The Terminally Ill Gardevoir Will Not Meet a Genius Duel Girl

The compact plot, fierce battles, no system, and no cheats all attracted me. I will always accompany this book and witness the witch's journey to becoming a god with Yifa.

The writing on battles and Pokémon cultivation is very detailed and incorporates a lot of personal thoughts, which is very nice. However, it is very uncomfortable to read out of chapters during battles [face covering] Fawn has a super cute character and is an unlucky child with maximum fighting talent. Ifa, you have really found a treasure. I hope Fawn will grow up quickly and also want her to enjoy her youth more. After all, she is only 16 years old. What's wrong with a child who is too willful? I kind of want to read more of Yifa's past stories, and I'm also looking forward to how Yifa will explain to Xiaolu after the virus stacks up. The introduction gave me a lot of unnecessary expectations🙏But since it's a heartwarming story, the ending should be very happy. By the way, can you two drink? Too cute

It's very interesting. I really like the relationship between the heroine and the trainer. The author's description of the battle is also very good. I can feel the intensity and excitement of Pokémon battles, which makes me feel excited [like] I feel like the heroine has a lot of secrets, and I'm really looking forward to the subsequent revelations [Love] This book is a very good one. The writing is good and the story is wonderful. Unfortunately, it is not popular. It also ate dust on my bookshelf for a month [laughing] I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop updating, so that more people will read this book and express their love [love]

Features: Two female protagonists (Efa, Su Jinlu), slow-paced, unsystematic, daily life, Pokémon sayings, battle descriptions are good, and the writing style is comfortable to me. Daily life goes hand in hand with the main plot, and humorous and interesting daily life and more rigorous battles complement each other. Even with a winning streak, Xiaolu's genius is still in a relatively normal range, and does not give people the feeling of being cheated. The daily interactions with Pokémon are also very warmly written, and combined with localized Pokémon sayings, it gives people the illusion that they have really traveled to the Pokémon world. Among them, the emotional changes between the two protagonists, Yifa and Xiaolu, are also very interesting. From the early stage when Yifa was the elder doting on the little deer, to the middle stage they trusted each other, supported each other, and were each other's only one. Later, Xiaolu's love affair began, and he fell in love with Yifa, who was as white as the moonlight, but Yifa pretended not to notice... The doting, sweet, and ambiguous relationship made my lips curl up, but Yifa's non-response due to concerns really made the relationship drag on for a long time, and it became a bit stiff. But fortunately, with Xiaolu's unremitting efforts and the pressure of the crisis, Yifa finally let go of his worries, and everything got better, which is gratifying. (P. S.: The emotional line of this book is a bit slow. Xiaolu's love for Yifa only begins to appear after more than 200 chapters, and the relationship is officially confirmed after more than 700 chapters. If you are here for Lily, you need to make some preparations, but the pulling and getting along in the middle is also very sweet.)

To be honest, this Pokémon really shocked me. First of all, the logic of the worldview is correct. It can be seen that the author is carefully polishing the realistic worldview. Regarding the bright and dark lines of the story narrative, I think it is pretty good. If the author grasps the contradiction between humans and Pokémon hidden in the dark thread, this can be said to be a very good work. Secondly, the most surprising thing is that the author's battle descriptions are very action-oriented, and sometimes can even be imagined. This is something that many Pokémon books currently do not have. I really like this kind of battle, especially the author's unique understanding of Pokémon battles. Many Pokémon books are systems, such as Rainy Day Team Sunny Team Sandstorm Team Flat Push, etc., But peeling off the skin of anime, is Pokémon battle really that simple in reality? I have a very good impression of this book, and I'm currently giving it four stars. I read books intuitively. If I feel that the character has moved me and created an image, I will feel that the character is well created. I am not an old book lover, and I don't have a deep understanding of some masterpieces. For me, this work is just good-looking. At least it did not disappoint me in terms of character creation. For me, the best example is the pairing of Yuma Sato and Yume Youma. I was really moved at the time. They believed in online courses, listened to their failed peers, and lost everything. They were just poor people who were not qualified enough to join the Rockets. This pairing shaped me and I feel The most impactful one, which made my eyes red when I watched it, is that it actually brings out the role of the protagonist in disguise. If there is no capital that overturns the operation behind all this, the world will still be bad. The protagonist cannot really eliminate this kind of human nature, but it is perfect if it can bring about changes and shape the utopia in animation. Come on, author, stick to your heart! ! Just like a prison with nine doors! !

