I Wield a Ruler That Slays to Bring Peace
我有一尺斩平安
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 60k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
24Chapters
2Reads
679Reads · all time
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Reader comments 4
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After reading the current chapter, I feel that the theme of the idea is good. There are some shadows of God-Slaying and Ping An, which may be similar to the feelings of family and country. Some characters who are not the protagonist can be written with more flesh and blood, such as some Dream Controllers who fight desperately until the last moment of their lives. Then the protagonist will be infected by these unsung heroes, strengthen their faith, and turn their faith into the motivation to become stronger.
It feels similar to God Killing, but ordinary people in Mengxu also know it. Overall, it's very good. The world view is not small. The protagonist should have a cheat, but I can't see it for now. The ruler is very important anyway. Advantages Let me tell you: the world view is not small, it can make readers more daydreaming, and the character description is also good, allowing people to quickly feel the feelings of the characters. It can be said that many pits are laid in the beginning, paving the way for the later stage. Of course, there are also shortcomings: the world view is too big, the writing is not good, and I can't grasp the back. There are not many descriptions of people other than the protagonist. The routines are generally a bit cliché. There are many books of this type, such as academies, superpowers, and plug-ins. It is difficult to stand out. The protagonist's character is a bit... How to put it, sometimes a bitch, sometimes quiet and calm. Although this kind of character is not bad, I prefer to use a quiet and calm character to show the essence of a bitch. It is best to introduce the background earlier because there is no good writing support. It is not clear in advance. It will make people feel that some places are inexplicable Suggestion: Actually, I don't have any suggestions. It's actually quite good if you can keep writing and try to correct some shortcomings. I spent dozens of minutes carefully evaluating it (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)
It feels very good, why haven't I updated it 🍉 [send my heart]
Good, the design is novel and the title is prominent, causing readers to think and attracting readers' interest in reading. PS: Answering skills