Star Iron************

Does the author still know what system he is writing? [Awkward laugh]

It's well written, but I think I'm going to start a harem. Three chapters a day is not enough.

So happy Two Tingyun love to dance Alas Little Fu Xuan obediently pulled out carrots Yeah Little Qingque and I are learning to walk Longman is the most beautiful gift Little silver wolf blows gently Fireflies and I spread our wings and fly Not afraid of Sam, not afraid of tiredness Hurry up and carry Xi'er on your back baby Duck shows you the way Oh baby Fireworks give you blessings Oh Exploration is a happy journey The train is your footsteps baby Kama sleeps peacefully in her arms mom baby Jizi is the back of your chair dad You are our darling Star Railway's love will always be with you

It looks good. I can see that the author has paid close attention to Hanabi and has a very good understanding (I think). After all, I have played the one-man show no less than five times and I have reached the same conclusion. It is good. Although I don't know whether it is correct or not, this is about the way Hanabi is in my mind. Is there still a card mother who won't win? I think it's your fault if you don't get the card [laughs evilly] So far I feel very good about this, I feel very good now

Come on, come on, come on

March 7 said that what comes out of the ice is really good

It's interesting. It's very innovative while being based on game-related content. The characters in the book are not broken, but more three-dimensional. I imagined the plot and put other personality labels on the characters. It's not just limited to the game. I like this very much.

It's pretty good, but the author is gone.

Novel, don't ask for so much. It was just a fantasy. It's better to imagine something better. But. Please be patient and reasonable. The imagination is beautiful but you always give me a reason. Otherwise. I will give a negative review

Author, listen to me. Today I'm going to talk about you. You wrote this novel. Please finish it.

I hope I can have a harem

Not bad, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty good. I hope the author will stick with it.

The plot continuity is very strange. It seems that there is no outline and I just write whatever comes to mind, but the content is pretty good.

Tetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt It looks great!

Except for some force values ​​that are wrong, and a bit of the plot that feels like the supporting characters are written without memory, everything else is pretty good. I'd like to see if the author can improve his writing style a little bit. For me, it's stuck on the 5-star line.

It's really good

Very good, good imagination

Very nice looking

Author, do you have a group? Can you please post the deleted content in the group [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Pretty cool! (No! Does it have to be five words?)

It's very entertaining, but I can only read it as a short story, and I'll get bored after reading it for a while.

I personally think it's very beautiful, so please give it a try, author.

It's the first time I've seen Star Iron that makes me feel good. It's so beautiful.

It's very well written [laughs crookedly] It's the first time I've seen such a well written work by a Star Dome Railway fan.

It does give me a bit of a "stomach ache" but "it doesn't matter" it's still very interesting to watch, highly recommended!

The author, the book is very good, the pace is good, the characters are vivid, and the questions are okay. As a newcomer, it is very good.

The relationship with the characters is described in great detail, please come on [please update]

Oyster can be embarrassed, suffer from humiliation, avoid stalking [admiration]

It's really good