It's great. Tomato is currently the Pokémon novel that I like the most; When I first read the first few chapters, I had a stereotype of Gardevoir and thought it was a cool, assembly-line novel, so I didn't continue reading it; when I was in a book shortage, I read it again and found that I missed a treasure hhhh In my opinion, the biggest highlight of this book is that the author has a very good grasp of the integration of game settings, animation settings and the real world; the understanding of Pokémon battles is also very novel; sometimes as a reader, I feel like opening up a new continent; the characters of several Pokémon companions are also very distinctive (Crystal Lantern and Fire Spirit fans can whisper that Chang Ming is a very charming uncle x) Secondly, the author has a really good grasp of rhythm and emotion. (The chapter about naming and beating) made my blood boil. If I hadn't been in the dormitory in the middle of the night, I would have really wanted to cheer Xiaolu [laughing and crying] In comparison, the development of Gardevoir (Pokémon League) is slightly mediocre; I felt an inexplicable sense of impatience while reading it, and felt that it would be a bit unreadable without Xiaolu... But the arrangement of the story itself is still very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Will keep following for updates!

It's really good-looking. The descriptions of battles are unique, and there are also Pokémon proverbs interspersed in daily life. The plot setting is very interesting. I have watched and followed up on the few hundred chapters, and the last one was Xia Bing. Well, after more than a year of chasing it, it has come to an end. It was really uncomfortable before seeing the ending, and the little pearls were spinning in their eyes. Although the ending was not perfect in my mind, it was a relief for them to let go of their burden and experience life seriously. I still want to watch beautiful girl Pokémon battle.

This book is quite well written, and two chapters are updated steadily every day. The author's writing style is also very good. The reason why the score is relatively low is because someone maliciously brushes the score. (A classmate of mine encountered this situation. An abstract novel he wrote was originally rated from 9.0 To 6.0. But he will definitely get a gift of ten yuan every day.) And the author is very able to persevere. The only shortcoming is that Chapter 180 is a bit depressing. The point is that it definitely fits my views on Pokémon. Some are as intelligent as humans. Even higher than humans. Due to the existence of such a powerful force as Pokémon, the class divide is actually far more serious than reality. The so-called semi-utopia is fart. In reality, after all, it is just a war between countries (at least there are still people who dare to point out the cruelty and inhumanity of war). The Pokémon world is either an extremely decadent alliance, or an evil organization with huge ambitions and, to put it bluntly, psychopaths and garbage scumbags who only talk empty words and do not take human life into consideration. And the level 2 and level 1 legendary Pokémon that regard themselves as gods are, to put it bluntly, beast monsters (the key is that no one dares to point out all this). In reality, if you can point out various injustices in the world, or even curse the top leaders of certain countries, you can see a little bit of knowledge in politics. But in the Pokémon world, you are just a lowly being who can speak for yourself and looks the same as those who are above you. In fact, the author can still improve a little bit, that is, the writing of more than 180 chapters is a bit unremarkable and a bit too depressing. It's a bit scary when placed in the Pokémon world (referring to taking off the arm to execute the enemy, which would be a bit discouraging. To be honest, at the time, I thought it would be better not to read this book). But the next day I opened the tomatoes with great anticipation. Also, the author's latest update time is somewhat inconsistent. Can I update it at noon during the holidays like before? It's been too late recently.

It's a pretty good article, absolutely good, with a well-controlled story rhythm. It's a rare book that can write about daily life. There are many other books that may have good writing and novel settings, but one big event follows another. The protagonist is obviously very low-key and ordinary, but he keeps encountering various things. It's dry and boring, but this book is different. The daily life is really ordinary life. , But there will be some foreshadowing hidden in it, or paving the way for other supporting characters who will participate in the event in the future. It does not look superficial at all, and the battle is clean and neat, without delay. Every action is not superfluous, and the outline is very detailed at first glance, and the foreshadowing is very good. It will not be easily interrupted, and it will not be easily affected by the readers' ideas. I look forward to the day when this book is finished. However, because this book is a slow-burning novel with a very long foreshadowing, it does not look good at all with less than 300 chapters. The author said that he will write more than 800 chapters, so I will wait for half a year and then read it. Before I start reading, I will review it. I hope more people can read this book and let the rating rise to 9 or above. Needless to say, it's great. In my eyes, this is the most beautiful Pokémon article on Tomato. The biggest feature of this work is the description of combat. It is very carefully arranged, and each character's fighting style and tactics are different and very personal. The Pokémon battle makes every character who appears, whether they are passers-by or supporting characters, come alive. This article also provides some original Pokémon The bugs in the setting have been supplemented, which makes it really enjoyable for readers like me who attach great importance to details. The author himself is also an expert in Pokémon battles and a professional player. The first fairy Eevee is quite valuable. In short, those who like Pokémon can jump into it without thinking. It is very satisfying. The only shortcoming may be that the author is busy with real-life Pokémon events, which makes the update unstable [smile]

