair? To put it bluntly, Snape's situation is that he is not strong enough. There is a big age gap between him and the two bosses, so he has to be restricted and used by them. As long as he is strong enough, no one can force him to work! ! ! And this book is very rare in that it does not ignore Snape's own subjectivity! Many HP fanfics, as long as they are about Snape's CP, basically focus on redemption and love. This is not a mistake. It is true that Snape lacks love, otherwise he would not be able to forget his only kindness in his youth. However, Snape's choices were all chosen by him on his own initiative. Although he actually did not have many choices, whether he followed Voldemort, snitched, protected Harry, betrayed, etc., It was all his own choices. His subjective initiative was really ignored by many people. This book really shows that Snape is a very tough person with a very strong heart. He really does not need others to redeem him. He has his own choices and thoughts. What he really needs is to satisfy himself and realize his self-worth. The heroine of this book, she teaches Snape how to improve his strength and breaks the situation very well. After completing self-redemption and realizing self-worth, there is love. My favorite HP Snape cp article is none other than you!

Nice! The heroine has high martial arts and is quirky, so cute! Family members, you can imagine that this is actually a true farming article! Opening a farm next door to Hogwarts, who else?

The sweetest and most satisfying fanfic I have ever read. The heroine is really very individual and independent. She needs a career-oriented heroine (shout out) The Eastern and Western power systems written by the author are also well integrated, and the details and structure are perfect and very healing. Although the heroine is a student, she is really equal to Si Bao. The pull between the two is really interesting, and Si Bao really shows the charm of a reliable adult man. Reliability is really important! From the initial friendship to love (although it has not yet arrived), the rhythm is really good. Both parties have a long talk on important issues. They are a super efficient duo who make money and do things. And it is not written for the sake of emotional drama. The emotional lines in it are slow and few. The friendship in the early stage is purely two-way, mainly the heroine's career line. The heroine Jiang's character is really great, a rare divine text! Everyone go and see it! ! !

I have been following the author's updates and looking forward to new content every day. The intervention of metaphysical forces different from the wizarding world has changed the "bad luck" that will appear in the world of Harry Potter. The existence of Seventeen is a new force. Stones from other mountains can attack jade. I believe that not only Harry will have a happy ending. In the ending, every flesh-and-blood peace-loving wizard🧙‍♂️ can live in a world without fear and oppression. With such emotions, I am very much looking forward to the author's next creation. Although I am familiar with the content of Harry Potter, there are still surprises every day [Like][Like][Like][Like] I gave it four stars because I saw some book friends saying that giving it a perfect score would be bad [laughing]

I have watched it 5.6 Times. The heroine is very charming and has her own personality and principles. She will not be a good person. Severus' adaptation was very logical and natural, not OOC. Many of the confusing ideas in the original text are fulfilled here. After reading this novel, I feel like they are living happily somewhere in the world. How wonderful! I have read a lot of similar articles and basically abandoned them. I always feel that although Severus is arrogant and arrogant, he is soft to the people he really likes. Many articles have always portrayed him as tsundere and willful, which is not to my taste. This article really hit my sweet spot! ! Full marks 💯! ! Put him in a separate category, take it out and take a look if you have nothing to do [laughs][laughs]

I just finished writing a book review To be honest, I was still in a daze when I saw the end of this book. I started following it last year. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the young couple is sweet and at ease. (How can there be such a beautiful book in the world!) The first thing I do when I get home from get out of class every day is to see if the millionaire has been updated. I'm really looking forward to the day. Although the update has been interrupted a few times, fortunately it has been successfully completed. (This is what I ended up using the small one after I lost my large size) I swiped it several times in the middle, and it's really super, super, super pretty [laughing] The ending is HE, I'm really looking forward to the big extra [shy]

Tied! Mrs. Sugar, hurry up, I want to watch [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] The heroine's character is very attractive, and the overall story framework is also very good. It has its own ideas and doesn't deviate too much from the original work. It's well worth reading! The female protagonist cp Sijiao. I think there is no absolute good or bad in every novel that can be called a work. Most of the characters in HP have shortcomings and advantages. As for the age difference between the personal trainer and the heroine, don't worry about it. Both wizards and practitioners live much longer than ordinary people! The image of the Sri Lankan teacher was later changed by the heroine's potion. Don't replace the old man with deep wrinkles in the drama, just use the young Sri Lankan teacher! But there are not many emotional lines now, after all, the heroine is still a student. The image of the three little ones is also very consistent! The heroine and Hermione are best friends! I also think Hermione is a very good woman! Smart, brave, hard-working, a woman among women! I have read several hp fanfics in the past two days, but the ones written by my wife are still my favorite, the ones without any surprises! The only bad thing is that they are not finished [crying] I would like to make some small suggestions. I hope that when the two teachers and the heroine are together, the heroine will take the more active role. Because I think Sri Lanka is a bit like an old man with low self-esteem (in relationships), and he must be embarrassed. And selfishly, I like to see boys blushing when they are embarrassed [Note] [Note] Don't criticize me for my personal opinion.

