(Chat group text, semi-invincible, the system may appear in the next few chapters, the author is new, please don't criticize if you criticize lightly, please don't give two stars, please)
The time-travel novel One Leaf Covers the Sky was famous in the ancient times. After going through countless hardships, he even used a secret method to divide himself into two yin and yang poles, a man and a woman. He finally became the emperor and wanted to use the secret method to survive until the road to immortality opened, but suddenly a golden finger who claimed to be a chat group system suddenly appeared. From then on, the two began to travel across the heavens, helping the group friends upgrade and change their lives to fight against villains, and at the same time clean up the troublesome Dark Supreme.
Reader comments
The author is a newcomer, but he still dares to play two protagonists. I admire you, the author. I originally wanted to give you two stars. Seeing how brave the author is, I will give it three stars.
The subject matter is good, but I don't know how to write it.
I want to imitate other people's books, but write messy things
A mess. What exactly are you talking about, but you can't even write clearly? It feels like there is no outline and I just write casually.
Chaos, a child with no strength.
It's so messy [laughs awkwardly]
Quite interesting
Mainly because it's too messy
It's good to refuel, although it's a little messy.
I feel like the paragraph is too long, and there are still reasons and consequences left unexplained.
It feels very stiff,
The procrastination of the writing is not good either. The wording is not appropriate. Practice more.
The author is a newcomer, but he still dares to play two protagonists. I admire you, the author. I originally wanted to give you two stars. Seeing how brave the author is, I will give it three stars.
The subject matter is good, but I don't know how to write it.
I want to imitate other people's books, but write messy things
A mess. What exactly are you talking about, but you can't even write clearly? It feels like there is no outline and I just write casually.
Chaos, a child with no strength.
It's so messy [laughs awkwardly]
Quite interesting
Mainly because it's too messy
It's good to refuel, although it's a little messy.
I feel like the paragraph is too long, and there are still reasons and consequences left unexplained.
It feels very stiff,
The procrastination of the writing is not good either. The wording is not appropriate. Practice more.
A lot of mess