The Dreamer of the Naruto World

She performed too well in the Kakashi test and in River Country. The character of the protagonist was directly exposed, making others realize that the protagonist is not an ordinary girl. Although I have never watched Lord of Mysteries, I can guess that this sequence is probably calculated secretly. If it is exposed, it means...

In my current opinion, this book is worth reading. This book touches on areas that other Naruto novels have not written about. The description of the characters is delicate and the understanding of the characters is too advanced. There is no procrastination, only the intrigues of the ninja world. The characters are created so well that I, the wild boar, finally ate the fine chaff. There are no poisonous points, only chaff. The combination of Naruto and the Lord of Mysteries may seem a bit ridiculous to you. I thought so too before reading it, but after reading it, you will feel that the author has blended these two themes appropriately. "Naruto" created by Kishimoto is originally a cruel jungle world. Other Naruto stories only care about the fun and don't care about the conspiracies. To put it bluntly, this book is just about playing with IQ. How can the protagonist survive in this jungle world without any brains? (The above are my personal suggestions. If you have any objections, I would not agree)

This book is so beautiful and so Machiavellian. However, in terms of technological reform, it is not recommended to write in depth. On the one hand, writing in depth is easy to collapse. After all, dimensionality reduction will cause many factors to seriously deviate from the original outline and plot. The subsequent plot of this character may be OOC. On the other hand, it may be too focused. Many novels about technological reform are full of problems, as if they are playing house and buying furniture, which is a bit off topic. I think it would be good to mention the technological reforms appropriately. More important combat technologies could be mentioned (after all, Naruto), but it would be nice to mention some innovations in food, clothing, housing and transportation. Don't focus on the key points [Thinking] After all, the focus of Naruto fan fiction is on the various plots of the original characters. They can be changed, but they cannot be made so that the plot proportion of the "original characters" (the protagonist's younger brother and so on) is greater than that of the original characters. If you miss this, no one will see it. You can focus on writing about the various obstacles encountered during the reform, conspiracy and conspiracy yyds[]

8:04 Is definitely underestimated. The writing gets better as you go into the later stages. Especially when Danzo Kuro Zetsu is deceived into a three-in-one hot pot, it fits the original work perfectly. I haven't finished reading it yet, so I can only say that this book is really well written. I will give it five stars. I hope I can continue to work hard in the future. I will mark it first and review it after reading it. I take back what I said. The more I write, the more confused I become. The first 100 pictures were okay, but then I feel like the author has changed.

Most of the writing is very good, but I am a little confused about the heroine's advice to Uchiha Itachi and Kakashi. Why does she want to show her intelligence and scheming at this time? Like when you were in the ninja school, you could do it by adding fuel to the flames behind the scenes and making people think that everything was entirely your own idea, right? I understand her need to have things go her way, but this can be accomplished more quietly, without having to be so pushy.

Cool! ! ! I just like the feeling of controlling everything. Your book is a bit similar to the Dreamer who was promoted from Hokage to a certain point, but it looks good. I suggest you refer to it more.

The author's writing is very good, and the plot design is very good. For the first time, I feel that the supporting characters in a Naruto fanfic can be impressive. The character design of Mutanoguchi is very good👍In the early stage, it was written that he would do anything to climb up. In the end, his death showed a little person's resistance to the injustice of reality when he was desperate, which made this character sublimated. Judging from the plot designed by the author now, as long as it doesn't fall apart later, it will definitely score 9 or above. Of course, I am just expressing my own opinions here. Come on, author, I will always support you! ! ! (✌️^ω^)

This is really good [take a closer look]. It is best to write content in fan fiction that is different from the original work without ruining the character [get it]. That is, you can see familiar characters and novel content, instead of adding a dispensable character and living a very familiar plot [cool]. Only those like this are excellent fan fiction. If the author works harder, he can also have a work that is different from the original work. Just like the relationship between Journey to the West and Journey to the West, it originated from another classic of Journey to the West [Blowing Kiss]

I feel it should be at a level of around 9.1. It is not suitable for readers who like to deduct the set combat power. It is situation guidance and the mystery is weakened in it, but the quality is very good. By the way, just change books after 168. If you like Akaashi, you can try it.

