After Cheating the Heroines, I Jumped into the Game!

It's a bit like the rebirth of the empress to save her regrets. The male and female protagonists are twins. The female protagonist starts with a ceiling and dotes on the male protagonist. In terms of characterization, Lu Nan is a bit similar to Lu Ning in the previous movie Villain Lolita. They are both tsundere who mainly play around (on the surface, they play with other people's feelings, but they are the first to panic when something really goes wrong). Generally speaking, I am still very optimistic about this book. I hope the author can give more sugar as before.

It's good to watch. All the heroines in the second episode are reborn in the repair shop and the crematorium of chasing their husbands with their memories. The male protagonist needs to hide his identity as a reborn person among these female protagonists who have become yandere because of him. Although the writing and plot have flaws, the creativity is extremely interesting. Sanwu Loli Youwei is so cute, my favorite episode.

I read the latest chapter in one go, and then read the author's other books. The author is a lolicon, right? It must be! Absolutely! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The writing style is delicate and the main plot highlights the emotional line. The writing is also very good. Thank you for the author.

It's good to read, I love to read it. If you are a fan of Bai Younen, please contact me to check it out. The plot of the novel is still very good and it is very easy for me to empathize. I am comfortable when I should feel comfortable and torture when I should torture. I haven't finished it yet. I hope that each protagonist has a happy ending. If the author can write, write more.

I have to say that I love reading the subject matter. The plot description of the novel is based on reality, and art comes from reality. In reality, you have a domestically violent father and a mother who died because of you, but you will not have a heartwarming three children. You will only be alone and have no choice. In the novel, you still have room for change, but he will "have no choice" because it is only a novel. Reading the comments at the end, I feel that this should go to the end where the author is venting his dissatisfaction with reality. It is written for himself and for himself. Readers don't like to read it because the author's profession not only serves himself but also the audience. Ordinary people who are happy and happy will not accept that the rest of the fun belongs to the author. If the author is really alluding to himself in the article, I can only say, believe in yourself. I can't happily advise you that the world is beautiful. That is to be a cyber virgin. That is arrogance. Just believe in yourself. Having said so much, if it's false... It doesn't matter that I'm a clown.

The novel is very good, especially the crime eradication campaign is very well written [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

The writing won my heart. I like loli. It's rare that I can watch the heroine. The yandere attribute is also well written. It's not too outrageous or offensive. And every time I post a paragraph to comment on whether the author is rewarded [Sending Hearts]

The characters are well created, and different characters satisfy different xp. Except for the language, which is a bit difficult to understand (to be honest, it sometimes takes me a long time to read the words written by the author), everything else is pretty good.

It looks great, I hope I can keep it up, come on!

It's good-looking. It's low-key and high-speed. The author has improved little by little. Not only has he been improving in plot and fluency, but the writing style has improved a little slowly, but it is true that this thing is not that easy to improve. The most important thing is that the world view is imaginary, and gradually the world view becomes much wider. There is also an excellent character positioning map. It is very beautiful and can be said to be highly recommended. I wonder if there are any good illustrators who can help me? The beginning is just average, so please read it patiently. If you like the novel, you can support the author and send gifts. You can also give free ones [give your heart]

To be honest, this book cannot be called a masterpiece, but it is definitely excellent. It is a super large cup. The reason for its low popularity is probably the name of this small cup. The name has nothing to do with the content of the book. As for the name, what everyone wants to read is actually the kind of basement or something like that. But for him, I feel like changing the name It's more appropriate. This one is the same as the name of the game. The main plot is rescue. All in all, the plot is not too complicated. The emotional line is a bit delayed but very reasonable. What bad intentions does the little loli have? So I feel that it is more comfortable to change the name. Otherwise, most people will just leave after just one glance. To use an analogy, it's probably like, although your cooking is delicious, it's not the dish I ordered. It's like selling a sheep's head for dog meat. If you were attracted by the title of the book, you can actually leave. I feel that raising a boss is not very reflected. But if you want to read something novel, unsystematic, not invincible (maybe), not old-fashioned, it should be slow-burning? There are also loli harem gang fights, interesting world views, and the male protagonist is a succubus, maybe it is a love story. Anyway, if you are short of books, you might as well read this one. I think it will give you a different kind of surprise after reading it.

After reading Chapter 163, I feel that this book is quite good. Although I have been reading the book for a while in the early stage, the plot is very attractive to me. I always feel that the ending of this book will be a knife. There are 150,000 online readers, and I don't know how many people read the book. But the author has updated it continuously for more than a hundred days. I admire the author very much. There are very few books in Tomato that do not have bad data and do not cut the book. In short, this book is very good. I wish the author to keep up the good work, persevere, and usher in the dawn.

