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How do you say it looks good? The introduction was like a hook that hooked me. The content is really, really good, and it is completely different from what I thought before about love at first sight, the heroine being a heartthrob, the heroine being uniquely beautiful, and so on. The heroine is very strong. Although her strength is based on her strong spiritual roots, it is also inseparable from the heroine's own efforts. When Xiaofeng comes, just tear the enemy into pieces, don't be too cool. The name of the heroine is not like most heroines nowadays. No matter it is the main protagonist or the minor supporting role, everyone's name has its own charm. I couldn't help but copy it in a small book and look back and forth. How do you come up with such a good name? ! Like, like, like~(^з^)-☆When danger comes, the heroine doesn't need to hide behind her senior brother or anyone else, she can hold up the sky by herself. Here again I would like to express my gratitude to the author. @ A pound of white tea I proclaim you [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] (If there is anything wrong with my above remarks, it is entirely due to my poor Chinese language and poor expression skills. The novel is a really good novel, and the author is a really good author. If you haven't read it yet and have seen my comments, I sincerely invite you to read it)

Xiao CiCi is not a brainless heroine, she is brave and resourceful and can live her life prudently. The male protagonists also have their own characteristics. The author has a good reputation and has completed the work. It's not a loss to join the trap! The master who had been caught in the rain, so he held up an umbrella for his disciples; Senior Brother Rong, who looked like a peacock; Second Senior Brother Mu, a monster with white hair and red eyes; Third Senior Brother Ning, who was cold-faced and warm-hearted. There are also Senior Brother Xie who wants to save his family and friends, Junior Brother Xie who has a deep brotherhood, and elders, senior sisters and junior sisters who have their own characteristics in the sect. Not only is the protagonist outstanding, but the supporting characters are also different. A good work that won't make you lose money on your investment.

The writing is very good and the plot is very attractive. When I saw Chapter 199, I suddenly had a question and wanted to complain. How could a master who was not very capable dare to let his apprentice who was even less capable come out to practice? Problems that arise are all solved by the heroine's lottery and the heroine's chance. The second brother's recklessness is all because of the heroine. Otherwise, the second brother would have died countless times. The first brother and the third brother seem to be invisible and have no sense of existence. The problems encountered at the bottom of the sea are all due to the strength of Phoenix. Apart from the heroine, I don't feel that anyone is growing up along the way. The heroine and the others are completely escorted by their strength, especially the second senior brother. I liked him very much before, but later on he only became reckless, which is a bit sad.

I see Huaichuan Shen Huaichuan, a man who gave up his real name and took his sword as his name I have a sword named "Huaichuan" … It's really good, the character development is really good. The world thought that the Sword Immortal from thousands of years ago had successfully ascended, but they didn't know that he failed to ascend and was trapped in the Mysterious Spirit Prison. By chance, he entered the dream of the heroine, Yun Yici, and since he was the only chance to escape from the predicament, he began to teach her everything he had to offer. A lot of other things happened after that, but because my writing is not good, I can't tell them. One by one, you can feel the awe-inspiring righteousness of this person and his attentiveness to Yun Yici. She accepted his teachings, she continued his light, it was so delicious! ! ! ! Let's talk about the heroine Yun Yici, she is also very good. She has gone through a lot from a smart and lively girl to a reliable leader with a heart for one side. At the same time, there are so many plots that I really can't finish. All in all, this book is really great to read, and all the CPs of the heroine are super easy to read (but there are no obvious arrows at the moment)! The plot is also very well developed, and the characters are also very fleshed out, which is great! My will becomes the trend, and so do I. I want to ride the wind back home, but I am afraid that the towers and jade buildings will be too cold to be high, and the cold to be too high. Dance to figure out the shadow, how does it seem to be in the human world. ——Su Shi's "Shui Tiao Ge Tou"

