After Being Read by the Whole Family, the Protagonist Uses Sewing Machines

The author is so kind. If a servant climbs over his master, he will be fired.

The biggest flaw of this article is that adults in the post-apocalyptic world travel to little dolls, and their inner activities must include modal particles such as ah and ah, which are nondescript and very childish! Your voice must be considered from an adult perspective, and besides, humans are still bosses in the apocalypse!

It's broken, it doesn't look good. A young man in his twenties is in love with an old aunt in his forties? I don't understand, I suggest you correct it, Chapter 111 and 108

It's strange that a work that the author himself doesn't take seriously gets good ratings! After reading more than ten chapters, the name of the heroine kept changing, and I really couldn't continue reading. It affected the reading experience too much! Also, the heroine's mother knows that there is a mistress, but she doesn't actively collect evidence and transfer property. What is she doing? She is feeling sorry for herself, and there is no revenge at all after the main wife wakes up! This is only a dozen chapters, so you can imagine what's coming next!

Too many typos

I found another book worth staying up all night to read. Although it is also a favorite novel, the heroine is not pretentious and the subject matter is also very novel. I hope the author will not go off topic like other authors and keep writing. I will keep chasing it.

This book is very good, why are so few people reading it? The system gave me a thumbs up, it looks pretty good.

There are too many typos, and sometimes you need to think about it before you can straighten out the plot, which affects the viewing experience. If there are improvements in the future, it will be even better.

A reborn person can't even do 20*2? ? ? ?