The Invincible Spiral Explosion of the Universe looks great, the introduction is not deceptive, and the writing is very good. The early tactics are really nice to watch. The author himself is a gamer, and it is realistic. It is more realistic than the turn-based system but does not deviate from the setting. The battles are really exciting. The emotional line is very delicate, and the emotional scenes between the two heroines are very sufficient. It is not embarrassing or abrupt. Yifa Xiaolu must be happy together. The background is more realistic. The Alliance is not a utopia, but the Alliance has tried its best to almost achieve a utopia. The villain organization is more evil than the original. In short, it is a dark text, but the core of Pokémon remains completely unchanged. The whole thing is just a more realistic and beautiful Pokémon world. It is well worth watching. Although it is slow in the early stage, the writing is very comfortable, and after a few pictures, it actually starts to become very exciting. The so-called poisonous point is that the frequency of updates at that time affected the readers who followed the update. It is very comfortable to read in one go without any discomfort. Why can't I give it ten stars?

A very good book, but not many people In terms of combat, it is different from other books. At least it requires the use of brains and tactics. I still can't stand Aluredo's Flying Thunder God style. Then there is the fact that there is no such thing as red, yellow, blue and green to conquer the elves like in other books.

After reading it in one day, give a brief review Above the grain and grass, below the fairy grass. The plot is currently in a critical period, and it is very well written to supplement Xiaolu's understanding of the past according to law. What surprised me was the author's emotional foreshadowing and description of the battle. He didn't look like a newcomer at all. He wrote very well. It is no exaggeration to say that it is better than some glory of Diian Niang (named the first player, the book I regret most). The most regrettable thing at present is the update problem, which is unstable and infrequent.

It is difficult to get at the beginning, but the subsequent plot development is pretty good, the logic is in place and the plot is not abusive online, and it is also very friendly to readers who do not play Pokémon. Generally speaking, it is a story about suppressing the powerful protagonist at the beginning and cultivating his own talented trainer to become the best trainer in the world. There is no plot of pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger and getting slapped in the face. The overall writing is relatively gentle. There are a large number of original characters appearing. The science popularization is in place and not embarrassing. The fighting scenes are not the best but not abstract. The supporting characters are reasonably portrayed and can be watched without losing your mind. The shortcomings are that there is too much foreshadowing in the early stage and too little information, which is a bit difficult to get. The protagonist lowers his strength to match the team, which has an old-fashioned sense of humor. The 8.0 Score is a bit low now. It feels like the number of raters has not increased. The ideal score is between 8.8-9.2.

A relatively classic coming-of-age story. Outline templates are relatively old. The article is relatively slow to catch on. However, the reader environment of Tomato is not very friendly to this kind of article. Advantages: As far as the entire plot is concerned, the character portrayal and plot rhythm are pretty good. The article itself is well-structured and the setting is very rigorous. The biggest advantage of the article is that there is nothing poisonous about it (this is already considered a high rating in Tomato) Disadvantages: No particular disadvantages. The writing style is a bit uncomfortable for me personally. This should be the author's own style. The style of the article can tell that the author is sensitive to emotion and emotion, pays more attention to process, is not too utilitarian, and may have a little obsessive-compulsive disorder. (If there is anything wrong, you are welcome to slap me in the face.) Therefore, the writing style displayed is relatively delicate. But at the same time, this style of writing seems to me to be quite confusing when reading. After all, there are several novels with a similar writing style (not the theme) in Tomato. In the end, this novel is indeed excellent, and the timing of emotional expression is perfect. But I personally feel that some emotions are still too straightforward (maybe this is the style), and the description and expression may be more refined. A little more scenery and background (you really can have a little, but only a little). This can directly improve the quality of every paragraph of description and every line of dialogue when the emotion breaks out. After all, the content of Chinese characters is extensive and profound.

