Pokémon: Become the Chief? Easy as a Piece of Cake!

It feels like the front is fine, but the back is not. (It took me a long time to read) For example, the character design is in a mess. For example, Song Du, when he first brought the protagonist into that small world, he felt that this person was very powerful and good at acting. Later, when he came to Qin Zhaoma and Xia Duo, he completely collapsed, as if some stress reaction had turned into paper. What about "I think you look like a fair-skinned and beautiful girl wearing a bunny girl with a cute Lei Meng..." (Original copy and paste) Is this what he can say about the character he showed before? I think it's like an author's monologue. I feel that some of the "more intelligent" supporting characters have the shadow of the protagonist, and so does the protagonist. Sometimes he has brains and scheming, sometimes he is just like a piece of paper, he plays inexplicable jokes and tricks, and everyone has a split personality (including the elves, such as Marshado, who looks like a serious and cold fantasy beast at the front, but the psychological descriptions at the back are like Marshado being possessed by Yang Xiao) For example, the characters and elves in the book are telepathic. Even if the protagonist can communicate with Pokémon without any barriers, why can almost every supporting character do it? You can understand it if you understand what the other person means, but if all elves speak Chinese, you can't understand it. And there are too many private goods, such as Three Kingdoms memes. People who like the Three Kingdoms may find it interesting and fun, but people who don't understand it may find it inexplicable (I'm reading elf literature?) There are also conventional ways to use self-made realms to classify levels and assign qualifications to elves (but it is very common in Tomato City Elf articles and it is not mentioned much, so it is not a big problem) (If I was too aggressive, I apologize for that, but I personally think that the evaluation is reasonable and objective and fair. The book also has some advantages but I did not mention them. Finally, I wish the book a big hit. The author has a lot of money and a sack of money)

Nice! Make a Wish has no heroine! The purpose of watching Pokémon is to see the bond between people and Pokémon. Wow, what do you want to see? I love you, you love me [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

I highly recommend a few elves to the author. I really hope that the protagonist can conquer these elves. The first Thunder Fantasy Beast "Zeraora", The second boxing master "Martial Arts Bear Master", The third shadow fantasy beast "Mashado", The 4th Fire Swordsman "Blue Flame Blade Demon", The fifth fire warrior "Red Lotus Armored Cavalry", The 6th waveguide hero "Lucario", Among the three electric elves of the protagonist, I strongly recommend "Zeraora" to the author. Whether it is "Zeraora" in the anime or the theatrical version, her performance is very eye-catching, and her appearance is super high. She also has the exclusive move "Plasma Lightning Punch". The yellow "Zeraora" is really handsome, and being handsome is a lifetime thing, so I sincerely hope that the author can consider my suggestion. Thank you.

I read it in one go and saw that there are three electric Pokémon in the introduction. I thought the initial Pokémon would be Roentgen Cat, Thundermon, and Shockmon. After all, after the team is basically formed, the ones to capture should be Zeraora, Zekrom, Thunderdrum, and Milton. The three electric-type Pokémon were thought to be the starting Pokémon before I looked at them. The team of about five caught a fantasy beast/level 3 god. Later, they faced the villain organization and got the approval of a level 1 god. I can only say that Disciple Bear has already evolved in the beginning, which is cool but not what I want to see. Come on, writers, come up with ideas!

The writing is very good. Although I start with a bear apprentice, I don't have too many Pokémon. It's relatively slow to pick up. I hope it has a single female protagonist. I can give it five stars in the early stage, but I can't say in the mid-term. The author seems to care too much about the various plots of the alliance's infighting. I've seen chapter 205. The protagonists currently have two elves, none of them are over level 30, and they have never evolved once. There is also a charcoal servant who has not been officially conquered. Especially this time in the forest academy training plot, the protagonist starts to swim in the middle of the plot, which is too watery.

Beautiful, I really like these interactions. I just hope there won't be a female protagonist. (After all, I'm here to see people and Pokémon)

The writing is not bad, it beats the author who is around 80 on Tomato. I also like the character of the protagonist, keep it up [laughs]

It has surpassed 🍅most Pokémon fan fiction, come on!

I like the writing style, but unlike Pokémon writing, it doesn't matter if you replace Pokémon with powers. Personally, I think Pokémon writing should focus on Pokémon.

It looks good, I think, and the beginning is handled better than most Pokémon fanfics that have a rating of 9 or so. Maybe the description of the Silver Banner Beast is a bit vague, and the plot is a bit confusing and stream-of-consciousness, so the rating is low. I haven't read the rest yet, but my eyes suddenly lit up. Does anyone who has watched it give us any spoilers about the Pokémon that the protagonist will conquer next? Seeing that I haven't seen the second one yet, I feel a little anxious.

The content is very good, surpassing 90% of Tomato's Pokémon novels. My personal opinion is that the female character named Jiang is a bit human, and I hope that there will be less plots involving internal fighting in the future.

Finally I found a good elf novel again The only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is that the latest chapters suddenly go from warm growth to darkness with a bunch of people? His life is only for a small team member of a dark organization "(°ヘ°) Looking at the foreshadowing, I thought I was just researching mythical beast items and suddenly a riot occurred. I just need to control it, but I didn't expect...

