Death Begins at School

The first point, I think, is that the path of non-cultivation will lead nowhere. At the very least, let the male and female supporting characters and the like improve their physical strength. Even if the props are powerful, they are still foreign objects. Moreover, one of the shortcomings of this article is that the protagonist likes He likes to borrow props from others, even to people close to him, even if he only has one prop or the like (for example, in the opening chapter, where he borrowed props to escape the murderous maniac, the protagonist only had one prop and borrowed it from others, but the four people who entered were all wiped out. The tool was also lost in the escape, and then the protagonist group went to participate, and unexpectedly found the lent prop. The protagonist's aura was a bit too much, and as a ghost, he was provoked by a little Karami with the prop, but the prop was not destroyed by it), at least let the protagonist group take it As the physical strength or force increases, the ghost game can't just be between people and ghosts. What's more terrifying is the game between people. The force is not worth it, and it is impossible to survive. There may be people who are beyond the ranks of ordinary people. It is not easy to grab the props of the protagonist group. The second point that needs attention is to reduce the halo of the protagonist. Sixty to seventy percent of a game is completed by the protagonist alone. The rest of the protagonist group has a low sense of presence and is not worth watching. The third point is that I would rather recommend a few rules-based ghosts (not rule-based monsters). Compared with other supernatural thriller novels, this article is still readable, but the protagonist has a very strong aura. There can be antique sellers on any street, and they also have props. This can persuade many readers to read it. I suggest you read the relevant Types of books, these are some of the novels that I think are good (No Way to Survive - Night Ghost Whisperer/Despair Classroom - Forgetting Lianchou/Horror Classroom - Forgetting Lianchou/Fatal Impulse - Forgetting Lianchou/Death Homework - Xiaoyao De Xiaoyao/Drifting Classroom - Third Master Zhejiang) Remarkable, needs improvement

Updated to Chapter 83. Chapter 83 is so far good. The male protagonist is smart in his outlook on life. [Working on draft] I'm just a little worried about the next plot. Is this novel going to be a male protagonist or a single female protagonist or a harem? [Grief] The boss in the plot is getting harder and harder to defeat, and there must be more places that require artifacts. The male protagonist may end up with Lan Ying'er, because the artifacts will definitely be tied together. The words of the hero's father must also have existential meaning, similar to the kind of dual cultivation to become stronger. There may be a harem. Unless Shen Mengzhu is Lan Ying'er, I feel that it is most likely to be like this [I'm about to cry] Others say that after a man and woman have experienced many lives and deaths, they become the male and female protagonists. Is Shen Mengzhu the heroine? Is she the only heroine? Is she the male protagonist's only woman? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Hey [I'm about to cry] Again, the author's writing is really good, but I'll leave first [crying] [crying]

Isn't Count Gaurus the big boss in the first part of "Zombie Taoist"? The author must have borrowed the plot from Uncle Ying's work, but it is quite interesting to borrow it here.