From the Start, I Trained Soldiers as an Instructor, Forging an Imperial Path in a Sea of Blood!

I wrote it myself, so a five-star review isn't too much, right?

The God of War Returns to Lincheng "I, Xiao Tianyou, have been in the army for ten years and today I finally return to Lin City. Things are really different." Xiao Tianyou stood on a high building and looked down at Lin City. "Your Majesty, there is someone who needs me from Lincheng County Government." Next to him, Lincheng County Government stood respectfully, not daring to be disrespectful at all. "Oh, it's true, Lei Ben, you go and follow the county magistrate to find out where my wife and daughter are living now and how they are doing." Although Xiao Tianyou's face was calm, his eyes became brighter and brighter as he spoke. "Yes, Your Majesty, God of War," Lei Ben, who has now become a general next to him, knelt down on one knee and replied respectfully. I wrote it randomly, feel free to use the following content as you wish

It's not bad. If it's written well, there should be many people watching it later. Of course, the bad ending is another matter. For now, at least the thinking is clear and I know the choices. Later development will depend on the details and layout, exchange of interests, development concepts, plot structure, etc. I will write about one or two defeats. People only need to have pressure and goals. It will grow faster. I still need to write about the truth that arrogant soldiers must be defeated. Then write about some passionate defenses and field battles. The plots will be more tragic. Write about some planning and layout and the narrow victory of the supporting characters in the mutual game. Don't write brainless all the time, making the whole world look like the protagonist has a brain. A few personal suggestions, I am an old bookworm [eat melon]

Beautiful, love watching. I think it's well written. Of course, the author may be affected by the comments, so the early pace is a bit fast. For example, the destruction of the original Qian Kingdom felt too rushed and the writing was not very good. Of course, I believe that the future content will be more exciting. In addition, the author may have new realms behind him, otherwise he would have finished writing. Come on, author, I believe in you [Like][Like][Like][Like]

I want to see the protagonist quickly become a lord, big or small. Then establishing a country is just like the Marquis of Daqian. The theme is to quickly establish the country and then start the war to unify. Come on, come on, update quickly!

It's okay, it feels a bit cool to read. But it's reasonable and logical. It's just that the descriptions in some places are not detailed enough and almost feels like it, but in other aspects it's okay. [Laughing evilly][eating melon][eating melon]

Come on, do you want money? Want? No!

Not bad, come on, come on, come on

I give it 5 stars, it's good to watch, and I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.

It looks good, I love watching it, keep going!