It is a very interesting article about cultivating immortals, with a super pure flavor of cultivating immortals. There are moments of laughter and tears (these tears are not abuse, but the occasional feeling that things are different and people are different). Unlike other forced guides with systems, the heroine has the ability to make her own choices and is a very tenacious and progressive heroine who pursues strength. Moreover, this guide requires favorability rather than the love value of other guides. The good feelings set in this article are not limited to love, but can be family affection and friendship. The heroine did not deliberately go through the strategy, because the timeline came two hundred years earlier, two hundred years before all the stories began, and her current goal is clearly to cultivate immortality. This is a fairy tale that becomes more and more interesting the more you read it. Each character is well-shaped, and the psychological journey and development trajectory of each character's transformation are very reasonable! It's really, really beautiful! Vocal, I really like the little phoenix stock! Oh my god! Super fragrant. Emperor Zhao didn't understand anything at the beginning, but it would be nice to see each other again after a hundred years of separation! Oh my god! Incredibly fragrant!

Came from far away. I like the author's writing style, which is lighthearted and humorous, but not brainless. Looking forward to Yi Ci's story, come on! [Sending Hearts]

Diving to Fish was moved by the author's stormy update. Let's rate it first. So far, it looks good, and each character's personality can stand up. As for the plot, I won't elaborate on it because it hasn't been developed too much yet. There are no conflicts or contradictions at the moment. The writing style is acceptable. Although it is a joke, it is not clichéd or pretentious. It is not a novice's writing style and it does not make people uncomfortable when reading it. That's it for now, I look forward to the follow-up development, please come on, author. (๑˙ー˙๑)

I really like her very much, I like Ci Ci [send my heart] [send my heart], and my gentle-tempered master [send my heart] [send my heart] who has a great influence on his children, and I also like my beautiful senior brother [send my heart] [send my heart] and the arrogant, cute, and white-haired one. The second senior brother [send my heart] [send my heart], and the third senior brother who is very responsible, cold-faced and warm-hearted [send my heart] [send my heart], and Xie Shiqing [send my heart] [send my heart], and Di Zhao [send my heart] [send my heart], I think I still like him very much when I see him, I think he is quite cute [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The author's writing is very good and the plot is very interesting. Other plots with a favorability system usually have a female protagonist who competes with her and is jealous. The female protagonist is very weak and the male protagonist is strong. But in this book, the male protagonist is very strong and the female protagonist is also very strong. The heroine has also grown from a novice to a boss who can take charge of her own business. She did not rely on others, but relied on her own efforts step by step. Really, this spirit is worth learning. , The heroine's master has slowly learned how to be a master, and the little Phoenix is also slowly improving himself, changing his own ideas, and no longer letting the heroine grow up under his wings. The heroine is also very powerful, smart and brave, and dares not to fight against the will of heaven. Zheng, her senior brothers and sisters are also very good. She treats the people around her sincerely, and the people around her treat her sincerely, and she does not completely rely on the system. This is something I admire very much. The heroine is also really handsome, and every word she says is a golden sentence! ! ! (The above is just my understanding of this book. If you have different opinions, please don't criticize me. And I really like this book. I will finish it soon. I really don't want to finish it. The author should publish a few more books. I've finished reading another book you published. It's very interesting. The author keeps working hard. Can you write more articles about cultivating immortals? I really love reading articles about cultivating immortals, especially the ones you wrote. I won't get bored. I will get tired of other articles about cultivating immortals after reading more than 100 chapters. I have read more than 300 chapters of your Immortal Cultivation article and I still don't feel tired of it. Please, author, I will die without the Immortal Cultivation article. I hope the author can read this comment.) Comparing the pairing of Lei Shen Huaichuan and Yun Yici, Shen Huaichuan is a swordsman who seems to have fallen to the world. He was accidentally tied to the heroine's dream by the system to teach the heroine. Shen Huaichuan is indeed a very good master, but why would anyone take advantage of the pairing of Shen Huaichuan and Yun Yici? I think they are just a master and a disciple who have a relatively good relationship, and I personally don't understand Shen Huaichuan's behavior at all. He is a bit like some female protagonists in some abuse stories. As for the types of abuse stories, I will give you a rough introduction. The specific plot is that the female protagonist has done a lot of things for the male protagonist, but the male protagonist does not know, and the female protagonist does not say anything. If there is something that needs to be opened up, shouldn't we all find a way to solve it together? I had to repair the ladder alone, but in the end the ladder was not repaired, and Yun Yici wanted to find Shen Huaichuan. It was really speechless. I felt a senseless fire when I saw it, and I felt that Yun Yici's feelings for Shen Huaichuan were just like a friend or a master, and there was no love at all. Especially the plot of his cpu Little Phoenix really made me angry. What happened to Little Phoenix's bold pursuit of love? When you were here on the CPU, he said that it would affect Yun Yici and so on. When you took Yun Yici to practice, you still regarded the little Phoenix as a part of the play. Don't you care about other people's feelings? As for Lei Xiaofenghuang, he also changed it later. If you still criticize Xiaofenghuang after he changed it, then I don't know what to say. People will make mistakes sometimes. Xiaofenghuang can just change it after he knows it. Why do you have to ask someone to be perfect when you first meet him? At that age, he was considered young in the demon world. After all, he was born in the demon world and no one taught him anything. He figured out everything by himself. (The above is my understanding of the two characters Shen Huaichuan and Xiao Fenghuang. Of course, this is all my own. Everyone has different visions. It is normal to have different opinions from mine. But please don't criticize me. I am just explaining my point of view.)