It's really great! ! ! The plot is rigorous and complex, but it feels simple and easy to understand! ! ! But the author could be more detailed in that aspect [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] If that doesn't work, he can use some strange encounter language [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] When I first read it, I thought it was a mindless novel that was enjoyable throughout. But after I read it, I gained a new understanding of Tomato's book [laugh] [laugh] It turns out that there can be simple and easy-to-understand novels that are elegant and rigorous at the same time. The author writes very well👍👍👍👍👍👍 In fact, I think the author can write some novels with dark plots. [Turn one's lips][Til one's lips][Til one's lips][Til one's lips][Til one's lips]

Well, how should I put it? The problem with this article is obvious. It's uncomfortable to read. It's caused by the writing style. I like to use long sentences like this. It takes a lot of effort to read (I didn't say ten lines at a glance. I like to read intensively). If the author can read it, I suggest using more normal sentences. It's good to use long sentences occasionally. It's very informative and looks beautiful. But when you get to certain places, it's really hard to read several long sentences. But the advantages are also obvious. I like this story very much. The development of the story is worth reading (it took me a long time to read this article. I like to download and read it offline so the reading time is very short. In fact, the reading time is more than 30 hours) (the total reading market is more than 2,000, I still have some reading ability). I hope it is not too sad (although it is a very interesting plot so far, and there is no tendency to sad)

I have to say, it's quite novel and interesting [take a closer look]

Wc, author, thank you so much. The character of the protagonist in this book is very in line with my interests. I especially like the character of betrayal and deception. He even deceives himself, uses himself to please himself, sets a knife to torture himself and distorts his psychology (although this book is not as bt as my hobby)

I've long wanted to read a novel about raising a yandere boss! ! There were a few books before, but the protagonist was too passive and there were only a few bosses (yandere). However, this book has a good protagonist and a Shura field, which is great! ! !

It seems pretty good so far, although there are some parts that are a bit hungry and a bit cold-blooded, I guess. However, people have also tagged the main body, and it's really pretty good. At least the interaction with the heroine, I really like it, and the subject matter is also a little bit new. Anyway, I've never seen anything like this before, so I'd give it a 4 to 5 rating.

This work is eye-catching, especially in the second episode, the heroines are collectively reborn with memories, forming a unique Shura field, and at the same time staged a fierce "chasing husband crematorium" drama. Surrounded by the yandere heroines caused by him, the male protagonist cleverly hides his identity as a reborn person. This setting is quite ingenious. Although the writing and plot still have room for improvement in some details, the overall creativity is refreshing. Especially the image of Sanwu Loli Youwei, her cuteness is irresistible and has become my favorite episode. This work provides readers with a unique reading experience.

The protagonist... Has a very arrogant personality... This book is indeed a very good one This book is suitable for the constitution of the baby who sits and forgets, and the group of happy people. It is very beautiful, very good, very indescribable, in short... This book is based on a world view like Cthulhu, which will allow your brain to enjoy taboo-like joy. Enjoy it to the last moment, WhY sO SeRIES?

The setting and plot rhythm of the early and mid-term are very good, the characters are well controlled, and the world view is okay (the setting is really good, at least I rarely see this kind of thing, and it is rare to see such perfect self-setting in Tomato. Many others just open a new picture and make a new patch). The protagonist is also quite likable. Although the latter part is a bit unfinished and the transition is very fast, the quality of the plot in the early and mid-term is still undeniable. This game has strong countermeasures and average versatility. Overall, I give it a high rating. (Don't spray if you don't like it)

How to say it? The descriptions of little girls are very delicate. A group of cute little girls were hurt by a fun-loving protagonist, but he didn't expect it to be the real world, so he remembered the real time and took corresponding responsibility for them. The plot doesn't drag on either, and the things that need to explode have already begun to explode. Even so, the direction of the description is quite good.

The writing is quite good, and the plot doesn't have any big holes, but it doesn't suit my taste. I prefer to read books with more sugar content. This one is mainly plot-oriented, and the male and female protagonists develop very slowly, and there is no sugar content.

I thought it was quite interesting at first, Sanwu Lolita, and then Saint Anna and Hacker. Don't be dissuaded by the god who likes to have fun at the beginning. That god is actually quite pitiful. I'll understand later [Like]

The subject matter is pretty good and it looks okay. The best solution I can think of right now is to start with Anna and deal with Kazama first. I have also simulated the ending, and there is a high probability that I will continue to use lies, because if you want to cover up a lie, you have to tell a bigger lie, or everyone has a tacit understanding, but this feeling is simply impossible. There must be three weeks of objectives. If you make a mistake at the beginning of these two weeks, you will die or be imprisoned and tortured forever. Give it four stars first and wait and see [smile] PS: If the author doesn't play ba, I will eat it

The plot is very good, and the updates are diligent, but there are a lot of poisonous points in the book, and I feel that the world view is a bit incorrect, but there are still such things in the sick and charming novels [laughter][laughter][laughter] The writing is very good, the plot is very compact and the characters are relatively clear. The protagonist does things without procrastination. The direction of the plot is very clear but not boring. The digging is reasonable. It is a bit tricky, but since it guarantees a good ending, there is nothing to say. The updates are also very diligent. It is a good author and a good book [Like]

This novel is really good in Tomato. Let me explain to those who have just read the book. In the beginning, the narrator is not the narrator, but the God of Fun. The God of Fun loves watching Fun because of his childhood experiences. Secondly, this book is not a yandere novel. In the end, the God of Fun really loves the protagonist, not just for fun.

Only Chapter 180 has been seen so far The writing is passable The plot is okay Slightly perverted Protagonist lolicon harem Most likely there is a knife [Recommended to watch with songs (Similar to the original farewell book?)] Full score full score I have read Chapter 303 so far. The daily writing is very sweet, but it always makes me very worried. Gua, I don't want to look at the knife and the teeth!

The world conceived by the author can probably be glimpsed now, and it is definitely not as simple as the Shura Field. To be honest, it is different from what I thought when I first read it. I have the problem of narrowing my horizons, but it is really good. Although there are many holes that have not been filled in, I think the author can do something like Super Beast Arms, and those foreshadowings will definitely be useful.