The Fall of the King's Heart: Overturning General Qing Leng After Rebirth

The content of the article is novel, the structure is reasonable, smooth and coherent, and natural and accessible. The details are described with great ingenuity. Very knowledgeable. By enriching the character's language and actions, the character's ideological quality is brought out. The imagination of the article is reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent. The vivid portrayal of details can effectively reveal the inner world of the characters, which is the success of this article. Recommended, recommended, super nice

Ahhhhhh, scream, it's so beautiful,,, the characters of the male and female protagonists are so good,,, I'm really at a loss for words, it's just beautiful, the plot is so good,, the soft beauty, the pseudo-brother and sister in the male protagonist's heart,,, they all really poked me

Why is the rating so low? This book is very beautiful. The female protagonist is smart and brave, and the male protagonist is resourceful. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is long-lasting, the love is endless, and they depend on each other. The love that goes in both directions is heart-warming.

The pace of this book is indeed slow for those who are used to reading fast-paced and refreshing novels, but if you read it slowly, you won't feel like you have finished it. Some comments said that the heroine is stupid, but I think it fits the situation of a fourteen-year-old girl. She is just a concubine from a small official family, with no connections and little ability. She was a chess piece in her previous life. After being reborn, she relied on a little planning to find her own way to survive. No one may do better than her at this start. The characters written by the author are quite real, and the causes and consequences of various consequences can be explained clearly, and the logic is closed. The male protagonist's period of emotional struggle was well written, but the supporting role was a pity for He Yunzhi. At that time, I really hoped that he and the female protagonist could make it work. Then there's the heroine's eldest brother. It would be nice if someone could give him some guidance in the end. The last extra chapter is about the male protagonist, the eldest brother. This is so appropriate. He is not a bad person. I also particularly want to know what happened to him in his last life after he found out that he was being used. Unexpectedly, he was still a key figure and it was complete. It's still worth watching, so take your time. [Laugh]

Why is it only 7 o'clock? ! I don't understand! ! The only thing I can read in Tomato during this time is a book! ! It can definitely be rated as 9 points🥹The male protagonist is so sexual and the female protagonist is so cute

I don't know how long the author will make it. I hope that the follow-up will not be too abusive to the body and mind [laughing] Of course, the taboo feeling of pseudo-orthopedics can be more, and the heart-breaking feeling of wanting to love but not being able to love can be more, hahahahahaha~(¯▽¯~)~The male and female protagonists are good, and the female protagonist is also smart. It is great that there is no conflicting plot. The plot is also interlocking. I look forward to the follow-up.

I recommend it to be a super good-looking movie, with a clear storyline and content flow, the heroine's IQ is online, and the plot doesn't drag on.

It's so good, I recommend it. The story has a good rhythm and I want to keep reading. . Anyway, it looks good, but updates are slow.

The author's writing is very good and the story is told satisfactorily. The female protagonist is reborn and saves the male protagonist. She is captured because of her beauty and has a bond with the male protagonist. There are no obvious logical problems. The character creation is also good. It can be rated above 9 points.

I don't know why no one has read it. The plot of this book is tighter and more reasonable than many high-scoring articles. It's best to read during the ambiguous relationship. The male and female protagonists are both very good. There are no cheats. Everything depends on cleverness. It's really good to read. I recommend it.

HE is reborn to redeem each other. In the first hundred chapters, the heroine is very smart and has clear goals. She falls in love with the hero by accident. From the perspective of the male protagonist, it is very emotional to fall in love with the "sister" he mistakenly thought. 160 Is best to jump straight to 180. It's almost 3/4 of the way to the end. I wonder if it's because the short story doesn't handle the family relationship delicately enough, especially after the heroine learns about her life experience. What is surprising in the extra chapter is that the male protagonist begs the female protagonist to be reborn, instead of begging his own brother to be reborn. It felt like I was rushing through the chapter. All in all, Dzogchen is very enjoyable to watch, especially the first half which focuses on the heroine.

The story is okay, it has to be more than 8 points, the writing is okay, not draggy, and the love between the fathers is a bit bloody, but everything else is good. The only thing missing is that it is eye-catching and there are too many words in each paragraph. The layout on Tomato is not so refreshing and easy to read.

I like the male protagonist and female protagonist design [Blowing Kiss]

It's so good, I've already seen the ending before I knew it. I rarely follow novels to the end, but this one is really good. Both the male and female protagonists have their own mouths, so even if there is any misunderstanding, they will be cleared up in no time! I'm very satisfied with this! Although the female protagonist is soft and delicate, she is not silly and sweet when things happen, but is very intelligent. The male protagonist is powerful, and the overall plot progress is not slow. OK OK! Five stars, it's a pity for the master, why did he just receive a box lunch?

A good book is a book that I can read in one sitting. The author's writing is a little green, but fortunately the plot is relatively compact. It's not a heroine type, more of a spoiled wife, but overall it's good, not abusive, and it's a type I can accept.

Very good-looking, a little similar to my cousin Wanfu. They both flirt with the male protagonist after being reborn, and the female protagonists are both gorgeous and have very cute and kind personalities [laughs] Earlier, the male protagonist thought that he and the female protagonist were brother and sister, but I tortured the male protagonist to death. I felt sorry for the male protagonist and couldn't control the tears. Now it is finally clarified that there is no blood relationship, and lovers will eventually get married. It makes me feel very sweet when I watch it [laughs], but I am worried about the poison on the male protagonist [grievance] I hope the male and female protagonists can be together well, and don't abuse me anymore [crying]

It's beautiful, but not many people see it.

The characters are described in a three-dimensional way, giving a sense of immediate vision. The content has its ups and downs. Makes me want to watch and keep watching. Come on, author. Update faster and faster, lest you lose sight of it again midway.

Very beautiful, super beautiful

The plot is very interesting

It's great. I've watched it all.

Not bad, very good, happy ending

The country is fine. In the previous life, the eldest brother was exploited by a traitor, which led to the collapse of the country. Afterwards, he spent the rest of his life in exchange for the heroine to be reborn, saving the hero, protecting the family and the country, and winning the world.

Super nice. It's just not finished. What kind of suffering is this? I don't want to do anything every day. Just waiting for the update [face covering] This male protagonist is the husband in my heart. Oh, what's the matter with it being sweet and astringent?

It's so good and worth reading that I've added it to my bookshelf so I can read it again when I'm short of books!

Who gave the low score? Let me prove it, it looks great! The heroine is very smart, both of them have their mouths, their explanations are timely, and the love scenes are so well written hahahahaha

The concept is good and the writing is better. I won't stop reading it. The author has updated it a lot. Very good, but too short

The author's writing is delicate and lifelike, and it feels great. I don't know if there are other wonderful and beautiful articles

Okay, okay, I love it, I love it, both the male and female protagonists love it. I hope they can live happily in the parallel world. Song Heng's inner struggle and pull when he thought Wan Tang was his sister was so touching.

It's nice and not protracted, it's interlocking, I like the male and female protagonists