More to come. It's really good to watch. The plot is also very good and interesting. Cultivation as an immortal is meant to compete with heaven, so there should be many dangers. Doing nothing would be pointless. The female protagonist is also motivated, strong, upright, and has very positive views. The system also makes the book full of humor. Overall, it is very good.

This book is actually quite good, the characters are quite distinctive, and it is very different from Tomato's brainless immortality novel. I almost missed this good book because of the name. The people in it have very upright views, but there is not much description of the cultivation plot. The writing style and gorgeous sentences are not up to par. There are still some small flaws, but they are not hidden. Overall, it is quite good. I have a few other questions I want to ask. 1. The cultivation system and concepts of this article 2. The previous article said that the heroine has two spiritual roots, but at the end of the book, only the heroine's wind spiritual root was mentioned, and the other spiritual root never appeared. 3. World view

I came from the Hehuanzong book. The books by this author are so interesting. The female protagonist is also very enterprising. The male protagonists are all very unique. It's not enough to read [crying]

I was shocked when I saw it. It has a really magnificent world view. Every character in it has its own meaning. Whether it is a mythical beast or a disciple of another sect, they all shoulder their responsibilities (I choked up when I saw Zhulong, and the phoenix behind). Following Aci's perspective, watching Aci's experience and upgrade, and finally Aci's memory recovery, really shocked my young heart. Four The Great Immortal Artifact is indeed an Immortal Artifact. The mirror in the Demon Realm can be reincarnated three times, which is really awesome. Moreover, the book in the underworld also brings out the story of Ling Huizong. Boss, I will follow you for the rest of my life [almost crying] [almost crying] (Qing Mimi: I like everyone very much. I feel like there should be no fixed CP! I hope the boss can make a special episode for everyone in the end! Sweet and happy young lovers!!)

It's really super, super pretty! !! I came here from Da Dao's previous book, so it's right! The heroine works really hard and becomes stronger step by step. Really, there are not many good books nowadays, and such treasures are not easy to dig out. Let's all see and cherish it.

It's so beautiful, but I don't know if there is a CP. If there is, I hope it is Yun Yici and the second senior brother Mu Yunjian, please🙏🙏🙏 (name the author @pound)

Ah! ! ! I like [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] I really like Master and Ning Tinglan [almost crying] [almost crying] I really like [shy] [shy] [shy] The author's writing style is also very good! Believe me [laughing][laughing][laughing] I swear this is definitely the first good book I saw this year [shy][shy][shy] The heroine has a very upright outlook and the master is very responsible [shy] [shy] Ning Tinglan is also very good [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I just don't like the second senior brother [pinch] [punch] [punch] I think the one named Shen still has his charm [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] I also like it very much [shy] [laugh] [bash] [blow kiss]

