When I Got Home from Get Off Work, I Picked up a Stunning Brothel Courtesan.

The titles have the feel of a traditional episodic novel, and the author has put a lot of effort into it, which can be seen here. It is elegant and elegant, which is not much in the quicksand. However, there are one or two literary flaws, such as punctuation marks, sentence cluster errors, and so on. Although they are minor flaws, they may not be consistent with the elegant title of the text. Even if it is an online novel, you should also examine yourself three times as a writer, so that you can be worthy of your writing career. This is a time-traveling article. If you can carefully follow the classics and history, correct the mistakes in the text, use detailed logic, focus on quality, and use speed as a supplement, you should avoid being arrogant and frivolous in writing. If you use fish and meat as a reader, you can make some progress. Then the solitary fragrance will become more fragrant and the butterflies will come. Most of the people who are disciples, although the sounds and colors are pleasing to the ears and eyes, it is still a small way to expose their naked clothes.

Looking at Guo Jing and Yang Guo, they have no literary talent; Qiao Feng and Duan Yu are a bit old-fashioned; the great master Dongfang Bubai only knows boudoir embroidery and birds. Counting romantic figures, but also looking at the present.

It's quite attractive to me, at least it looks like the table of contents and the first five chapters. It can be seen from the table of contents that the author is very attentive, talented and culturally literate. The chapter titles are concise, comprehensive and poetic. It can be said that the author has great expectations and intentions for this book. Early outline and the framework are also very complete, it can be seen that the author's skills are still good, I am looking forward to it; and after reading the general outline, it can be said that it gave me the motivation to read on. The identity of the oiran is also very attractive. I hope this author will persevere and keep working hard. I also hope that your book will be a big hit in the future.

Not bad, interesting. The content and writing style are both good. Little Taozi is also very cute. I won't lose money if I invest in it. If I have time, I will write a short essay. Bookshelf added.

The heroine is very cute, and the writing is also very good, especially in Chapter 7, which cleverly compares post-it notes to dancing butterflies using a metaphorical technique, and writes the heroine's longing for the new world. I personally like this section very much; however, the title of the article is too elegant and not easy to understand, and some people will not be interested when they see it.

It is relatively delicate, and the characterization is more careful than most books. It gradually reveals the transformation process of an ancient person into a modern person. However, some psychological descriptions in the middle are a bit strange, but it is not harmful. It is very good. Come on, author! Hope the author maintains the good qualities of the book.

I just read it, the author has great writing skills. I don't know if the author likes people to interact with him, but I think he would be happy if he writes something he likes and is recognized and encouraged by others. I hope the author can continue to write and write more, it is very interesting, very beautiful! [Laughs] [Laughs] Come back and comment after reading it.

The characters are very delicately drawn, and the emotions are very sincere. There is no unprecedented feeling. The slow-paced emotional experience is very comfortable. Watching the growth of the female protagonist and the companionship of the male protagonist is very addictive and sweet. It is also the first time I have seen this type of work. I am amazed, but I still have to praise the author's writing style. I am very much looking forward to this excellent work. Keep up the good work!

The writing is good, and Zhen'er's descriptions are very good. It's hard not to like it. The emotional line is neither urgent nor slow, which is quite comfortable, but I can see that Genshin Impact is a bit out of character. The author updates quickly, even the production team's donkeys can't rest for you.

This is my favorite book recently. Although the plot is classic, the author's writing style is very good, and the psychological process and character transformations he describes are also very charming. When I think of some specific plot intentions, I always think of the spring rain, and feel a bit of the poetry of the independence of the falling flower and the two flying swallows. It's a pity that I stopped writing it, but the plot has also advanced to after the marriage, and there may not be much content later. I just feel that it is a pity. It is the first time I have read a book from daily to intermittent, and I still like it. All I can say is wish the author good luck with his third dimension.

The biggest highlight of the book is the author's literary skills that are visible to the naked eye. It's good as a light novel The shortcoming is the lack of characterization and setting. The heroine's performance is completely based on the modern ideological framework. The realism is really lacking, and there is a lack of changes and communication in many details. To be honest, this flaw is really obvious. It can only be three stars, but the literary background is extra points, so I give it four stars. Looking forward to better unfolding and plot development in the later period. Reasonable use of ancient atmosphere and cultural heritage can bring this book to a higher level.

Shuangjie has praised it, it's very sweet, come on! The writing is really great

Looks good. I hope it doesn't collapse later.

It's pretty good, and one of the more amazing among the many fast-paced fast food articles. The writing style is outstanding and exquisite; the plot is unconventional and interlocking; the characters are full and real, and the emotions are sincere. It's just my personality. I personally can't stand the pace of the plot, especially the slow and slow emotional development of the article. I hope the author can speed up the pace appropriately. After all, the core of love is not restraint, but passion. Even if it is a steady flow of love, it is not silent or hidden deep in the heart.

It looks pretty good now, just a little short [smile] Why are the ratings so low? I looked around and they were mostly good reviews. I didn't see any negative reviews. [Aggrieved] [Thinking]

The ten-year-old bookworm who didn't say anything died of sugar.

The five stars I give are not my upper limit but Tomato's upper limit

The look and feel is very comfortable, and the emotional description is also very delicate, which is a bit out of place on a refreshing writing platform like Tomato. But it is undeniable that it is a good book, and the setting is quite novel. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. Looking at the score of 7.0 Or so, I am full of questions. I don't know what the aesthetic point of the people who scored low is. In short, cheers for the author.

When I first read this book, I thought the subject matter was fresh, but after only reading a few chapters, my eyes really shined. The author's writing style is great, the chapter titles are also very novel and rhyming, the poems in the article are just right, and some of the descriptions really touched my heart! Believe me, this book will definitely be popular in the future! Come back and comment after seeing more!

The author's writing is very good and I'm a bad reader. It's rare to see a male and female protagonist. The language is more to my liking. I must say that the plot may be a bit too jumpy. Taozhen sells drinks in order to get her ID card for a live broadcast. There is basically no follow-up. But the flaws are not concealed. It is the only book that I have read 100 chapters in this month and a half. I highly recommend it.

I don't understand why such a good book has such a low rating

The direction is okay, you can be more detailed, don't write so fast, write slowly [face covering] After reading ten or twenty chapters, I feel that the plot is too fast. Really, the author can slow down the plot and add some details to the plot. You can say Xiao Shui. I hope it will get better and better. Come on [cool]

Not bad. I don't know why the rating is so low. It may be related to some small flaws in it. I hope the author will work harder, update it quickly, and give a five-star review to encourage it. Dear readers, I'm sorry, I have no way to continue to This book is said to be finished I'm sorry, readers, but I can no longer finish this book. After all, this is just an experimental novel, and my purpose of writing it was just to test my own ability to grasp a story with a huge world view (it turns out that I am still too green). I know that this is very irresponsible to the readers who support me. After all, since everyone is willing to read my novels, it means that everyone still recognizes my writing ability. Here I would like to solemnly say to those readers who have collected this novel: I'm sorry! You have been lied to, I am not the author….

Good looking

Very good and full of emotions

The writing is really good.

It feels so comfortable, like drinking herbal tea with an electric fan blowing on in the summer

Brother! ! ! When will you come back and update? ! Didn't you agree to come back after getting married? ? Do you know how I got here? [Cry][cry][cry][cry] It's been almost a year, alas! ! ! What a pity book. There are few bad reviews and many good reviews, so why is there no update?

I can only say that it is short and exquisite. Four stars is too short. Who can read it? Give me more updates, ten updates a day [I'm full]

It's a very good book, the author must stick with it