Honkai Impact: the Beginning and Xilin in Jail

It is recommended that the author let the protagonist teach Kiana and Siren the last lesson, so that the protagonist can go into the sea to escape Otto's surveillance and develop for a period of time, Kiana can suffer less later, and Himeko will not die, killing three birds with one stone.

I originally wanted to give a negative review, but in the end no one could save me. But after looking at the title of the book, it turned out to be Xilin's single tweet, so I'd better give it a five-star review.

Sorry to give myself five stars. It deserves four stars. Then let's talk about this book. (Friends who are watching it for the first time can check it out) The pace at the beginning is very fast and the original plot follows more than ten chapters. Many readers cannot accept it. If they cannot accept it, they can skip the third, fourth and fifth chapters without affecting subsequent reading. There are also some mistakes made by not carefully checking the plot, and the author is ready to mess it up and is too lazy to correct it. Please keep it private, everyone. Then just put forward some suggestions. You may not see the opinions at the first time, but you can change them if you see them later. This book was originally inspired by the author's thoughts and was written for himself. He had a general direction and wrote tens of thousands of words without considering the specific outline. He published it all at once and did not keep the manuscript. Then I would like to thank everyone for accompanying me. This book will not be too long, and of course it will not be too short. I will try to keep it updated daily. [Laughing]

How to put it, Hill and Xing like Bronya, Bronya likes Lin Qi, Lin Qi rejects Bronya, Yaya is sad, but Hill and Xing hate Lin Qi. Lin Qi quickly explained the relationship to Kiana, but Mei Ze felt a little confused. The little angel Hill is now just Bronya's little angel. Mei is ready to do anything for Kiana, regardless of her previous feelings. The feeling has become "as long as Kiana is happy, even if it means killing someone else and making him disappear forever, it doesn't matter even if that person is his teacher." The more I watched, the more panicked I became. Mei and Otto got together, and even came into contact with the World Snake in advance. Kevin should not have come back at this time. Gray Snake and Jackal didn't know what they were going to do. They were afraid that Mei Yi would set up a trap with the World Snake to catch Xilin and Lin Qi later. Mei Yi said, "Teacher Lin, all this is for Kiana, you will understand." While stabbing Xilin.

Can the author include a few more? Don't include too many female protagonists. There are so many, especially pre-civilization ones.

Bored, I want to watch Shura Field, I want to see blood flowing like a river, when will the main characters of Xilin Duck and Duck appear together at the same time?

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It's great to watch, but there are too many emotional scenes and it's a bit twisted. The pace is slow, and there are too many emotional and inner dramas, which somewhat affects the viewing experience. What annoys me the most is that while the plot pace is slow, updates are also slow. After a while, it feels fragmented.

Sorry, it seems that it took me so long to give five stars [face covering] @, I am also a veteran [laughing evilly], and more! The ministers use their appearance to hear the news! For Siren! Siren! ! ! Besides! ! I am a military commander who is not good at words!

It's okay. I was going to give it three stars, but I didn't watch much of the ending, so I gave it four stars.

I used to be very annoyed when I saw people starting a harem, but, author, I kneel down and beg you, can you please accept it? Woohoo, I beg you to start a harem, can't you? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Very nice new book Come on

It's very good, very heartwarming, with themes of love and collapse, not so much fighting and killing, and the main thing that suits my preferences the most is that the protagonist is not casual. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. 2024/3/10/21:43 It's so cozy! Warm! Still tm warm!

I think that after the death of the protagonist, we can arrange a power other than the power of imaginary numbers and the power of pretty boys (power of fire, power of plants or power of chaos) The protagonist can become stronger after death. The protagonist should have a high-level soul, such as becoming a god.

It's the first book I read seriously on Tomato. I feel it's very well written. I'm halfway through it now, and there's nothing wrong with it. However, I feel like there's something strange about it that I can't explain, like... "A strange green color." [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

There was a girl named Mei, but she got cancer, and her family was very worried about her. Finally one day her cancer was cured and the god of death left her. Her family was very happy and shouted excitedly: "Mei is gone from cancer!"

I feel like if I discard some details, it can still be read, and it can be read as a cool article [laughing] It's very comfortable to throw away the brain. So far, there is no sign of the swordsman protagonist. If there is, it will not be so enjoyable [smile]

Good

How should I put it? This book allowed me to see the shadow of those popular Mi You fan fictions before. They no longer only revolved around the original plot, but also described new content outside of the game. Although the plot structure in the first few chapters is a bit messy, the plot structure becomes clearer as it goes on. I hope that the author of the plot in the future can also write more exciting stories.

The writing is quite nice, but not many people read this book as an excellent work. But I don't know why no one reads it. And the author, have you signed a contract?

Very nice, good luck to the author.

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It's great, it's so fun. The author understands what regret is, what love is, and what white is.

There is someone on the platform next to the author who stole your novel. I'm not particularly sure. Send me your saved manuscript and let me see if he stole it.

When will the protagonist and Siren have a baby? I really like watching the protagonist - the child she brings!

It's great. The author writes well. Don't write about knives. Be careful. I'll send you a razor blade.

Everyone who plays with Siren is a good person

Author, when will Siren be able to come out?

I seemed to be sick. When I saw the crying duck, I didn't feel any sympathy at all. I even felt a little... Refreshed inexplicably? !

I'm very curious. The author has said it before, that is, the title says there are multiple female protagonists. And looking at this profile, it's obviously Bronya, Kiana, and Siren. Why do I see only one of this?