The plot and everything are OK, and the jokes are well integrated. I am deducting one star because the development is too slow. I have read more than 100 chapters. I am still in high school and have just started school. Beibei, other universities where Pokémon develop quickly are almost finished. Although this is a bit too fast, you can't be so slow.

Unexpectedly, my favorite plot of this book is not the relationship between Xiao Yang and Pokémon, but Xiao Yang and Teacher Huo. Teacher Huo understands Xiao Yang, and Xiao Yang also understands Teacher Huo. Whether it is a seemingly excessive joke to mediate Teacher Huo's emotions, or he does not like to appear. The famous person accepted countless interviews to reduce Teacher Huo's sentence, said countless repeated things that were boring to him, or Teacher Huo used the teaching method that best suited Xiao Yang's way to compensate him, and ate more than a dozen ice creams just to explain things to Xiao Yang. This is my favorite teacher-student relationship after reading so many novels. In fact, it is also a friendship that transcends age. If friendship is well written, it will always be more moving than love. In the latest chapter, Xiao Yang asked for leave to travel. He was worried about the school and asked whether he should transfer to another school. After asking if Teacher Huo was still there, he learned that he was alive and said, "I am a person in No. 3 Middle School in life, and I am a ghost in No. 3 Middle School in death." I will always be moved by such sincere emotions.

Overall, it's a good read. The plot is not awkward, and the characters are rich. It has the warmth of elf novels and the darkness of the world, but it is not as weird and awkward as those awkward novels. Overall, it ranks among the top five novels I read on Tomato. Good luck, author! [Like][Please update]

Better than most elven writings, good grass, keep going.

I've read more than half of it, and I feel it's well written. I haven't found any poisonous characters yet. The characters are well drawn, so I'll add it to my bookshelf first. Based on the cover and name, I thought there would be an electric cat. I highly recommend joining. He is handsome and popular, and his combat power is not too strong. It's a good job to attract people who are in a book shortage, and I look forward to future performances.

It does not blindly focus on fighting power, and the emotions and conflicts are described in a delicate and non-delayed manner. The protagonist is also involved but does not overwhelm the protagonist. The characters are more flesh-and-blood, and the world view is unique and complete. The writing style is also very clever, which is like the tip of the iceberg. It has a sense of immersion and there are no worldview bugs. It can be seen that the author has worked hard

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the progress is a bit slow. The author is good at writing and has no bad points. You can read it when you are bored. This novel has a special feature. You can skip thirty or forty chapters and still read it. It's not abrupt at all.

It's still very good. It's well-written and interesting. It's not a brainless novel. It's worth a read. However, I personally feel that the pace of the storyline is a bit sluggish and a little less exciting. I think the necessary passion is still needed. Overall, the author's writing is good and worth a read.

The daily routines are really well written, and the jokes are also very sweet. The emotions with Pokémon are well written, but the advantages are also the disadvantages. There are too many daily routines. I saw that there are many daily routines in the introduction, but I didn't expect so many. . . It's a bit boring to read, but is it considered a genre of Pokémon fan fiction? Four stars encouragement

It's well written, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. Many stories fall apart after adding a female protagonist. Even if there is a female protagonist, it shouldn't have too many emotional lines. It's best to use it as a background. After all, for male videos, a good female protagonist should die at the beginning and be resurrected in the finale. Among the Pokémon books, there is one with a female protagonist that is better, and it's Teacher Lu's one. It's hard to surpass.

The early game was good and the rhythm was great, but it fell into a cycle after the mountain training. The upgrades were too slow and the character descriptions were templated. But considering that it is still pretty good in 🍅, so four points are encouraging. Comprehensive evaluation of dry food-

It's a rare good book. Its fluency is excellent among Tomato's many Pokémon fans, and the emotions are well rendered. The protagonist's character has no flaws, and is sensible. There is no heroine, and there are no nonsensical emotional lines. The darkness of the alliance is also vividly described, and it is quite enjoyable to watch. I really like the martial arts bear master, Bao Shuai.

A very funny elf comedy, but the plot is a bit delayed and the upgrade speed is a bit slow. Drive high and go low. Ever since I went to the gym to train, my relationship started to get more interesting.

It's okay, I can tell it was written with care. It's just that the pace is a bit slow and the baby cup takes too long.

It's very interesting. I read more than 200 chapters in one go. The pace is a bit slow in the early stages, but it's not a big problem. The ratings will definitely come up in the later stages. The author's wife writes very well. Come on! [Sending Hearts]

It's okay, the writing is very good, but the Pokémon selected are not my favorite. I read Pokémon articles just for the Pokémon I like, so I don't really like reading them.

There are so many memes, although I haven't heard of some of them! ! Especially the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, I was a little confused when I read it, but it was very interesting [note] And the supporting characters are all well portrayed😾, If possible, can you add one more chapter?

I don't know much about Pokémon, but the plot I read doesn't seem too toxic to persuade people to quit. It's pretty good. Keep up the good work. I've been reading for so long and I'm currently at chapter 180. It's very strange. I wrote good things and messed up things, but the protagonist's strength has not improved at all.