Woc, I was stunned for a moment while reading this IQ conspiracy theory. It's so awesome. The more I read it, the better it gets. I feel a sense of anticipation.

It doesn't matter what the combat power is. This book is just as good-looking without the mysterious elements. What the hell is behind that? Content is confusing

Shin Naruto, like the reincarnation of Shin Megami, reproduces the original Kishimoto plot that was stopped by the screenwriter back then. The various power struggles are very exciting and great. Needless to say, it is one of the best Naruto fanfics on Tomato.

Perfect, the protagonist has a high IQ and the game of intelligence is very good.

It's amazing, the author really writes about the feeling of manipulating people's hearts! ! The proportion of intelligence is very large. If you want to see the battle tower opening, the proportion here is a bit small. It is a combination of the Lord of Mysteries and Naruto. The heroine is very good at grasping people's hearts. She feels like she has become Itachi's life mentor (I feel like she has deceived him [cool]). She has also organized many big organizations to watch behind her. In this article, Danzo is just a little Karami, unable to defeat the third generation. The third generation has already become a power monster through hard work in the position of Hokage, but such a third generation is no match for the heroine! The timeline we are in is a little before Naruto, but the fourth generation has passed, and there is no contact with other Xiaoqiang. The opponents in Konoha Village are basically three generations of people! All in all, the heroine has a very high level of resourcefulness, and with the development of the ritual, she can also become a T0 combat player [Send Heart]! It's been a long time since I've seen an article that respects readers' intelligence so much and writes about so many major events! ! Come on, look forward to the end! ! When it comes to the development of the River Country organization, the author seems to be a bit sleepwalking. He posts so many long strings without dividing them into paragraphs, and there are so many words with typos [what]. The first part is so good, but when it reaches about 160, the text later is all about another novel. You can cut it off when you see 160 [laughs] I really have no idea. Why should another novel be written here? The rating will not be changed. The previous text does support this rating, but I can only say that if you reach 160, stop reading. The rest is already a completely different novel [angry]

Simple review: The book is very interesting, the wits are strong, and the plot of strategy and politics is excellent. The current shortcoming of this book, which cannot even be called a shortcoming, is only one thing, and that is the weakening of the protagonist's ability. Compared to the setting of Lord of Mysteries, the protagonist's path ability is only about one percent of that of the original Mysteries. I can understand the intention of this arrangement. After all, the focus of writing is Shokuhou's intelligence and strategizing, rather than the invincibility of activating skills to kill. This writing is not only to adapt to the low combat power of the Naruto world compared to the mystery, but also to better highlight the characters and unfold the plot. The reason for such a detailed review on this point is because I am more like emphasizing: Even with such "shortcomings" that are not even called "shortcomings", this book deserves five stars. Some books deserve five stars because they are worth it, and some books deserve five stars because the limit is only five. This book is undoubtedly the latter - 99/100

Read Chapter 113 in one go. It's a pity that such a beautiful article was not read by me until it was finished. Even if there are flaws, there are few plots that are as good as this one in terms of the portrayal of the protagonist. The plot is interesting and not draggy, and the upgrades are intuitively reflected. The protagonist's battle of wits is also very enjoyable to watch. The character creation has a distinct personality. It is a very good fanfic, and it is still very novel to enter. Although I have not read Mystery or Railgun, I have only heard about it and ran away after reading it. Since I don't understand the setting very well, there is no problem in understanding this article. Another point is the protagonist's justice. I don't like the stupid Madonna, because it's just a condescending way to persuade people to do good without painstaking efforts, but I recognize justice and at least it gives people comfort.

It's considered a profound thought among Tomatoes full of cool articles. The only problem is that the pace is too fast and the protagonist confronts Naruto too early.

