Trapped*************

Well, I give it four stars. I can only say that we need to continue to work hard. Many things are not expressed very clearly. For example, the protagonist's newly acquired ghost limb in the front. When the protagonist first installed it, he had to ask others what the ability of this thing was, and then the other party did not say it until a few pictures later. Finally, the protagonist suddenly uses the ability of this hand. The effect of this expression is that the protagonist understands nothing and has an inexplicable confidence, and then suddenly uses it like an enlightenment. So what is the meaning of the part where the arm was just pretended to be? Do you want to express the protagonist's confusion about the supernatural world? Finally, I still hope that when the author writes a book, he can read the plot he wrote several times and continue to improve [face covering] I forgot to mention that when I used the special ability of that hand, I was facing an unknown and strange creature of unknown level (the area of effect was large, and it was visually more powerful than what he had encountered before).

Describing a character's appearance too frequently

It's okay, I can watch it.

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