Traveling Through the World of Immortality, the System and I Recognize the Male Protagonist as Our Father

It's okay. It's pretty good so far. The only thing I hope is that the female protagonist will be beautiful alone and she will gradually become stronger in the future. The male protagonist is also very good, but there are too many romances around him. Almost all women like him, and the male protagonist has the original female protagonist, so the female protagonist should pursue a career (personal opinion)

It's very beautiful. I've been chasing it for a long time, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too slow. Is Luo Mingzheng the male protagonist? I hope so. I really want to kiss him. When will the female protagonist become stronger? The author will update it soon [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The chapter so far looks good overall! Looking forward to the follow-up! But I don't really want to have the setting of the original heroine, otherwise there will always be a feeling that the heroine is xs!

The plot of this book is compact and interlocking. Mainly because the subject matter is also very novel. It's so good that I read it over and over again.

It's very interesting. Apart from the fact that the heroine's ideas are not very clever in the early stage, there are no other shortcomings, and she looks better and better later on.

How to say it? Sometimes I don't understand why such a good book has no traffic. (งᵒ̌ᵒ̌)ง⁼³₌₃ First of all, let's talk about the author DaDa. The author DaDa is full-time updating every day and almost never stops. This makes me very touched. It has become my habit this year to see big works when I go home every day. (I started following it from the 100th chapter). Come on ^0^~. We all believe you can do it. Secondly, in terms of plot, in my opinion, the plot line of this article is particularly full and will not make people feel logically confused. After all, some authors write novels with skewed times that make readers feel that time and space are skewed, but the author's timeline is particularly clear. Goose goose goose, and from the world view of the world of immortality, this is also a rare work on immortality, with a grand world view. And in terms of character creation, I'm not saying that the character creation is really very detailed. I can feel the different personalities of the characters from some of the details. The characters of the three protagonists are very consistent with my understanding of the protagonists in the world of immortality. Kind but not excessive, firm but tender. The three views are super upright. Especially for Lele, I think his transformation from a mechanical race to a sentient species will be a matter of course and not too abrupt. Finally, let's talk about the love lines. I really like big love lines. In some of the articles I read before, either the love lines were incomprehensible, or they just didn't suit my taste. The author's huge emotional line, penetrated through time, and a little bit of testing in behavior, are no more than 100,000 times better than those articles that forcefully sell sugar. Especially in these newly updated chapters, it was the first time I saw the male and female protagonists kissing each other, and I was so excited. The reason is of course that the author has done a good job in foreshadowing. The author has a great understanding of such things as emotions, and I deeply agree with him. I wish the author peace, joy and good health in the new year. I also wish that readers of this book will continue to accompany you in the new year. Come on! Oh⊙∀⊙! We are all optimistic about you. Today is the last day of 2024. It is also the first time for me to write such a long book review. I express my feelings and wish everyone a happy New Year in 2025! O(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪

It's really good-looking. I've never seen this type of movie before. The female protagonist is very smart and decisive. I also like the male protagonist's character. The system is also very good, but there are so few. Why is it serialized? I really hope the author suddenly releases it and completes it.

The plot is novel, the heroine is diligent, and the system's son Lele is very cute. When can the relationship between the male and female protagonists be further developed? In which secret realm is Dark Line Zhuoxian hidden? Looking forward to the follow-up story How should I put it? It's almost 500 chapters and I still haven't figured out the entire story line. The system tells me to do this and do that. There are many clues and questions. I am confused and confused as I read. What is this book trying to express? Other novels have a finale with so many chapters. What is the purpose of inserting some secret realm or lost history? The more I wrote, the more complicated it became. Many characters appeared briefly and new characters appeared the next moment. Then Luo and Luo Shichuan also had a system. Ever since the time shuttle entered the unknown era, it has become chaotic...

This is my first review of a book. Well, it's the first book I've read on Little Tomato in a long time. I'm particularly excited about it. It's the kind of habit that makes me walk back and forth in the house. I'm looking forward to the follow-up story and hope the author will update more.

This setting is very novel, and although there are some shortcomings (the narrative is a bit delayed), the plot is quite exciting. Generally, I dislike male protagonists in fairy tales, but I like the male protagonist in this article very much (see the latest chapter). He is a very good person (he is simply an ideal boyfriend), and he has a strong sense of responsibility for the female protagonist, his "son", and the common people. The current plot feels that it is difficult for the male and female protagonists to have a closer relationship, but this is better. I am easily moved by the warm atmosphere of getting along with each other. If I give some sweets from time to time, I can twist myself into a maggot, hahahaha.