The game and psychological warfare between the protagonist and the enemy are quite exciting, and the writing is also very beautiful.

God among gods, the best Naruto fanfic this year

It's very interesting, so don't worry about being brainless. The characters are all above the line in IQ, but it definitely has a bit of the novel's unique air of trance, but I think it's quite appropriate. Moreover, most of the books tend to be set in the Naruto world (with my own changes and understandings). Apart from the sequence, the mysterious content is still a bit short (compared to the battle book, it focuses more on political battles and intellectual battles). So far, everything is normal. I personally like it very much and the volume is large (the following chapter is 6,000 words). In addition, I must mention that this book has a pure pedigree [like] [face covering]

Although there are some differences from Naruto, it does not affect the overall excellence of the plot and characterization. In the early stage, it can be kept calm, and in the mid-term, it is not too abrupt to show strength. I hope it can be maintained in the later stage. The key point is that neither the protagonist nor the supporting characters are brainless, and some minor characters also have their own ways of living and are less poisonous. The current plot is too extreme, especially the conversation with Itachi (although it may be nonsense to achieve the purpose of hypnotizing Itachi) that feels like it directly blocks the road without giving any other solutions. Moreover, teammates are too important as anchors for humanity. We should develop more anchor points to stabilize our humanity instead of being held back by one anchor.

Change order, the writing is excellent, it is a strange work in the Naruto Transformation novel, there is almost no description of the transformation of women into female bodies, and it can be read as a genderless protagonist. The behind-the-scenes layout is combined with the magic transformation plot and political intrigue. In short, it has a good idea. After chapter 168, the plots of other novels are grafted on, so you don't need to read it. In short, the word count is worthy of this rating.

How can I put it, there is no doubt that it looks good, but I am very curious about what the plot will be like later. Uchiha seems to have escaped, and Danzo is nominally dead. Now I am looking forward to how the author will write it. I hope that the subsequent battle of wits can give me a shocking feeling again. Also, I am Shokuhou's dog! (Today happens to be a ba linkage, watch me take Shokuhou home)

This book is a solid five-star rating in my heart I like the protagonist's character very much, and there's nothing wrong with the plot. I just want to ask, the author, will you write anything else after finishing this book? I'm looking forward to it

It's super good-looking, and the representative words of high intelligence feel very good-looking. It feels like my brain has been blown away, and my ideas are also very good. The creativity of the second village and other ideas are also very good. It also supports the author to continue writing. Come on! [Adoration][Adoration]

This book is well written and I like it very much, but I feel lonely for some reason. I feel that the protagonist has no care. Everyone in the ninja world is like an NPC (it's not that the characters are not perfect). The protagonist is like a player who is crazy about the main story. It's too cold🥶

The protagonist uses his ingenuity to calculate people's hearts, and through several fiddling with the original world line, he guides the world in the direction he wants to see. The most important thing is that the author's analysis of people's hearts and the environment is well-founded, and the development of things does not destroy the character. This can be called a masterpiece. The protagonist's strength is suppressed in the article. After all, it is understandable because it mainly writes about resourcefulness. However, if there is a plot of "abusing the protagonist" due to lack of strength in the future, this can only reflect the protagonist's "ill-consideration", and I may deduct one star for this.

How should I put it? When reading novels, you can't take it seriously. Anyway, I feel that it is very deep, and I enjoyed watching the various wits and layouts. Then the analysis between various countries is quite reasonable. As a novel, the biggest shortcoming should be that there are many missing words and typos, but the logic is clear and does not affect the perception.

Until now, I feel that except for the part about River Country which was revealed too early, this is a very good wit-fighting article.

The writing is very good. Has the author considered writing about Wenye? I think Fumino is very suitable for this kind of high-IQ game. But at the same time, this book is also well written, but I feel like there is something missing. I can't explain it. Maybe it's missing the passion that belongs to Naruto, but I have to say that IQ is really high.