The writing is very good, unlike the writing of a newcomer, the plot is very attractive, the description of the characters is excellent, and the battles are also well written. (It would be better if more interaction between Yifa and Su Jinlu could be written)

There is no one who can write a good book. This book has the lowest rating of 9.8. An interesting person wears Pokémon settings and raises beautiful girls to become world master trainers. Based on the original work, there are two logical and cause-and-effect developments. The author has solid knowledge of Pokémon and is very attentive in describing the battles. The world view is neither stupid nor purely cool. From the plot, it can be seen that Yifa has his own layout and strategy. The Elf Alliance, Pokémon virus, man-made experiments... It makes people want to read.

It's very interesting and the author is very thoughtful. Let me start with a few advantages of this book. The first point - the localized Pokémon language, dialect substitution, etc. Make people feel more immersed and feel this world more intuitively. The second point - the author really likes and understands Pokémon-related content. If you don't understand many things, the author can also give reasonable explanations to detract from the plot. The third point - the story has an appropriate rhythm. Judging from the chapters I have seen now, even people who don't know Pokémon can read it as a novel about pets from another world. The fourth point - the author is very clever and has his own ideas. The battle logic and details in the article are very clear. Moreover, the author can also use his own new settings to add some patches to the original plot of the animation to explain. All in all highly recommended After talking about the advantages, there are some things that require a separate follow-up review. Because I read slowly, I have only read more than 100 chapters, and I basically read it smoothly and very comfortably. But to be honest, from Chapter 172 to Chapter 181, I felt very uncomfortable. The paragraphs in these chapters can also reflect this. To sum up, this paragraph is quite shocking. The protagonist needs to grow. If she grows slowly according to the early rhythm, she may be able to win all the time, but there are always people who worry that she will not be able to withstand a single blow and put pressure on her in advance. The problem here is that you can hit her when she is high-spirited, but the method of frying fish is really disgusting, and will only make the readers who follow you feel full of malice for the protagonist. It is obviously to improve the protagonist, but you find an inexplicable reason to use the method of frying fish to hit others when they least deserve to lose. These chapters have undoubtedly discouraged many readers. Moreover, the pace here is obviously faster than before, but there is no plot adapted to the faster pace. Besides, the author is fully capable of making readers not have any disputes about the plot. The first 100 chapters are proof of the author's strength. Including just before these chapters, there are also suppressive plots, but they will not make people feel uncomfortable. Similar plots before and after but with different senses will make people feel more obvious. At the end of Chapter 181, a patch was added to this plot, but please note that a patch is not a reward for positive feedback. Everything from the beginning to the end of the perfume store is just compensation for negative feedback, which is different from the previous positive feedback that motivates readers and attracts readers' interest in reading. In the early stage, you raised the readers' expectations and bound the readers' emotions to what the protagonist has experienced. This will undoubtedly make people feel the injustice suffered by the protagonist more intuitively. Don't try to rationalize the plot by saying things like, "It's really reality, it's definitely unfair. If not, you can read Shuangwen." Readers who can see this will undoubtedly really like it and understand the plot. If you insist on talking about reality, then I say it is really reality, and the protagonist cannot get here at all. Real growth is when new people take the initiative to challenge their predecessors, rather than when the older generation suppresses and bombards you and tells you, "If you can't handle it, why do you want to make a breakthrough?" But no matter what, this book is a very good work, and it is highly recommended for those who like this genre.

After eating, it was okay. Although there was a bit of a mess, overall it looked good after reading it. The only problem was the handling of the final stage, which was a bit messy. The tragedy was not like a tragedy, the sadness was not too sad. The description was a bit emotional, but the contrast was not quite in place. In the end, it was rounded off and barely qualified. In summary, it is a book with obvious advantages and obvious shortcomings. The characterization is good and the emotions of the characters are also very delicate. The front part is okay, but the ending is a bit messy in some parts, and the excessiveness is okay. The foreshadowing is mostly messy.

Look, this is what I want. Isn't it just a fake tag with a Pokémon on it, but inside is a piece of shitty cheating stuff? A clear world view, real and interesting The battles are exciting, the additional skills are set, and the tactics are wonderful. This is the Pokémon novel I want. The love for Pokémon is not just collection and strength, but more importantly, the emotional connection [crying] After reading Chapter 10, I decided to add it to my bookshelf [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

My favorite Pokémon fic, Mew. Although there are slight flaws and discrepancies in some places, the writing is really great! Kitty uses his own imagination to gradually enrich, lubricate, and fill the one-sided Pokémon world in the anime. He uses secondary creation to make the Pokémon world gradually real. This feeling is really comfortable to watch. It does not follow the main line, but the very real story and travel of the protagonist and her civilian trainer. In the Pokémon world that is gradually becoming real, let all book friends carefully experience the story of the Pokémon world that we love. In addition to Xiaozhi, outside the protagonist group, with I really like the feeling of seeing that world with our eyes and love. It's like the time when Genshin Impact first came out. We started our journey to Teyvat from a stumbling pedestrian adventurer and a new traveler with curiosity about the world. The feeling of joy and disappointment in surprise and exploration is just like that at that time. We like this book. I hope that the big book can get better and better, and continue to depict for us the colorful Pokémon world in his mind. "May this trip eventually reach the stars!"