It can be seen from the introduction that she is not a big heroine, but also suffered all kinds of hardships in the early stage. The overall setting is good, but the plot is protracted, the narrative is long-winded, there are too many thoughts, backgrounds, and memories and they are repetitive, but the various foreshadowings are still quite attractive. The story becomes more and more unsightly as we go to the back. The world is just a huge mess. The foreshadowing of the plot in the front, the backtracking, the copy, and the various timelines are all about the emotional entanglements of the male and female protagonists. Although the main line of the article is to ascend and save the fate of the human race, the male and female protagonists' family members have various identity backgrounds and emotional development. I don't understand what the author wants to focus on.

It's good to watch, but it's too little. It feels like the plot has just begun, and I don't know if the original male lead is the male lead. The plot is novel and the writing is good. I'm looking forward to the next plot. I wonder if the heroine will return to the modern age and what the ending will be with the small system.

It looks good, looks good, looks good [please update], it's so interesting, the heroine recognizes the hero as her father, but I feel that the main plot is the heroine Feng Aotian's growth path, arrogance, slap in the face, genius, come on, come on, come on [Sending Hearts]

The world view of Haokan [Admiration] is very grand, and the time retrieval and world restart are intertwined, intricate and confusing. The way of heaven, luck, monsters, humans, people outside the world and people within the world, past and present, destiny and change... The story is exciting, meaningful and interesting. Although it revolves around the male and female protagonists, it is a story about cultivating immortals. There are many male and female partners with excellent talents and bloodlines. With the tasks released by the system, the secrets of this small world also begin to unfold little by little. The male and female protagonists are also very well designed. You can see the growth of the female protagonist, the morality of the male protagonist, and the emotional line is not abrupt. The identities and personalities of the male and female partners are also reversed in the later stages. But there is a slight flaw that the author sometimes makes typos, but not many. It's just that it's still being updated, and it's a bit unsatisfactory [laughs] Come on! ! !

The plot is very cleverly conceived, it is not a cookie-cutter plot, and you can't guess the direction of development at all. The foreshadowing in the front is buried just right, and the filling of holes in the back also makes people feel that it is natural, not abrupt, and the logic is complete. As the mystery is revealed step by step, the chaos of cause and effect and time, and the strife between forces, are discovered. The protagonist is carried forward by the torrent of history to repair, save and write the past of the future, making the shaky future a reality. This is an article that I really read. In fact, I was talking about An An and Yongle, and I wished that they could be together. If this is not love, then what is real [crying] [crying]

This book is so interesting! ! It's a pity that it's not over yet [Crying] [Crying] I like the heroine very much. She has a very real character and she gradually becomes stronger. I especially like Lele. She is so cute. I have to say that the author's character portrayal is really good. I am also very satisfied with the male protagonist. He is not greasy. He is a stable and responsible image. He is a very good person! Looking forward to more updates from the author! It's really not good enough. It's so good. But the author is too slow in updating it. Damn it. It would have been better if only I had discovered this book after it was finished [crying] [almost crying]

The novel is really, really good [like], the content is very novel and not cliche at all. I really like this kind of book where the heroine becomes stronger step by step [love]. I like the heroine's character very much. She is perseverant. Although she is timid at times, she becomes stronger in the end. I also like watching the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. Although their relationship progresses very slowly, I think it is quite good. The female protagonist is not obsessed with love and does not rely on the male protagonist. I also like Yongle very much. He is not just a tool like the system in other books. In this book, he also has his own story line and will work hard to understand human emotions. Moreover, the layout of this book is very large, the logic is very clear, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I have been following up on it. From the time I discovered this book when it was more than 30 chapters until now, I have been looking forward to the plot of 30,000 years ago. Now I have finally written it, and I am looking forward to the rest. I think the content of the story has always been exciting. [Love][love][love]

It's good to see that the plot is full of color, please update the author greatly [note]

It looks good. Please update it more. I feel that the male protagonist is good. I always have been. The female protagonist Xu Ruan, hahaha, the family of three should not change. I hope the author will write more and more interestingly, and be full of inspiration, so that readers and I will be full of reading. Hahaha, cheers for the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It is a book worth reading. At the beginning, the author wrote very carefully. There were about 4 incoherent sentences and minor language errors. There were just one word too many and one word missing. The overall setting is very good. I don't recommend reading it if you are impatient, because the author writes it very carefully, especially the first 20 chapters. The world view is quite large, and there are a lot of bits and pieces to pave the way for the world view. The backend is very interesting and the plot is interesting. Some people say that the heroine is a virgin, but she helps others without harming her own interests. And a person who can save a world will be conflicted if he does not have a kind heart. At present, the heroine is being upgraded and wants to save this world. I will add more in the future. If you are a patient old bookworm who is in a book shortage, you can give it a try. It is totally worth it.