Very nice! After reading it for a long time, I finally tied it~ To me, it is really a breath of fresh air among the immortal novels. Dada's writing style is very good, and the character creation is also very good. Xiaoci's three views are very upright, and she is also a very good person. I like her very much🥺 The plot is quite good, some twists are really unexpected, and there is no sluggish plot. Even after following the latest chapter, there were no surprises for me. Although the overall pace is not fast, it is very comfortable to watch. Great praise for the emotional aspect! ! I really like the fact that there is no cp in the main text and 1v1 in the side story. The emotional lines in the main plot are so well written. I can only say that Xiu Ci is a fairy... Xiao Ci has been growing up with Shen Xiu since she didn't know how to do anything. Xiao Ci pulled it out again and again without hesitation... It really has the most two-way feeling in the text. I also like Shen Xiu's secretive restraint in the later stage. Xiu Ci's sweet yet bitter feeling is so delicious... There is also Little Phoenix. I have to say that Dada really succeeded in shaping the character of Little Phoenix. The straight-shooting + consistent affection + vigorous love are known to everyone. Although I am a Xiu Ci Party member, every time I see Little Phoenix, I feel that the edict is too good. Dada really writes it so well! Then I asked secretly, can Xie Qianjue be served? I originally liked Jue Ci in the early stage... Unfortunately, he had too few roles, so I couldn't help it. I really liked his line "Marriage is mine". I have been thinking about him since the early stage. Unfortunately, there was no Jue Ci candy. I cried quietly. I really liked Xie Qianjue's enthusiasm in the early stage. All in all, it's a really good book about cultivating immortality. I will continue to follow it! Looking forward to the follow-up and ending, please do your best! Finished catching up on the extra episodes of the week! ! It's so beautiful. Chacha, you are so good at writing. I have so many regrets about this episode. I kept crying [crying] I'll refresh it after all the extras are finished [Adoration] Come on, Chacha! ! !

The writing is very good, but I don't know if there is any CP. I hope it is non-CP. It seems that there is no tendency to have CP. If there is, I hope it is non-CP in the main text. I really like the non-CP in the extra chapters. It is good without that kind of emotional line. The heroine's character is very good, especially the chapters where Huaichuan becomes the protagonist. She is so handsome.

Support white tea! Coming from far away, keep up the good work [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] Hey, I finished watching it a long time ago. I haven't watched this extra episode. The first episode is really tragic😞

Ahhhhhhh, super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! ! It's really great! ! ! It's really difficult to write such a cool article without being embarrassed, but the author's writing is very good, the writing style is good, and the storyline is good! ! ! I love it so much! ! ! It's a passionate article about group portraits. I love it [adoration] [adoration], but there are a little few updates. I hope the author will make more updates! ! So pretty! ! [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses][Blowing Kisses]

It's rare that I didn't jump to read it, and it felt pretty good. After more than 300 chapters, the heroine went to the demon world and was tricked by Shen Huaichuan and died (normal people are dead, but the heroine didn't die because she had a halo). When she arrived in the ghost world, the plot felt so disconnected. Although the heroine just changed the map, it felt disconnected. At first, I was a little uncomfortable jumping to the next chapter, and then I went back to the front. I haven't finished it yet, and I'm afraid I'll abandon it after watching it. Please give it a good review first. Seeing later, I started to dislike Shen Huaichuan more and more. I was moved by myself and thought that I was right. I made the heroine fall asleep and made the heroine's master think that the heroine was dead. No matter what the purpose, this kind of person is very annoying! It's like someone suddenly deceived your family and made you think that your family thought you were dead, giving up all hope. Didn't anyone give a voice to your family's sadness and despair all those years ago? The heroine has masters, brothers, family, and friends. Do they deserve their worries? If the obsession is deep, it is estimated that the Taoist heart will be destroyed. The heroine is not Shen's tool for reviving the sect. Why should he think that he is right to determine the heroine's future? Fortunately, the heroine has an aura and wakes up after a hundred years. According to Shen's original plan, it will take a long time to wake up. When the heroine wakes up, she may not even see the people around her for the last time. If you have a plan, you can discuss it together. If it doesn't work, don't give up everyone's hope in the end! It's so off-putting for a man, but he actually made him such a great character. How hard he worked for the sect, it ruined the three views. The heroine felt that suddenly the master and brothers were no longer wanted, Shen and the revitalized sect became the first, and there were a group of self-motivated people who kept praising Shen. I couldn't stand it. In my eyes, nothing is as important as family. I can be grateful for the revival of Shen sect, but not forgetting my roots!