The author's portrayal of Pokémon is great, and there are basically very few characters with facial expressions. However, I feel that the process of writing about the Rainbow Gym and the battle with the Ecuador is a bit bland, and it is followed by the Zapdos incident, so that the impression left is very shallow. It feels like it is just to give the protagonist a tool to conquer the Ecuador. The plot is the same, and these chapters may be to focus on the description of Isa and Su Jinlu, resulting in the presence of other partners being reduced a lot. I hope the author can grasp the compactness of the plot. Now I always feel that the plot is a bit rushed. Although the quality has not declined much, the intervals between events are too short, which makes me a little numb. (It's difficult for me to maintain the excitement during the battle scenes. I hope it can provide more daily life, just let Xiaolu and the others have a good rest!) [Blowing kiss](♡˙˙♡)

No spoilers. It's a very strong work, and the author's writing style is also improving. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development.

These should be some of my favorite fan works. On Tomato, you can actually see fan novels with plot descriptions, image creation, operational logic, foreshadowing recycling, narrative writing, emotional structure, specialization of details, battle descriptions, funny language, childhood feelings, and the depth of the work is all online and the level is not low (at least you can get an average subscription of 2000 at the starting point). It's an excellent book. It's hard to describe how highly I evaluate him. For a fanfic, he really deserves a sentence. He wrote about his childhood feelings. The ending is a bit lame and the literary flavor is a bit heavy

A very nice Pokémon growth article, but can the author write more about Lily? I want to see Yifa and Xiaolu post [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

A book that combines reality and shows the life of Pokémon. It is a book in which emotions and illusions interpenetrate each other, and imagination and growth coexist. Here, you will come across the story of a Gardevoir, a leader, a senior, and a hero. And this is still just a drop in the ocean. I hope you all will come together and encourage each other. No, so, have you read it? Didn't see it? It doesn't matter. Anyway, I saw it and I know it.

After reading 400 chapters, let me give you a brief review. The author's description of the world of Pokémon is as real as it gets, and the writing is also very good. I also like the interaction between the deer and its companions. However, occasionally there will be some plots with unclear meaning. Yes, it is the part of the spiritual world, which is completely a large-scale torture scene. This part should not have been described in so many words. But I still gave it five stars. This is the first Pokémon fanfic I've read. I can also feel the author's love for this world, so even if it has some flaws, it doesn't affect this as one of my favorite novels. I just hope the author won't strike again, Xiaolu and Yifa are already miserable enough😭 After watching it, the plot of collecting slates in the later stage is too repetitive and a bit boring, but in the end it is a good ending. Xiaolu and Yifa are together. It is very well received. I wish you 99.

It's great. It's the first time I see such a real Pokémon. It's a masterpiece in my heart.

A very good Pokémon fanfic, with a rich and touching plot, superb combat skills, and excellent light and dark lines. The light line is responsible for advancing the plot, and the dark line quietly lays out emotions and foreshadowing. The two lines are like a carefully woven brocade, tightly integrated. The details of the plot are perfectly consistent with the original work. The author is definitely an original Pokémon resident. Although there are minor flaws in the plot, it is already a rare masterpiece on Tomato.

It's a very good novel. It's rare to see Pokémon's life and psychological activities described in such detail. Although this article is more realistic and has a dark and sad plot, when I read it, I really felt the author's love for Pokémon and the depth of his understanding. The slang in the article that is rich in the style of the Pokémon world is also eye-catching. Maybe the shortcoming is that the plot development is a bit delayed? Because Gardevoir and the protagonist are on two parallel lines, the description of training is relatively pale, but the focus is also on getting along with Pokémon. However, this article is also quite good for those who like Pokémon battles and dark literature. I give it 5 stars to encourage it and hope it can be updated.

Watching it from the beginning to the present in one breath is really interesting, and the characters are portrayed very delicately, so I hope that the story of Xiaolu and Yifa can continue to be written, and I will keep reading [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]