For now, I guess it's the fairy grass 🌿, (it's a bit of a spoiler, book friends who mind, please don't read it) Follow the latest chapter The plot is mind-boggling and twists and turns. When you thought Su was the original heroine, she was the male protagonist's old enemy in the past life (the kind who beat her to death). When you thought Su was a mistaken person and she liked her son Le, it turns out that the two of them are in a sense an individual or a brother. Well, that's right. After a long time of playing, she turned out to be a male, a male phoenix [face covering]. The male protagonist is even more difficult to understand. As the plot unfolds, you think that the male protagonist is the reincarnation of Luo Long from the original world, but it turns out that he is combined with the female protagonist's painting spirit. It can also be said that he was born under the female protagonist's brush, and has all the qualities that the female protagonist loves. I thought the system was the fake son of the heroine and the hero, but in the end, in a certain sense, he was really their son. And the world they live in, they thought it was just a problem caused by the different camps of heaven and destiny, but it turned out that the world looked like three matryoshka dolls inside one, which was so mind-numbing to imagine. To be honest, I still can't understand some settings and findings after reading it again. I only managed to understand it by reading the content and reading the comments and the author's explanation [face covering]. But to be honest, the most interesting thing is the content after 30,000 years. The plot of 30,000 years is too heavy, depressing and brain-burning, so many book friends ask when the plot of 30,000 years ago will end and return to 30,000 years later. But judging from the current plot, it is estimated that it will take a long time. The plot of 30,000 years ago cannot be finished in a short time. After all, there are still many holes to be filled [laughing]

I am very lazy and generally don't like to write book reviews, but... (The reasons are as follows) It's really great to write it in big letters＼(^▽^)／! The writing is online, and the character settings are also very novel. The most important thing is that every character in the big letters is very distinctive, with a distinct personality and tight logic. The female protagonist has her own persistence. The male protagonist is gentle and upright, and is a truly outstanding child of luck. Goose Lele is also very good, and has been sparing no effort to help "mom". Luo and the female protagonist are also so close to each other. I love it. Overall, the writing of this article is online, the plot is smooth, and the characters are fleshed out. According to the foreshadowing of the story, the heroine's journey still has a long way to go. (If all the pitfalls are filled, plus the relationship line of the male and female protagonists, the growth line of the son Lele, and some content about the high-level world) it should be a long story. I look forward to updating it every day. Damn Mo Mo Mo (dark crawling) (twisted) (squirming) (rotating) (jumping) (holding a rose) (Come on, big!!! (ง •̀_•́)ง) (I will always support you!)

Nice! Love watching! Even a small character is described very well. If I could keep writing it, it would not be a full-length novel with this level of brilliance. It's not the kind of formulaic writing, so far it's really good.

After reading Chapter 559, the plot attracted me. In about the first 150 chapters, the heroine is an ordinary person with a charming personality, but not obvious. She is like a camera heroine. She is a foil for Luo Mingzheng and Yongle. The reason why I keep reading is because the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing and wants to know the subsequent plot. After Chapter 150, I started to focus more on the heroine, and the story began to unfold slowly. At present, I am quite satisfied with the emotional line of the male and female protagonists, because it is very slow, and because the heartbeat has a reason, I can't tell whether it is because they have been together for many years or they fell in love at a certain moment, but everything is well-founded and develops naturally, and there will be no sudden affection.

It looks great, especially the front. It would be better to add a little more emotional drama between the male and female protagonists. Hehehe, I am very curious about whether the male protagonist will fall in love with the female protagonist first or the female protagonist will fall in love with the male protagonist first ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱. I believe the female protagonist will become stronger and stronger. Come on, author! You are very flattering! [Love][love][love]

I really think it looks great, but the line is a bit long... It's not finished yet, and I think its only weakness is that it's unfinished. I think System Lele is so cute (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～I am an old bookworm and I have seen many cute systems before, but none of them have this style. It's great (◍＞◡＜◍) An An is really tough, not a perfect character, but the weakness of human nature and the brilliance of human nature are well blended in her (o´ω`o)ノ, which especially highlights the glorious side. I really like the male protagonist. I haven't seen this type of male protagonist for a long time. He has a perfect character, a bit like Gentle White Moonlight. I really like this kind of male protagonist. The male protagonists I watched in the past had a certain personality that was too prominent, either aloof, arrogant, world-weary, or paranoid... Such a gentle yet strong, calm and determined character really struck a chord with me. His preference gave people the feeling of the moonlight shining alone on me. I also like the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. It has a light and slow feeling. I have never read this kind of kiss for the first time in more than 400 chapters (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)... But I like this feeling very much. The passionate love may be like sunshine, but the one in this article is more like water and air, non-aggressive and indispensable🥰

