Pokemon: Strike Down the Darkness with Thunder

It feels like the front is fine, but the back is not. (It took me a long time to read) For example, the character design is in a mess. For example, Song Du, when he first brought the protagonist into that small world, he felt that this person was very powerful and good at acting. Later, when he came to Qin Zhaoma and Xia Duo, he completely collapsed, as if some stress reaction had turned into paper. What about "I think you look like a fair-skinned and beautiful girl wearing a bunny girl with a cute Lei Meng..." (Original copy and paste) Is this what he can say about the character he showed before? I think it's like an author's monologue. I feel that some of the "more intelligent" supporting characters have the shadow of the protagonist, and so does the protagonist. Sometimes he has brains and scheming, sometimes he is just like a piece of paper, he plays inexplicable jokes and tricks, and everyone has a split personality (including the elves, such as Marshado, who looks like a serious and cold fantasy beast at the front, but the psychological descriptions at the back are like Marshado being possessed by Yang Xiao) For example, the characters and elves in the book are telepathic. Even if the protagonist can communicate with Pokémon without any barriers, why can almost every supporting character do it? You can understand it if you understand what the other person means, but if all elves speak Chinese, you can't understand it. And there are too many private goods, such as Three Kingdoms memes. People who like the Three Kingdoms may find it interesting and fun, but people who don't understand it may find it inexplicable (I'm reading elf literature?) There are also conventional ways to use self-made realms to classify levels and assign qualifications to elves (but it is very common in Tomato City Elf articles and it is not mentioned much, so it is not a big problem) (If I was too aggressive, I apologize for that, but I personally think that the evaluation is reasonable and objective and fair. The book also has some advantages but I did not mention them. Finally, I wish the book a big hit. The author has a lot of money and a sack of money)

Nice! Make a Wish has no heroine! The purpose of watching Pokémon is to see the bond between people and Pokémon. Wow, what do you want to see? I love you, you love me 🥺 🥺 🥺

I highly recommend a few elves to the author. I really hope that the protagonist can conquer these elves. The first Thunder Fantasy Beast "Zeraora", The second boxing master "Martial Arts Bear Master", The third shadow fantasy beast "Mashado", The 4th Fire Swordsman "Blue Flame Blade Demon", The fifth fire warrior "Red Lotus Armored Cavalry", The 6th waveguide hero "Lucario", Among the three electric elves of the protagonist, I strongly recommend "Zeraora" to the author. Whether it is "Zeraora" in the anime or the theatrical version, her performance is very eye-catching, and her appearance is super high. She also has the exclusive move "Plasma Lightning Punch". The yellow "Zeraora" is really handsome, and being handsome is a lifetime thing, so I sincerely hope that the author can consider my suggestion. Thank you.

I read it in one go and saw that there are three electric Pokémon in the introduction. I thought the initial Pokémon would be Roentgen Cat, Thundermon, and Shockmon. After all, after the team is basically formed, the ones to capture should be Zeraora, Zekrom, Thunderdrum, and Milton. The three electric-type Pokémon were thought to be the starting Pokémon before I looked at them. The team of about five caught a fantasy beast/level 3 god. Later, they faced the villain organization and got the approval of a level 1 god. I can only say that Disciple Bear has already evolved in the beginning, which is cool but not what I want to see. Come on, writers, come up with ideas!

The writing is very good. Although I start with a bear apprentice, I don't have too many Pokémon. It's relatively slow to pick up. I hope it has a single female protagonist. I can give it five stars in the early stage, but I can't say in the mid-term. The author seems to care too much about the various plots of the alliance's infighting. I've seen chapter 205. The protagonists currently have two elves, none of them are over level 30, and they have never evolved once. There is also a charcoal servant who has not been officially conquered. Especially this time in the forest academy training plot, the protagonist starts to swim in the middle of the plot, which is too watery.

Beautiful, I really like these interactions. I just hope there won't be a female protagonist. (After all, I'm here to see people and Pokémon)

The writing is not bad, it beats the author who is around 80 on Tomato. I also like the character of the protagonist, keep it up 😄

It has surpassed 🍅most Pokémon fan fiction, come on!

I like the writing style, but unlike Pokémon writing, it doesn't matter if you replace Pokémon with powers. Personally, I think Pokémon writing should focus on Pokémon.

It looks good, I think, and the beginning is handled better than most Pokémon fanfics that have a rating of 9 or so. Maybe the description of the Silver Banner Beast is a bit vague, and the plot is a bit confusing and stream-of-consciousness, so the rating is low. I haven't read the rest yet, but my eyes suddenly lit up. Does anyone who has watched it give us any spoilers about the Pokémon that the protagonist will conquer next? Seeing that I haven't seen the second one yet, I feel a little anxious.