[Campus + Heavenly Bamboo Horse + Reunion after a long separation + Two-way redemption]
Xie Muchen originally thought that the woman would stand in front of him in a high-profile manner with her little oil bottle, waiting for Xie Bolin to solemnly announce their new identities.
I just didn't expect that the little dragster couldn't become his stepsister, and there was no place for him.
When we met again, she seemed like a cat that had fallen into the water, so Xie Muchen picked her up and took her home as a matter of course.
#If you don't want it, it's mine
Cold and slightly paranoid boy x pessimistic and slightly awkward soft girl
Reader comments
I think this article not only attracted me to the emotional line between Zhizhi and Twilight, but also the author's description of the scenery moved me very much. He used the description of the scenery to highlight the mood of the characters, which made it feel very immersive. The male and female protagonists are both detail-oriented and very considerate of each other's feelings. They are each other's salvation. Zhou Qichen approaches the heroine through Zhao Keke, and Zhao Keke wants to get closer to Zhou Qichen through the heroine. The relationship of mutual use is destined not to have a pure and clean relationship. The second male lead's subplot was well written, and after reading it, I felt even more sorry for the female lead. In fact, you can also write extras: the story of Lin Yingyue and Shen Jifeng, Guan Jinmeng and Chi Ye, the two pairs of CPs. The early framework is very good, but the later writing is a little bit out of control. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to your new works. The article is short and concise, worth reading!!!
I give it a five-star rating out of support for the new book. In fact, I would rather give it a four-star rating. It should be said that the plot is still very good and the sense of immersion is also very good, as is the writing. It would be nice if some minor mistakes could be corrected.
First of all, there are objective errors: I didn't find many in this regard, except for one, which is that the names of Zhou Chengze and Zhou Qichen were sometimes confused in the later period. This can be easily changed.
Then there is my personal opinion, which is relatively irrelevant, but I still recommend taking a look.
First of all, the setting of the heroine's deskmate is a kind of existence, but this setting is only mentioned a few times in the article, but it is not shown. She shows more tenderness in her interaction with the heroine. Personally, I think that since the author gave her such a setting, she should at least occasionally show that temperament in her words and deeds.
Second, some of the dialogue is a bit lengthy. For example, there is a paragraph about school forum comments. I understand that the author wants to show the public's reaction to the relationship between the heroine, Zhou Chengze, and the hero, but the number of comments that appears is a bit too many, which may affect the reading experience. Personally, I think 3-4 such paragraphs are enough each time.
Thirdly, I can't explain why I feel it, but I just feel that the author finished the story a little hastily. And in the last chapter, the author personally mentioned that the daily life of the two people would follow, but the fact is that the novel ended immediately.
Fourth, this is even more irrelevant and is purely my personal understanding. Authors occasionally use nicknames when writing character names, such as Big Dog (Chino) or Little Kitten (the heroine). Nicknames are usually used to build a relationship between two people. As a narrator, the author has no need to get closer to the character, so it is recommended to write the name directly.
Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to the author who wrote this work. I wish you better and better in your subsequent writing career!
May every novel dream come to a successful conclusion.
I have to say it's really beautiful, I kept crying from the beginning to the end, and I don't know why, ugh! It's really beautiful. Trust me, don't miss it if you pass by. I'm sorry if you don't like it. Although the rating is a bit low, it doesn't matter. Don't worry and just watch it! I won't spoil it, as that would be boring, but it's so good to watch! Recommend! !
It's really beautiful! ! ! It suits my taste very well hahahahahahahahahahahahaha [shy] I hope the author can be faster, I really love it [laughs]
It's very interesting. I like the process of the male and female protagonists redeeming each other. I want to watch their daily life together, but the ending is so unexpected that I haven't seen enough.
Not enough! Not enough!
Not bad, not bad, let's do some extras [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][anger]
The author's writing style is quite good, and the plot is also good.
This book can be called a novel that I think could be made into a Korean drama. It's really good and I love it.
I think this article not only attracted me to the emotional line between Zhizhi and Twilight, but also the author's description of the scenery moved me very much. He used the description of the scenery to highlight the mood of the characters, which made it feel very immersive. The male and female protagonists are both detail-oriented and very considerate of each other's feelings. They are each other's salvation. Zhou Qichen approaches the heroine through Zhao Keke, and Zhao Keke wants to get closer to Zhou Qichen through the heroine. The relationship of mutual use is destined not to have a pure and clean relationship. The second male lead's subplot was well written, and after reading it, I felt even more sorry for the female lead. In fact, you can also write extras: the story of Lin Yingyue and Shen Jifeng, Guan Jinmeng and Chi Ye, the two pairs of CPs. The early framework is very good, but the later writing is a little bit out of control. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to your new works. The article is short and concise, worth reading!!!
I give it a five-star rating out of support for the new book. In fact, I would rather give it a four-star rating. It should be said that the plot is still very good and the sense of immersion is also very good, as is the writing. It would be nice if some minor mistakes could be corrected. First of all, there are objective errors: I didn't find many in this regard, except for one, which is that the names of Zhou Chengze and Zhou Qichen were sometimes confused in the later period. This can be easily changed. Then there is my personal opinion, which is relatively irrelevant, but I still recommend taking a look. First of all, the setting of the heroine's deskmate is a kind of existence, but this setting is only mentioned a few times in the article, but it is not shown. She shows more tenderness in her interaction with the heroine. Personally, I think that since the author gave her such a setting, she should at least occasionally show that temperament in her words and deeds. Second, some of the dialogue is a bit lengthy. For example, there is a paragraph about school forum comments. I understand that the author wants to show the public's reaction to the relationship between the heroine, Zhou Chengze, and the hero, but the number of comments that appears is a bit too many, which may affect the reading experience. Personally, I think 3-4 such paragraphs are enough each time. Thirdly, I can't explain why I feel it, but I just feel that the author finished the story a little hastily. And in the last chapter, the author personally mentioned that the daily life of the two people would follow, but the fact is that the novel ended immediately. Fourth, this is even more irrelevant and is purely my personal understanding. Authors occasionally use nicknames when writing character names, such as Big Dog (Chino) or Little Kitten (the heroine). Nicknames are usually used to build a relationship between two people. As a narrator, the author has no need to get closer to the character, so it is recommended to write the name directly. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to the author who wrote this work. I wish you better and better in your subsequent writing career! May every novel dream come to a successful conclusion.
I have to say it's really beautiful, I kept crying from the beginning to the end, and I don't know why, ugh! It's really beautiful. Trust me, don't miss it if you pass by. I'm sorry if you don't like it. Although the rating is a bit low, it doesn't matter. Don't worry and just watch it! I won't spoil it, as that would be boring, but it's so good to watch! Recommend! !
It's really beautiful! ! ! It suits my taste very well hahahahahahahahahahahahaha [shy] I hope the author can be faster, I really love it [laughs]
It's very interesting. I like the process of the male and female protagonists redeeming each other. I want to watch their daily life together, but the ending is so unexpected that I haven't seen enough.
Not enough! Not enough!
Not bad, not bad, let's do some extras [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][anger]
The author's writing style is quite good, and the plot is also good.
This book can be called a novel that I think could be made into a Korean drama. It's really good and I love it.