The Alchemist's Code

I don't know why it's a bit unpopular. Maybe it's because of the platform. It's a pity that this book is on Tomato. Just make a simple review, give it five stars, and look forward to the future. The power system is very interesting, with a Western fantasy style but it also contains the product of modern thinking. Apart from the fact that the protagonist is a bit over the top, there are basically no big problems. It is recommended to describe more characters later. Without a direct comparison, it will appear weak. Then in terms of character creation, it is quite satisfactory, with almost no poisonous points. The heroine's creation needs to be strengthened. The emotions and thoughts of the protagonist are not deep enough. This is measured according to the standards of past masterpieces. It is not a criticism. I hope I can do better in the future. The writing is first-rate and the depiction of environmental scenes is excellent. The concept is not bad, it is a bit imitated by "Dragon", but the problem is not big. The power system of dragon is more simple than that of alchemy. In this regard, the potential is very great. As long as there is no disgusting poison, this book should be popular. Finally, I have a few suggestions. The handling of the lingering sound at the end of the climax needs to be strengthened. It is recommended to focus more on the three-dimensional shaping of the characters to make the characters more full and three-dimensional. After all, character shaping is the core of everything in this kind of novel. Very optimistic, hope to continue to persevere, and wish it a great success in the future.

No one has a good book [pouts]. The pace may be a bit fast for me, but it's suitable for this kind of platform, and it's a bit more enjoyable here. Although the characters are typical, there are details in their portrayal. The plot is running fast, waiting for the next update

It's really good, much better than those mindless cool articles.

A bit of a pity on tomatoes. . .