It is a very rare HP fan work that can balance and integrate the Eastern and Western backgrounds. It not only gives the heroine a relatively strong identity background, but also does not make the plot boring due to the dark lord. Based on this alone, I feel that the author must have put in a lot of effort. With the long word count and size, the interesting thing about this novel is that it respects the original character settings, including personality and behavioral motivations. Therefore, this fanfic can make people feel that the arrival of the heroine did affect the development of things, but because of the reasonable logic, people naturally accept the changes in the plot. Dumbledore was still carefully weighing the pros and cons, and the friendship between the three little ones was still close in the quarrel, but fortunately nothing bad happened. The people who died were alive and well, and the people who originally put up all the spikes finally took off their guard. Therefore, in fact, it still has a bit of a cool novel, at least the plot progress is relatively relaxed and enjoyable. So overall, this is a good work both as a portrayal of Snape's CP (I'm here for this) and as a HP fanfic.

It's so beautiful. The author's writing is really good. The relationship between two people gradually develops. Each character in it has its own shining point. I don't criticize anyone. It's really pertinent and harmonious. Even some calculations are really reasonable. It makes everyone's character arc shine. Although I haven't caught up with the latest serialization yet, they are just friends. But a friend who gives a little sincerity is really good for Sri Lanka. It feels great to be trusted and needed. I'm looking forward to the unfolding of the love line. I don't know if I will start to understand it after I become an adult. I watched it for the love drama. I like to see the protagonist unconditionally prefer him. I am really touched to see that even if there is no sign of love now (in addition, readers who asked for a male protagonist and no male protagonist should not read it. This is originally a cp novel of Sri Lanka. Although I see that the charm of the heroine is really great now, I love her so much. She is already an independent individual and not a tool that appears to redeem Sri Lanka. But I still don't like to see other people criticizing Sri Lanka in CP articles! ) The author's writing style is really good. It's the most comfortable book I've ever read. I have to click on almost every paragraph to see how the comment section is. Hahahaha, please give me a boost! ! ! ! I have been keeping it for a long time and I am ready to see how I find out that I have stopped updating for more than a month. I am taking supplements, supplements, supplements.

To be honest, the chapters I have seen so far are quite good overall, especially the early stage. They are very consistent with the setting of the original work, and the appearance of the heroine as a Chinese overseas student, and the integration of the two world views and settings are not abrupt. However, as the plot progresses, the gradual changes in the emotional line make me feel a little OOC. I don't know what will happen in the future. At present, sometimes I feel that Snape does not look like Snape. Just... Not like the Snape of the younger generation? But it does not affect the fact that this is indeed the best Snape fanfic I have seen on Tomato so far.

It's really good to watch, and it's worth 9.5 Points or more. The first HP I read, I fell straight into it, and then I read other ones, and I haven't found anything comparable to it. The overall strength is very strong, the narrative ability, and the characterization, especially the characterization. Si Jiao has no OOC at all, and at the same time, there are some details that make him very attractive. The character of the heroine is invincible. I like it very much and is very plump. The other characters have their own characteristics and have their own highlights. The later stage is very sweet and generous. I love watching it.

After reading it, the only feeling in my heart was, how good it is! Everyone finally has such a happy ending [almost crying]. This fanfic is the only one that I can read that has the plot of Huaxia and HP. The character of Severus is handled very well here, there is no OOC in the whole process, and his restraint, contradictions, etc. Are all very well written. Jiang Jiang's character is also very good. He is the kind of person who doesn't hold back what he says, doesn't hold back his anger, and resolves conflicts when they arise. When I first watched it, I would be angry at some of the plots, but later on, Jiang Jiang's temperament and approach of not taking any advantage made me very happy to watch it. In this book, Jiang Jiang has never been the "nanny" of the trio. She will act on the basis of "interests" and is very free and easy. And the author also handled the plot very well when dealing with Harry's past relationship with Severus and Sirius Lupine. At the same time, this is the only HP fanfic I have read so far where there is hope for Neville's parents to be cured. For such a long article, the plot does not collapse, and the logical line is very clear and clear. All in all, Sev was finally firmly chosen. Jiang Jiang fell in love with Snape, who had a gentle background after experiencing the contradictions of darkness and betrayal. Jiang Jiang deserved Sif's warm and eternal love, and Sif also lived up to Jiang Jiang's trust and warm love. Finally, I really, really hope that Jiang Jiang and Xifu will be happy forever! !

It's wonderful. In fact, I haven't read Harry Potter. I basically read it as a new book, but the big writing style did not affect my understanding of this book. In fact, at first I read this book because of its setting, which attracted me. The more I read, the more addicted I became. I really like the character of the heroine in this book, but I don't know how to describe it... The relationship between Si Jiao and the heroine is also very well written. I like this kind of gradual relationship, and I also like the evenly matched love. Finally, I would like to ask the author, in how many chapters will this book end? It's getting more painful to chase day by day. I want to read it again after I finish writing it.

The plot is reasonable, and the heroine's character is really good. I really want her to be beautiful alone. The professor is secretly jealous when he sees the 14-year-old heroine getting along with Harry. Accepting the incompetence [crying] [crying] [crying] I really hope the author writes a cp-free one [crying] [crying] A 14-year-old girl and a professor in his thirties really can't stand each other [crying] [crying] [crying]