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Please don't insult some people maliciously. The author you give suggestions will also improve on the surface, and the author is a novice and has just written a book. It is normal for some errors in the plot, and I think the author is very good at writing. It would be great if the content can be continued. Try writing one if you criticize me. If I see someone who talks too much and says something about the author, I will send you a report + a small package of sharp reviews~ Moreover, the article written by the author is really beautiful. The protagonist has a good personality and the writing is exquisite. Zundu likes this article very much. Ahhhhhhhhhh, why no one has read it [crying] [crying], I really think it's very good, and I've already gone to Shuhuang Square to recommend it to others. I hope that more people will see this kind of work.

Come and rate myself, hehe, it looks good, hehe [cover face][cover face]

Nice! Very nice! The author is also very cute! I also like White Oak's character design, hehe. Overall, I enjoyed this novel. But I have only one request from the author, don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Be sure not to stop updating! Otherwise I will be very sad. [Cry]

It's good to watch, but sometimes the plot is very "sudden" (it feels a bit hard to describe), that is, people or certain things appear suddenly, um, there is no foreshadowing? I just feel like it doesn't quite connect with the previous ones, um... I'm not very good at language expression, but the author is a novice and I think it's really good to write like this, come on! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

When something or someone appears, it appears rather abruptly and cannot be well integrated into this article. There is a very weak sense of separation. The description is a bit empty and cannot be well incorporated. It needs to be polished. But the author is better than those novice writers. It is already very good to write like this. Keep up the good work.

It's very, very good to read. After I saw the updated version, I started reading other books. Then I remembered it today. I searched for an hour and a half, only to find him in the bookshelf [laughing][laughing]

Ah, it's so good. I didn't read much about cultivating immortals before, but now I read this novel about cultivating immortals. It's really interesting. Admiration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] [Admiration] Author, I know you want to rate, but if you give us more, we have to rate [laughing]

This is the best heartthrob novel I have ever read! ! My wife's writing style is very good, a level above other novice writers! The most important thing is that Quercus is so strong. She can grow vegetables, cook, and make elixirs. She is not a person who will be wasted if she fails. Who wouldn't love a wife who can cook? [Sending Hearts]

This book is still very well written, and it automatically introduces the cold white-haired heartthrob young junior brother (although it does not match the protagonist's scepter! I still like the protagonist's different appearance and duplicity). The author should update it quickly, and don't be ignorant, otherwise I will kneel down and beg you [poke]

The writing is really beautiful👍👍👍

Very beautiful, the author is very active, I like it🥰🥰🥰

Love to watch! ! ! The author is so cute! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Warm and healing, the feeling of long flowing water is very comfortable, the feeling of coolness and moisturizing in the heart, I like it so much

So pretty! ! ! This is my favorite heartthrob book! ! ! It feels really different to me! Big, big, big, fast update, fast update, big, hungry, rice

It's great to watch. I love it. The author has laid out a lot of foreshadowing and explained it in the following chapters. Moreover, the protagonist's outlook on life is very good. I love it.

Good-looking, really good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's beautiful [sending my heart] [I learned it], I hope the author will continue to work hard

The writing is very good, but the first few pictures are slightly flawed, but overall it is still good, but the chapters are still a bit short and can be maintained.

Nice! ! ! The author should write more [sending my heart][sending my heart][asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Looks good, baby. Please update more @Shark Fin. It suits my taste. Baby, this is my xp. I love it so much.

Dear author, I give you five-star praise, (*^ω^*) so please update quickly [laughs]

The author writes very well, very beautiful

I love reading it. I love reading this kind of heart-stirring article. Come on, Lizi! [Send heart][Send heart]

Big cheers for the author! It's so beautiful. I'll be going to school soon. Please update more. I won't be able to see it by then [I'm about to cry]

It's very interesting. Cheers to the author. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Hehe~ @ This is a big thank you to the lovely author~[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates][Laugh][Send hearts]

It seems that the author has been urging me to give him a perfect score, because it is really good-looking.

It's good to read, the author is very active, the meat is at the back, and the content in the front is a bit bland, but overall it's okay [laughing][laughing]

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