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I feel like Shu Huang is still worth reading, but my expectations shouldn't be too high. It's not bad if you lose your mind and read it as a white novel. [Eat melon]

The book is ok but here are the suggestions 1. The theme of this book is to change your destiny, and changing your destiny requires strength, means and strategies. The heroine in this book does not have these but only the love between children. This makes me feel that they are like useless vases. Therefore, this suggestion is to strengthen the heroine and write in a ruthless direction. 2. Try to write in the direction of awakening memories as much as possible, otherwise it will make people think that this is a sequel, which will affect the perception. 3. The sooner you want to change the villain's mind, the better, otherwise it will feel like giving away a girl. After all, he died many times in the early stage and most of them were because of women. So it's not a big problem when you think of so many things in the early stage, but it will really affect the happiness in the later stage. 4. You can also write the heroine in a yandere direction. Think about it, he died so many times and you died for him so many times. If they are not crazy, who is? This book is already much better, both in terms of characters and plot. I am much better than most villains. Especially recently, it is really comfortable to use daily ways to advance the main plot. If you can, I hope you can strengthen some of the influence of the heroine. For example: at a certain business banquet where the villain is, one of the three heroines in the front can appear, and he can also bring a secretary or something. This can improve the previous characters and promote the plot. After these protagonists appear, some more difficult protagonists can appear, and it can even be said to be a narrow escape situation. After all, this is in line with the character of destiny. Finally, I hope this book can be better. The above are just my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, please don't comment.

It's a pretty good book, with nothing poisonous, but there are some pitfalls that I don't know if they will be filled in in the future. The setting is also novel, and the main character in the forty chapters is no longer a eunuch. The only drawback is that the status bar may be a bit underused. My suggestion is to let Long Aotian be a middle school boy, and don't be a child of destiny. Give it five stars, keep writing, don't be a eunuch.

The plot is okay, and the writing is not a novice. After reading more than 70 chapters, I found it quite interesting. Until the fierce character was changed or something else was added, I immediately gave up. What a pity. I just don't like to keep up with updates, and there are not many chapters left to read, so I'll stop here. I hope the author's writing will make them happier and happier.

After reading Chapter 11, I have some plot questions that I hope can be answered. I roughly sorted out the timeline. In the normal storyline, Xiao Fan appears first, Lin Feng appears two years later, and Chu Tian appears ten years later (it may be less than ten years, but the little killer only came into contact with the protagonist ten years later). The time when Chu Tian appears is unknown, but judging from the number of deaths of the male protagonist, it should be at the end. If you understand it this way, the timeline of this story is very long. In theory, during the few times Xiao Fan killed the male protagonist, the next few destiny male protagonists should not have appeared yet, right? Then Liu Nian should at least not know about Xiao Fan and his fiancée killing the male protagonist, right? Or is it that the memories that the heroine got are all the experiences of the male protagonist, and who did she see who killed the male protagonist from her memories? (This explanation is more reasonable, but it is not mentioned in the article) I have finished reading the updated content so far, and I like this book very much. The plot is not procrastinating. Although there is some tension in the early stage, what should be made clear is made clear, instead of some books where the male protagonist and the female protagonist go back and forth for hundreds of chapters and end up unfinished. The heroines currently appearing are all very well portrayed, and the author has a very high level of writing emotional dramas. I hope that the quality can be maintained in the future.

200,000 Words to cheer myself up [crying] Millions are over, give yourself some flowers~

It's still pretty good, the plot isn't too bad, and the writing is pretty good. It's pretty good.

A very good "urban novel about the rebirth of a villain" I have read many articles of this type, large and small, and this one is considered to be of high quality. First of all, the male protagonist is absolutely top-notch, so don't worry about the eunuch. Secondly, the rationality of the male protagonist is very good. Many "reborn villain urban novels" are either cowards or villains. In this case, the male protagonist has a clear goal from the beginning, and is neither coward nor evil. Third, the female protagonists are well portrayed and basically not too revealing (for the time being). The fourth is the setting after rebirth. It is very good. It is better than listening to the voice of the heart and being reborn together with the heroine. There will always be bugs in listening to the voice of the heart, and the heroine's rebirth will also be due to the estrangement in the previous life. This kind of manipulation of the heroine dissolves the feeling of estrangement. After seeing the data, I obviously feel that the data has dropped. I think the main reason is that the writing of the Japanese chapter is too poor. There are too many problems in the Japanese chapter. First, it discarded all "former heroines", which is very bad behavior in harem writing. Second, the characters in the Japanese chapter are too bad, especially the character of Yui Aragaki, which is too isolated. It would be best not to write real female stars into the novel. Third, the system was abandoned. The panel was found to have no such function, and the laughter was much less.

After Liu Nian appeared on the scene, I had a question: Is Gu Wanqing still innocent after ten years of breaking off the engagement? What does this author have to say? The timeline is too big. Ten years have passed and the protagonist is almost 40. Can the heroines maintain their innocence?

Judging from this book, the author should think that women are strong and men are weak in life, that is, women are active and men are passive. I am right, right? [Laughter]

Lin Ao fell to the ground. It was only then that she broke free from some restrictions, and her own emotions returned to her instantly. "No!!!!" Why, why exactly? She snatched the gun from Xiao Fan's hand. Xiao Fan thought she was going to take a shot, so he gave it to her. "Bang!" Another gunshot rang out. She took her own life! She would rather commit suicide than hurt Xiao Fan [crying] You can imagine how deep the love is

Not bad. The protagonist was timid in the beginning, but after more than forty chapters, Tiandao stood up after his heart was enlarged. What follows is the classic part of hammering a man and collecting a woman. The overall writing style is comfortable and joyful, and it's something that even a non-book reader can read. It's not a loss if you read it, but it's okay if you don't read it.

Yes, there is nothing poisonous. It is recommended not to use your brain to see the better effect [laughter][laughter][laughter]

Liu Nian doesn't want to become the cp author of the male protagonist

Long Aozhen can get along with him. Seeing how he beat Xiao Fan to death, they feel like they can become good brothers.

The villain article is already pretty good, but the updates are too slow. This should be at least ten per day, author.

Everyone understands, non-toxic and harmless [you taste it carefully] If you don't like to see it, please don't hurt it, respect each other's hobbies

I personally think it's very good

Okay, watch it without thinking, it's definitely very interesting

Invincible, I'll use a Thomas rotary shower head

No one is watching? I think the writing is quite good, and there are basically no poisonous points.

It feels pretty good. It's different from other stories about reborn villains. It's unique. The protagonist doesn't hide all the time. He soon starts to fuck his stunned sons [please update](ง •̀_•́)ง

Five stars, no plot of forcing a girl to be given away, no big bugs

Very nice! Mainly because the setting is quite novel, come on! [Blowing kiss] All in all, it looks great!

It's very beautiful, good luck to the author!

You know Douyin short videos, the videos in them are like this, they can be directly reproduced

It's very beautiful. There are many benefits from reverse promotion.

I thought about it and commented on it. Among the recent villain stories, Long Aotian is too dramatic. Sometimes I feel that he is the male protagonist.

I give five points because Long Aotian

Super nice harem story