Crazy Criticism That the Male Protagonist Is Actually My Obedient Disciple from Another World

I've read a few chapters and it feels good to me. It's quite good and worth reading. If you can tolerate a system that is useless and startled, I decided to abandon the article because of that system. Everyone has their own thoughts and feelings. I am not saying that this system is bad, but I personally find it annoying... From what I've seen, the character design is good, and the protagonist's ability and IQ are online. Since I haven't seen the emotional line yet, I won't say much more. I didn't deliberately smear it, nor did I try to "educate" others. I just read the article for my own thoughts. Freedom of speech, don't curse, just curse, yes, yes, yes, and then rebound.

Awesome, I came from max level! Great author, your writing is so good, I will definitely follow you forever! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's very good, the plot is novel, and the characters are well drawn. But I personally feel that the system is a bit sick, and the character is not my type, which makes it a bit annoying. It feels like it is interfering with the protagonist's actions at every turn. I hope the system goes offline... It doesn't matter if it doesn't go offline. I just hope he won't be in people's minds all the time. After all, when I read system articles, I always have a concern, that is, the system will read something.

This is one of the most interesting books I have read in Tomato. It is moderately sweet and not so boring that I can't stand it anymore. It captures the relationship between the young lovers just right, and the descriptions are just right so that I don't think the protagonist is just a useless yellow head. And although Yan Muhuai is a star, he can still accept it happily because he is an actor. However, if it is the kind of person who is very thorough, it is still not recommended.

It's rare to find a story that progresses normally. I like the writing style and the character of the male protagonist. It's not a clichéd gentleness.

The plot is very interesting and the content is very novel🤔The characters are very rich (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) I like it very much ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The author is very humorous, the plot description is very vivid and picturesque, the characters are distinct, the plot is smooth, and he is very good at twists and turns... Cough... Foreshadowing. I finished reading the previous book. Fortunately, if you have not read the other book of the author, you can read the book "The Rebirth of the Boss" while waiting for the update.

I finished reading it in one go, and the emotional line between the protagonist's attack and suffering was too little! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I want to see the love line. I want to see the love line. I want to see the love line. I want to see the love line. Wwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Good looking It's very imaginative, the ending is very warm, and there are countless car exhaust fumes There is still a trap at the end, I should fill it in the next book No extras, it ended so quickly It's hard to guess whether Yan Ce and Chen Sanluo are together or not at the end. It was really too fast, I didn't react

It's an interesting subject matter. If you don't like to read system stories, you just don't like that the protagonist either follows the system, or he wants to break the shackles of the system but his ability doesn't allow him to rely on the system. This system story is very good, and the protagonist suppresses the system. It's pretty good.

Looks good! From the author's first book!

It's good-looking, it's my favorite type. The protagonist doesn't have too many strange misunderstandings, but the male protagonist is too boring.

It's really beautiful, the writing is really good, both books are very good, but this book is more unreadable, really not readable enough, I hope to be more prolific

The pace is very tight and exciting. There are foreshadowings and stories. The storyline is also very twists and turns. It is not that scary, but the plot is really tight and there is no sloppiness. I highly praise the author [blowing kiss] The character design of Gong is still very interesting, but so far in this book, I think it is a process of Shou gradually becoming stronger. He does not need to rely on or depend on other external forces, but solves more things through his own knowledge or energy or his own means. I think this is a very independent personality, so I like this character very much. [Learned] The above is for personal reference only [currently in preparation]

[Laughs] Great writing! The pace is right! I tied it in one breath, and I haven't found any plot points that can touch my imagination. I love the master-disciple article so much! Get together quickly, I'm so anxious! [Shy]

Ahhhh! ! ! ! ! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] But I am underage [crying] Tuen Tuen Tuen [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's not bad. It was automatically recommended by listening to the book. It's better than expected. I just want to see how they fight the so-called Lord God at the end. The plot logic of the whole text is okay. Some of the episodes are very touching and some twists and turns are unexpected. It's very fantasy and suspense.

It's very interesting to watch, the characters are vivid and the plot is not too slow, but I feel like the plot of the master doting on his apprentice could be more detailed. I love watching it 😍😍

Looks good! ! How long will it take for them to recognize each other? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It looks good, but I feel that Rong Jin's character is gone in front of the master. Hahahaha. How can I say the emotional line? It's quite bland and goes with the flow. It has foreshadowing, but it doesn't explain the previous two lives. It's a bit disconnected. But it's still good-looking. I can continue to watch it. Mu Huai looks like a bland person, maybe because he lived for too long in his previous life. He is neither humble nor arrogant when facing anyone. He is the kind of person who doesn't offend me and I won't offend others (I don't know what I'm talking about).

Very cute and interesting setting, the overall rhythm is relatively relaxed, the whole story is very smooth, the logic is very comfortable, and the reading experience is very good~ The current rating is really low. I heard there will be a sequel, so I'm looking forward to it [Sending my heart]

Good looking ✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*. Good-looking٩(*´◒`*)۶Very-looking(ง •̀_•́)งCome on✿✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿Come on✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

The exciting and thrilling plot is fascinating

The characters are very good, and the author's writing is also very good. I love reading [Admiration], please read more

I've never seen this kind of plot before, I'm really looking forward to it, the writing is great!

New book, it's good to read. I really like the metaphysics in the entertainment industry [crying] Come on, author [sending my heart]

It's a super interesting novel, please update it more often😊! Give the protagonist more protagonist aura➕lucky➕goldfinger. (Has a perfect ending)

Come on, it's really beautiful, the writing is smooth, and the characters are well developed. I really, really like it, but it's just not enough. I finished it in one go. Come on, madam, please give me more [love] [love] [love]

Overall, it's pretty good. The plot and writing are pretty good, but some plots are a bit draggy and the ending is a bit confusing. However, the author said that he might fill it in the new book, so I can only say that I'm looking forward to the new book.

I have read Chapter 81 so far. I am still very satisfied with this novel. I would like to give it five stars to show my support😁. I really like Ming Fei when she is silly, I want to laugh every time I see her actions. I also like our two male protagonists very much, especially when Mr. Rong is cowardly in front of Brother Huai.