Every character in the book is flesh and blood, vivid and three-dimensional, and is consistent with the life trajectory described in the book. Master Wen is pure and kind because he lives in the love of the world, but he also recognizes the dangers of the world without losing his original intention. Xiaotu is a proud and sensitive child who lacks love. He remembers every love in his heart. These beautiful things prevent him from being blinded by hatred. No matter in his previous life or in this life, he has always protected the people he loves. Together with Rong Xuan and Brother Ning, he clumsily protects the family that Master left for each other. While reading, I always wondered who Xiao Ci should be with. The proud little Phoenix will learn to grow for his lover. His love is sincere and warm, like bright and brilliant flowing glass and pure fire. Many people say that Little Phoenix has unrequited love, but the lover himself is not wrong, and he does not want to trap Xiao Ci with his love. He may be naive at the beginning and ignore Xiao Ci's wishes, but he has been growing. And Shen Xiu's love is gentle and tolerant, like a guiding lover. He has the tolerance of the sea and the calmness of the mountain. He Xin Xiaoci is a woman who is fearless and never needs to hide behind others. And Xiao Ci also believes in him. He is Shen Jianxian. Even if his spiritual power is lost, even if he can no longer become an immortal, he will not be devoured by the demon, nor will he fall down. So I think they are each other's soul mates, a mutual trust that goes both ways. But my dilemma was that I ignored Xiaoci's own thoughts. This is what I admire most about the author. These words make me see a cute, brave, quirky girl who dares to love the world. She also has her own way and her own wishes. A young man in bright clothes and an angry horse, but why is he just a young man? A girl can also stand on colorful auspicious clouds and fight against a tyrannosaurus! She is so outstanding. Little Rabbit, Little Phoenix, Shen Jianxian... It is normal to regard her as a unique existence. But Xiao Ci also has her own desires, why must she be trapped in worldly love? Girls who are close to the wind are born free and fearless. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I felt something about it halfway through. I'll comment after I've finished it [shy][blowing kiss]

The beginning of this article is actually not as attractive to me as the previous one. Maybe the pace is not that fast, and the characters introduced at the beginning are not as eye-catching. But as the plot unfolds and the details become richer, there is a kind of beauty that can be expected in the future. Some battle scenes and daily scenes are all written with a sense of pictures.

I really like Shen Huaichuan's character. If it's my personal feeling, Shen Huaichuan is the most suitable person for Xiao Ci. He has deep qualifications, broad knowledge, upright views, respect and appreciation. He will always use the right means at the right time to guide Xiao Ci's self-growth instead of forcefully controlling him. He has a gentle but unyielding personality. It's not that he is cowardly, he has the bravery of a swordsman to move forward, and the calmness that has gone through thousands of sails. If Xiaoci is a free and carefree wind in the world, then Shen Huaichuan is like a cloud that the wind blows and rolls up, giving each other gentle and calm company in the world. Of course, the above is my personal feeling, not absolute!

This article is really good to read, and the author's writing style is also very good. I feel that this is the real world of cultivating immortals. There is no big golden finger. The system is useful but not much and still very confusing. The cultivation is step by step. Danger and opportunity coexist. The other characters have distinct personalities and have their own stories and personalities. There are no other immortal novels like White Lotus. Those novels are better than Golden Finger. They mainly focus on various showdowns between the heroine and the original heroine, which is boring. Although the plot of this article is not top-notch, it is still top-notch. The two masters of the heroine, Wen Fuyue and Shen Huaichuan, are my favorite characters. They are both gentle and good. I am not sure who the hero is at the moment or whether he has a cp. The heroine does not have the aura of being a heartthrob. The relationship with other characters, whether it is friendship or family, is detailed and detailed, mutual, smooth and well-written.

