Special Forces Fire Phoenix Star Clouds Rise

The author is great, is Tan Xiaolin too rich to be with the God of Thunder [laughing]

Give it a five-star rating to encourage myself [love]

I like it very much. Many of the thoughts in it are the thoughts of normal people. It would be awkward to trust shooting in the drama.

This novel is very well written and has an engaging storyline that makes you want to keep reading. Although it is a little wordy in some places, the writing is generally smooth and the characterizations are vivid, making it well worth reading. Fast update frequency [love]

It's good to watch, the characters and the drama are very relevant, the female characters are particularly good, and the most important thing is to get rid of Ms. Tan, who I hate! ! ! ! ! ! !

Why didn't I realize that Tan Xiaolin was like this when I was watching TV before? Xingxing was better. When I was watching, did I think Lei Zhan would be with Xingxing? I didn't expect to get together with Harley so early. Indeed, who doesn't like a big dog that looks like a loyal dog? When I was watching TV, I didn't expect that Tan Xiaolin was such a person. Xingxing was so awesome. When I watched it, I thought Xingxing would be with Lei Zhan? I didn't expect it to be Harley and Xingxing. Indeed, who doesn't like a loyal and cute big dog?

To be honest, it looks good, but the article is a bit messy and one person is missing. The plot is very good and the character development is okay.

I didn't expect to see a Fire Phoenix fanfic that wasn't embarrassing.

It's really beautiful! I think it's better and more interesting than the original drama

Well, most of them are adapted from the TV series, with slight changes, but some important plots have not been changed, especially Lu Xingyun and Harley, a very enviable couple, the naive Harley and the fair-skinned and beautiful star. I hope everyone can go and see it. I believe it is very good-looking. Chinese people do not lie to Chinese people [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

I like this book very much. I read it word by word. I look forward to the update every day. It is very well written. The content of the story is not exactly the same as that of the TV series. You can see the author's own innovation, which is in line with my expectations for Fire Phoenix fan fiction.

It's very well written, and I'd love to read it. The male protagonist is Harley, who pushed Tan away. Lei Zhan doesn't have a CP, and Shen Lanni's CP is not the original veterinarian. The invention of the stars saved Lei Zhan, and he didn't die, and He Lu didn't end up with Sirius. Overall, it was pretty good.

Kicked Tan Xiaolin out, Ness. When I watched the TV series, I felt that the relationship between her and Lei Zhan was inexplicable. Finally, nothing happened without her.

It's really super good-looking, the author is so sincere, the heroine's character is constantly being strengthened, she has her own cognition and her own firm beliefs. Just like a normal person, she will definitely like some people and dislike some people. I don't believe that there are completely true, good and beautiful people. I feel that the author has portrayed the heroine as a sincere person.

Give Ye Cunxin the entire cp! I really like her when I watch TV! I feel so pitiful for her!

I especially like the articles written in large letters, so please do it! ! ! Damn, after finishing this book, can you write about Soldier Assault CP Yuan Lang? He is so handsome. I like him very much! ! !

I don't know if this book is the author's childhood regret but also my regret. I hope they have a perfect ending. The heroine is really kind, has upright views, and always distributes things equally to her two nephews. She loves the motherland and is loyal to the people. The male protagonist really dotes on the female protagonist. He knows that he can't stop the female protagonist, so he prepares medicine for her injuries and snatches her cervical membrane... In short, it's not a loss to invest in it.

It's really, really good to watch. I've watched this TV series many times, but I still don't understand why Tan Xiaolin and Lei Zhan are together. I hope Lei Zhan is independent, or there is another person who can't accept Tan Xiaolin.

It's nice to see that everyone is happy and adheres to their own bottom line and principles. Moreover, the male and female protagonists did not meet and get together during the selection of the women's special team, but they had already met their parents before the selection and confirmed their relationship.

I think it's very beautiful and very in line with my taste, but it's just too little [I'm about to cry] Can we discuss it? You can send me your manuscript first and let me take a look [Admiration]

The best special effects fanfic, with a fast pace and each character having a distinct personality. Personally, I like Tan Xiaolin's ending. I felt super embarrassed when watching the drama. It's good [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

Sister, write it well. I want to see the plot behind it. Apart from the plot, can there be more romance elements? I want to see love. [Shy] I feel like the author's writing is better than before The plot is not so limited to the original TV series. There is a little derivative plot to show the highlights of the heroine. I feel that it is better than before, and the heroine feels more real. It feels like the psychology of each person is described, so that it can be detailed and penetrate into each person's heart. It makes me feel more integrated when reading the article, instead of feeling strange like before. I hope to continue to work hard in the future, and I am really impressed by the author who will listen to his advice. I hope the author will keep it up, and you must listen to his advice! May 23 It can be said that I went through the security audit with the author. During these three days, the full text was not updated because the author was overhauling the full text. Until now, the traces on the table of contents are still there. Looking at these, I know that the author has changed a lot of content. In fact, I was very touched because during the security review period, the author wrote a notice and told us the reasons for not updating. I feel like she has us readers at heart. I remember there was a date when everyone left messages below, saying they hoped the novel was still around. At that time, I really thought the novel was going to be taken off the shelves. But the author worked hard and passed the security review. Although the recent updates are fewer than before, I often comment below and say: Fish, please update quickly. I like the author's style very much, especially because I have been reading this novel. From March to now, the time is neither long nor short. In fact, it is like watching a child grow up. The author also posts frequently to refer to readers' opinions. She cares about our opinions and is constantly working hard to write this novel well.

So far, I like it. I still prefer this type of novel. The heroine is an original character and can participate in this selection.

It's a good read. It's rare to see a book written about Harley. It's just that the daily updates are a bit lacking. The author could write more. I really like Harley and Little Bee. After finishing this, I will write another Little Bee book [Thinking]

I have read several Fire Phoenix books, and this one is the best, both in terms of plot and characters, and the final ending. Both on TV and in the Fire Phoenix books, I felt that the instructors were too good at pretending, and they knew where to mess up the morale of the army without any skills, so the ending of this book felt like the real ending.

It's good to watch, but some of the words were said by Tan in the play, and it felt too weird to have the heroine say them exactly.

This is a really good book about Fire Phoenix. Some of the unreasonable content in the play has been revised, and the emotional scenes are more natural. What I admire the most is that the author uses spring and autumn writing techniques and a time machine to directly explain the relationship between Xingxing and Harley at the beginning, avoiding the situation where the plot and emotional drama cannot be well balanced in this type of subject matter. I hope the author will continue to work hard and see good works from you in the future.

I like it very much. If you also like Fire Phoenix and how they get along with each other, you can read this article. I think it is very reminiscent of the TV series.

@ @ Kick so-and-so quickly

It satisfied my desire to kick Tan Xiaolin while watching the drama. It really made her stand out and made the captain irrelevant.