The title of the book is very interesting, the content is really interesting, and it is a bit brain-burning. It makes you involuntarily think about what the thread is buried in this sentence and why it is like this. Moreover, the fighting process is very burning, especially the fighting process of the heroine. The system is the heroine's son, but it is not real, although it is a fake mother and son. , But instead, the heroine and the system are mismatched. Everything seems to be unreasonable but unexpectedly matched. I don't know whether it is intentional arrangement or fate. The content of the story is intertwined. The timeline of the article after traveling through time and space is a bit messy, so it is not recommended to skip reading. In short, the article is really worth reading, and you will not regret it. Judging from the chapters of the book, this is a full-length novel written by the author. When you first read the previous chapters, you may feel that the author is just writing words, but in fact, apart from the chapters that the author has reorganized, the author's words are not nonsense, they all have a certain meaning and echo the following chapters. The author's world view is very huge, and the author is also very good at digging holes. Buried threads, there are a lot of words that you don't pay attention to but it is a trap, so if you read the content of the article carefully, you can taste a lot of interesting arrangements. I have to say that the author's imagination is really big. Although this novel is a bit long, it is very interesting to read. This is one of the few novels that I can read to the end. Other novels either have a wonderful beginning and then a lot of fun. It's easy for me to give up if it's dull, but this one didn't make me give up at all, because it's really good-looking, not only interesting but also brain-burning. Both the heroine and the hero are very good. The heroine's strength is getting stronger step by step. She's kind but not a virgin. The heroine's character is really good. As for the hero, I prefer the performance before and after the time travel. Although the male protagonist in the early stage is a bit inferior in terms of ordinary people's eyes except for his strength, there is a reason for this. The reason is not clear yet, but I believe that when the truth comes out, we will understand what is going on. Therefore, the author has worked harder and wants to see the truth more and more. I can't sleep at night thinking about it.

It's super good-looking. The plot is novel and compact. The heroine doesn't appear to be particularly powerful right away, but grows up gradually. The relationship between An An and the heroine is very warm. At first, I felt that the hero was the tool for the heroine and them to complete their tasks. But later on, the character slowly became more three-dimensional. The relationships and emotions of the characters were also handled very well. There was no such thing as falling in love from the beginning. There were no abrupt plots. The ups and downs of the plot were what attracted me the most. I was originally prepared for the big story. I read it when I had time, but I couldn't stop reading it. The beginning made me feel a bit boring, maybe I'm used to reading it. When other immortal writers came to participate in the selection and show off their talents, it was like the immortal competition. (This one didn't attract me after reading dozens of chapters, and it felt like a routine.) But now that I read it, I feel that this kind of book is more attractive to me. It doesn't mean to disappoint me [almost crying] [almost crying], I just like it more. I highly recommend this book, thank you to the author💪. Hey, I don't have much literary talent and I don't know how to describe this book. All in all, it's good to read [laughs][laughs]

You can feel that it is a very grand world view, and the characters are very vivid. It feels like starting from the chapter back to 30,000 years ago, the story officially begins. Before that, it was basically the basic logic/world background. Watching the happy interaction between the three main characters is truly the most healing moment! (Le Le An An Luo Ming Zheng) I hope they can reunite as soon as possible! Some of the introduction and foreshadowing are a bit cumbersome, but the shortcomings do not hide the flaws, and overall it is still very interesting. (It was really funny when An An called Luo Mingzheng daddy in the early days. Do you like this kind of bad humor where serious people are forced to act nonsense?) It feels like it would take at least nearly 1,000 chapters to write the entire book? After all, we have to describe the overlapping of various forces such as the three people who ascended, luck, and the Phoenix/Secret Realm. And after Luo Mingzheng ascended, their family's exploration of the upper world? I feel like Aokilong might need some rounding out? There is also the connection between the indescribable and the upper world.

It's super beautiful, but the subject matter is very new. After that, the content and plot are very twists and turns. You may not be able to guess what the plot is just by looking at the title, but the plot... Although I thought it was a bit old-fashioned at first, the more I read it, the more novel it became, and then I wanted to scold the author. The first time I read it, I was like, well, the original male protagonist and the original female protagonist in the plot, I thought, what can I say about them, they are very good, why not make them a Taoist couple? Then I really wanted to scold the author for making me so angry that my liver hurt when I read it in the middle of the night. Then when I got to more than 300 chapters, I actually had this experience. Wow, it was really novel and I had never seen it before.