I really like the heroine's growth flow at the beginning, and the middle copy is full of foreshadowing, with tears and laughter. I stayed up all night passionately to catch up halfway through and it was really tangled. I couldn't help but want to chat. The following personal review contains [spoilers], so be careful! First of all, the rapid growth of Xiaoyun's belt system from 0 to the successor of Lingweizong is very exciting. There may be a golden finger BUFF in the middle, but the author's logic is smooth and the characters in the writing are flesh and blood, especially the copy of Buddha and Demon Tower. I am personally TOP in the early stage. Everyone who fell in love with the teacher immediately after reading it seems to have really followed Xiaoyun's "immortal caressing my head" with the author. Coupled with the author's attentive and warm reply, I was really laughing and chasing him all the way in the comment area [Cool] But it may also be that the early stage was too white and the moonlight was too bright, so that I was really confused when I saw the snowy mountains and the demon world. The first is the little phoenix of Emperor Chao. As expected, he is not an ordinary guy who appears in the stunning category [take a closer look]. His character and abilities are both arrogant and strong. As an evil phoenix, he is powerful and has his own mythical beast BUFF. Although he threatens the heroine in courtship at the beginning, he is not actually in love with her. Then he gradually changes to a super thick single arrow. Therefore, its length is relatively more in the snow mountain and demon world in the middle period. (Personally, I also feel that Xiaoyun's growth line progress has slowed down here, and his sense of presence has also weakened a lot compared to the previous period) As a reader, I have experienced Xiaoyun's changes more from the side of the people around me. It's not all detailed, but the most complete highlight in my memory is also the plot related to Little Phoenix. For example, looking for the master, defeating the mausoleum demon and the demon master, this part is more driven by the Phoenix, and therefore it is more like his career line, and Xiaoyun is more of an icing on the cake (sigh) I think this may also be related to the author's combat power setting. The master transformed into a god and brought four foundations, so he was conservative. The fight could only be left to Little Phoenix. After all, even if the more powerful Shen Huaichuan appeared later, he was still a suppressed mortal. So personally, Xiaoyun's career development was really not much when he first came down, and his strength growth was not as interesting as in the previous period (Mushroom in the corner. Jpg) In addition to the emotional line of Little Phoenix mentioned earlier, it changes from a high position to an equal view of Xiaoyun. The author's description is very delicate and touching. But I didn't expect that with the increase of the length of this part, Little Phoenix becomes more three-dimensional and Xiaoyun becomes more passive. In fact, Xiaoyun's protagonist's perspective is my favorite! (Crying) The second is the opponent group. First of all, the second brother Rabbit, as an important role in the snow mountain and the demon world, lost to the coolness at the beginning due to the charm of the little phoenix. The combat power of the Buddha and Demon Tower also became a flash, and the boss Rabbit's prestige was greatly reduced. Next are the master, senior brother and third senior brother. The master is capable and has emotional intelligence. He and his senior brother are outstanding in the snow mountains. Once he entered the demon world, he had no choice but to become a novice with a few children. Gradually, like the third senior brother, he left the country from time to time. It was a pity and helplessness. In short, the most obvious difference between the mid-term and the early stage is that the heroine Xiaoyun's growth slots have increased. Just like bringing back Shen Huaichuan's real body, I thought we would embark on a new journey together, but I didn't expect that we would take it easy and let her career progress. However, the above are all my own opinions. After all, they are not equal to incomplete opinions. I hope it will be different in the future.

