Survival Game: I Joined the Admin Group

Well... It's pretty good, but the ending is just like a traditional TV series. , One second was exciting, and the next second was a dream awakening... But to be honest, I had a dream in the afternoon of March 17, 1932, during the Republic of China. I hid in my notebook and lived for the first time. I went to see the school with its gabled wall in ruins. The second time, shells rained from the sky and the playground was on fire. Then I ran along the corridor wondering if I would be blown up, but I woke up. It probably blew up (so the ending is not too abrupt, but I just didn't see enough)

How can I put it, although it is short, it is quite exciting. The protagonist is calm, brave, and not a virgin. It is good, but the pace is too fast. The protagonist only wants guns. I feel that there is a little sloppiness later on. According to the character of the protagonist in the early stage, how could he only rely on guns in the last game screen? It means that the protagonist is mindless, but it just feels a little different from the previous characters. Although the protagonist only wants to survive, the last game screen seems a bit violent. However, reading the review, the author is probably a little anxious to open a new book, haha [exploration]

It's great, but the pace is too fast in some places.

This book is really good (*￣3￣)╭♡ Come on, author (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