Star Railway: Kafka Traveled Back to Reality

At present, we have reached more than 80 chapters, and the knife has not appeared yet. The quality of the plot is stable, and many of the foreshadowings in the early stage have been responded to, and the character design has not collapsed. To sum up, the writing is beautiful and the sentences are smooth. There are many beautiful sentences in the novel, and there are many descriptions of characters. Basically, every important character who appears will have a corresponding description. The portrayal of Kafka also continues to deepen. It clearly describes Kafka's inner changes as he slowly trusts Gu Cheng and temporarily puts aside his identity as a star core hunter (there is Kafka's diary later, which fills in a lot of pitfalls) The novel not only writes about daily life, but also rewrites the content of the protagonist and Kafka playing escape rooms and games into a plot, which is similar to a branch plot and has a strong sense of substitution, so the content is more interesting (I highly recommend Chapter 37 here, which is about Kafka's character PV, and the description of the fighting scenes is very exciting). It describes the two people's daily colleagues, and also expresses some of the author's own understanding of the world and life, which I think is also a highlight. (Also, the author is not aloof, but very naughty. He often gets along with the readers. Come and prank the author! [Sneaky laugh])

Lao Meng's writing style has improved a lot. Compared with before, the character creation is stronger now, and the character design is very stable for the time being. There is no greatness or great wealth in the novel. The protagonist and Kafka are really living the lives of ordinary people. The passages are full of fireworks and can touch people's hearts even more. Hope it can be stable

From beginning to end, I witnessed the completion of a book and the growth of an author. The writing style of this novel is very good, and the details are well grasped, especially the scenes and character descriptions, which are very detailed and make people have pictures in their minds [face covering] As for the plot, it may be average in the early stage, but in the later stage, especially the second season, it is simply amazing, and the copywriting written by the author is very deep, and it can be seen that the author is very careful. Except for a section in the middle where the plot is very sharp, everything else is very sweet and the ending is perfect. Thank you Lao Meng for bringing such a good novel. Come on, look forward to the new work!

It's super good-looking. The seemingly loopholes in the plot are directly fixed. It's very tight. The portrayal of Kama is also very, very accurate. It's really good-looking! But why did the author write the ending of the knife [crying] [crying]? Can you consider multiple endings and make it a side story? Please

The writing style is good, or in other words, the writing style is excellent. The author's descriptions are very detailed. Whether it is the creation of characters or the description of scenes, they are full of details. The novel is full of beautiful sentences, which is very suitable for female readers. In terms of plot, the first season is average, but the second season is the pinnacle. Gu Cheng's growth experience is very attractive, and Ka Ma's character is also restored. The plot is a bit humorous at the end, especially when the star core hunters have traveled through time. Daily life is very interesting and looks very relaxed. All in all, this is a wonderful fanfic. In my opinion, the reverse plot is the best. This novel not only writes about love in life, but also the great love for the world. I can feel the author's love for life. Come on Teacher Meng, I look forward to your new work [Sending Hearts] By the way, you must remember to live a good life. The story between Gu Cheng and the piano teacher is really difficult to reconcile. It would be great if the teacher is still alive [crying] (Secretly say something to the author: Live well, this is our agreement)

I only read this book after it was finished. The author's writing style is really strong. I have read a book on Tomato for so long. This is the first time that I cried while reading this book. Maybe it was also mixed with some emotions for Kafka. I sincerely hope that Teacher Menggu can create more perfect works in the future! I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars @A

From the new book. I personally think that the author is a boy after all. Although his writing style is very strong and his thinking is more delicate than most boys, it is still almost boring to write a story with two female protagonists. This kind of post with a single female protagonist is exactly the author's comfort zone, and the intensity is very well controlled. I like this novel very much, especially the male protagonist. He is not stupid. He has a sad experience and a bright future. This kind of character attracts me very much. Watching the male protagonist rise from scratch to the top makes me very emotional. Kafka's character design is very stable. It looks weird in the early stage because of the foreshadowing, but it gets better later on. I also like the author very much, both in terms of strength and character, come on Menggu [flying kiss] I was really touched when I saw that many of Hua's songs appeared in the article, and I thanked the author for not following the trend of Hei Hua on the Internet. I later read the author's statement and found that the author is not a fan of Hua, but a fan who likes music and is very sensible. Bonus points for the author!

While there is sugar, there is also a hint of a knife (maybe because I am a ghost), and the characters are very distinct, which is quite good. Of course, I really like this kind of mutual healing story (not to make me depressed) huh~

This book is very well written. I have written reviews for the fourth time. Teacher Meng's narration of the experiences of Gu Cheng and Kafka is very emotionally resonant. It is a good fan fiction. I also wish Teacher Meng Gu will continue to perform well in future novels and create masterpieces! 😘

It's good to read, and the author's writing is pretty good, but there are a lot of twists and turns in the process, but not too many. After more than 150 chapters, the big sword [angry] Excerpted from the original text: Kafka looked at the young man's face, her eyes were a little indifferent "Sorry, I've been lying to you before." "I'm a star core hunter. I can't stay with you forever, and I shouldn't have other feelings for you. I couldn't restrain myself. I'm sorry..." "I know you are not Qiong. I knew it from the first time I saw you. But I love you forever..." "Good boy, listen to me..." At this moment, a tear squeezed out of her eyes uncontrollably, and then fell on the sheets - the corners of her mouth were trembling, and for some reason, her body was shaking uncontrollably. "Listen to me... Forget me... Forget everything... That happened between us..." "I'm sorry..."