The story about the upgrade of the heroine of the Cultivation to Immortality style is very humorous and passionate in the early stages, with the young and frivolous ambitions and Master Wen Fuyue's idealistic support for the protagonist group. What impressed me the most was the scene where Ling Huizong was discovered in the secret realm, and when Master Shen said goodbye to Xiao Fai. I felt the spirit of a great sect who had been sleeping for many years and was lost in the world. I saw the romantic expression in the text and I liked it very much. The most frustrating thing so far is the handling of Shen Huaichuan's self-made remarks. I feel like I have been holding my breath and unable to let go. I hate the arrogance and concealment of people who make arbitrary decisions about themselves and think they are good to others. The heroine gently brought this to my attention and I personally felt that it was less bloody. Shouldn't you tell yourself a series of choices that change the important trajectory of your life, such as living in a different world, separation from important partners, etc.? Shen Huaichuan is one of the male protagonists I liked more in the past, because although he is cold and powerful, he is lively, sometimes a bit sinister and has a plump character. However, in this plot, it seems that his behavior is contrary to his words of admonishing the little Phoenix to respect his partner. I think he is a bit inconsistent inside and outside. Maybe the author wants to express a lot of things. I am very sorry that Xiao Ci's character arc gradually faded after her first death. She should be standing in the center of everyone, but I can't seem to see the weird spirit in the early stage that made everyone willing to gather around her because of her dazzling appearance.

3.8 Points. The plot structure is complete and the world view is large. The plot is attractive and can be read by those who like fairy tales. However, this article focuses on the female protagonist. The two male protagonists provide powerful assistance to the female protagonist. The three senior brothers in the sect are reduced to tool men except for the second senior brother who is somewhat focused on, especially the third senior brother. The master is just a mascot background, and whether there are useless characters such as Xiao Hachi or not does not affect the plot's portrayal of important supporting characters. In key plots and some settings, sometimes a sentence is suddenly unclear and the meaning is unclear. There is no reasonable explanation and the previous text cannot be connected. Otherwise, there are contradictions in the previous and later settings. For example, in the previous article, it is said that the husband of the Beng Nu is a side bloodline that the Xie family has not recognized. In the later text, in order to lead the protagonist group to freely pass through the main city of the Xie family, they can also have their own Xie family name brand.

Super pretty! ! I really like the heroine! There's just one thing, isn't the second senior brother's role a bit too much? I feel that I have used too much force, portraying the second senior brother as a brainless image who is too possessive and reckless, and the heroine has to coax him all the time. Moreover, the other senior brothers do not have as many scenes as him, and their characters are not as full and three-dimensional as his. But overall, it's really good. It successfully allowed me to escape from the book world😍

This book is definitely the TOP among the immortal cultivation novels that I have read. At first, my favorite was Senior Brother Mu. I thought he was really cute, but later on when I went to other realms, the descriptions of him were much less. Shen Huaichuan, I think he was a very contradictory person in the early stage. He ascended several times but failed repeatedly. After learning the truth, he performed righteous actions, but he was too arrogant and did not trust his friends around him. He used his own body to repair the ladder, but failed in the end. What impressed me most was the sentence "All delusions will be destroyed, and I will be the end. Practice well and forget it." It was really true at that time. It made me cry a lot, thinking that Shen Xiu had really turned dark, but Shen Huaichuan in the later period was really a very heart-warming existence. I felt that he had very complicated emotions for Xiao Ci, doting on the younger generation, admiring the genius, his expectations for inheritance and even a faint love in the later period. He was kind, caring about the common people, adhering to Taoism, and he was like a teacher and a friend to Xiao Ci. As for Emperor Zhao, he loved him vigorously, everyone knew it, and he fell in love soberly. His love was pure and sincere, and he could always take advantage of it. Xiao Ci, I think she is the same person as Shen Huaichuan, strong, sober, not a saint but not letting others die in vain. Of course, my favorite part of the whole story is Master Wen Fuyue. He is gentle and kind, and all the beautiful words can be said about him. He is like the rays of the sun, pulling his disciples out of the abyss. In his eyes, the disciples are all gentle people. What I love most is the clip of him traveling around with his disciples. Perhaps the greatest charm of the group portrait is this.