After Time Travel, I Became a Child God

It's pretty good, but the speed is too fast. Except for the World of Warcraft where the population is stuck, the rest is just a flat push. This book is good enough to read when you are short of books. The writing was pretty good, but the pace felt too fast.

No one is watching? There is no one to talk to. If there is no one, I will start to be lazy?

Well, well, authors who do not restrict cheating at all should be well rewarded! ! ! I've seen the latest chapter, and I still don't suppress the golden finger. The plot is a bit confusing, but it doesn't matter. Only one person who doesn't suppress the golden finger will get five stars.

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the readers like this? It seems that the readers are just being sentimental. My brother is weak, so he just needs to rest more. It's the reader's fault that he urges his brother so much. He hurts his body, which also makes the reader feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether he hurts his body or not, what does it have to do with the readers?

It is indeed harmless to advance the main plot in the early stage, but I did not expect that the later chapter, starting from "Welfare", would collapse in the direction of a harem story. It's like the taste has changed after seeing the escort again (I may not have noticed it at first). It's just that it seems that it hasn't escaped from that state. The direction of the writing gives me the feeling that it may not have escaped from that direction (I can vaguely see that the details of the narration have changed a bit) [face covering] I'd better pay attention to it. If I write a harem plot, I hope I can give it more thought or downplay it. (Writing after directing, maybe it will be better). Overall, it's very good, and it also maintains the main plot of the early stage (from the magical world to the ancient world, some details may have been broken before, but overall it's not harmful).

This book has a great beginning, really, it can be called the beginning of a myth, but then... Although the follow-up is almost impossible, the author has been updating steadily and has not updated it at all, and he persisted even though the score is not high. The novel is basically a four-star level, but this five-star is the meaning of the author's stability and persistence, even if the later part is really not very good.

Others are quick to wear it, but you are very quick to wear it. The world has passed before you even take a closer look [laughing and crying]

It's quite satisfactory, Western fantasy + variety comics + its own unique style. It reminds me of the variety comics from a few years ago. It has similarities with the Dimensional Code. If the protagonist had a lower moral bottom line, I think I could give it five stars.

I've finished reading it, it's pretty good. The aspect of the divine system reminds me of the fanfic Xiling Empire that I read before, but it's easy to write. The author should try hard to write about 1,000 chapters [laughing] [like]

You can see it before changing the system, but everything has changed after changing the system.

I read this book not because of lolita, but because of saving the world

Author, please come to a devilish high school world. @ Let's have another rebellious world of Lelouch and the world of the fox demon matchmaker.

Yes, the subject matter is very interesting, but the pace is slow. There are many things that are said in one stroke and it is easy to miss. I missed the setting before and thought the author didn't write it. I was embarrassed. The details will be better when expanded, please work hard.

Not bad, worth a look It feels a little watery, just so-so

It's okay, but there's something wrong with the protagonist's personality. Although it's a variety comic, his personality doesn't have to be that of a pretty boy from a Japanese or Korean comic, right?

It looks good and suits my taste, but it's just too little. I hope that the protagonist can create a family, just like the other world, and you can become stronger by working hard, and you can create a dungeon. Let the little lolita be so strong that they become abnormal. Then arrange a few strong men to invade. When they confront the little lolita, they will be full of confidence, until they collapse and cry, rolling on the ground, [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] The protagonist cannot create the world for the time being, but he can create some powerful helpers, such as the realm demon Yakumo Purple.

Real and objective, multi-dimensional description, so beautiful that you can be fooled Add five stars.

Are you going to Xiling Empire? Are you going to Xiling? Are you going to Xiling? Say important things three times

The introduction is quite attractive, the details are a hodgepodge, it's not bad, it seems to be a new author, I'll give it a five-star support haha ​​1v1~

Why don't you update it anymore? If you have something to say, if nothing happens, just say quit. Don't hang around [what]

It feels like big eyeballs

The story of an ultimate otaku lolita who doesn't care about anything else for the sake of lolita Some words and deeds are too crude

The overall framework is good, but the writing style needs to be strengthened, giving it a retro beauty.

The plot is good but the writing is poor, it feels a bit like a running account, keep up the good work

It can be seen that it was written by humans, not AI. This is a cool article. It is all familiar game animations, but the pace is a bit fast.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. The plot of Semi-Invincible is a bit bland, but it's enjoyable to watch. It's a good way to kill time, but I don't feel like there's much of a climax [laughter]

It seems that the author has read the Dimensional Codex. But it's well written. Come on, author!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Okay, pretty good-looking

Don't you mean the young god? Confused, where is God?