The whole book is full of life, the various daily descriptions are very vivid, and the interactions between the characters are also very interesting. All members of the Star Core Hunters have relatively detailed descriptions. The separation in the middle, I personally feel that it is not a knife. This kind of transition is quite good. It is not as harsh as a certain nine-life reincarnation book, and the overall rhythm is very gentle. , Left me with a different feeling after reading a lot of cool suspense stories. However, due to length issues, the description of the relationship between Kafka and the protagonist is still a bit... Hurry up. It would be much better if some of Kafka's inner activities could be described in more detail. Generally speaking, I still recommend Star Core Hunter Chef.

The writing is good, the author is well-educated, and the plot is not bad. There are no major problems except that the author occasionally messes up a chapter. If it doesn't fall apart later, it will probably get a nine points. I just hope the author doesn't step on readers' troubles.

In ancient times, Shennong tasted hundreds of herbs and drank tea to detoxify. Today, when I look at a knife and feel numb, I read this book to detoxify. It's a good daily novel, and the reverse-travel setting also makes this book unique among other fanfics. The author's writing style is not bad, and he can write about daily life in a relaxed and interesting way, making readers feel comfortable and want to read on. This is rare in fan fiction, especially in daily writing. Sometimes when I'm learning to break defenses, I'll read this book to relax my brain and heal my soul. It's great! Come on, Teacher Menggu!

I have read more than 150 chapters. I wanted to find some good fan fiction during the National Day recently. This book is the one with the best character development among the fan fictions I have read for the heroine Ka Ma [laughing] Although it is finished now, I still dare not read it. I heard that there are a lot of process knives) Anyway, give me a five-star review [make a face] Can anyone give me a spoiler about the process knives? I don't want to read the knife and I don't want to miss the plot. I'm so cheap [angry]

A very perfect completed work. I don't really like anti-travel novels, but I have finished reading this one. The plot is perfect and it is impossible to have no flaws. However, I have read a few works with very few flaws. I look forward to more works from the author [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The author's writing style is quite good. It's very comfortable to read. It's obvious that he really likes music. It's basically the core of this article. I've been a bookworm for two or three years. I'm looking forward to the next book.

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In fact, there are not many plot conflicts in the whole book. Most of the time is ordinary daily life. Maybe many novels pursue plot tension, but I personally feel that such a dull book is not bad, and it deserves five stars. I hope the author will continue to work hard

After reading it for the second time (I didn't finish the first time), this book gave me a more three-dimensional feeling, completely satisfying all my fantasies about reverse wear. Maybe it's due to personal taste, but in short, this book is one of the few articles about games that create five stars for me. (The shape of the blade is more fleshed out, and I haven't finished the entire story of Immortal Boat) After reading this review for 12 hours, I think I read this book seriously and did not praise it carelessly.

I finished reading this book during the National Day. The author's writing is really good (can you use less knives next time and don't write about knives so well!!!)

Very good, very well written. It ranks among the top among all the Bengtie fics I have read. It handles the emotional aspects very well, including family, friendship, and love. It is really comfortable to watch. I beg the author, please don't write about knives [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Love this book to death. Almost the best fanfic I've ever seen. The plot is sweet and the plot development is great. Although the author's early writing was relatively ordinary, he was able to improve it through a small extra chapter. I highly recommend this book [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's very interesting to read, and the author's portrayal of the characters is also very good. Whether it's Kama or the late Brother Diandao, Silver Wolf and Liu Ying, the writing is very good. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

As the first Star Iron fanfic I read, it's really good.

I watched it from the beginning to the end and loved it very much [adoration][adoration]

It's very beautiful, very sweet, and the body is warm. I feel like I'm about to be resurrected.

The characterization is very good, the details are in place, and the pace is orderly. It is a rare good book. This book only had a rating of 8.4 When I first read it, and now it has a rating of 9.2. I hope Menggu will continue to work hard and make this beautiful story a successful conclusion! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author's writing is very good and it's very comfortable to read.

This is the best fanfic of Kafka with a single heroine that I have read. In my mind, this novel and Dreaming of the Starry River are the two best Iron Breaker fanfics I have seen so far!

The plot is good, not the kind of stupid story, the concept is clear, not easy to get bored, the characters are also very good, not so brainless. If it is more realistic, the end of the first volume will be the ending. I like this, because people can't just stay in their own gentle hometown, it deserves 5 stars.