I, Hisashi Mitsui, Will Rule the Nation

Does the author not know how to write Chinese characters? Do you need to use Japanese characters when writing Japanese comics? After you finish writing it, when you read it yourself, your eyes will be dazzled and you won't know what to think. I don't want to undermine the author's writing confidence, otherwise I could give it a lower score.

After reading Chapter 9, you have no idea what the score is? What is the individual score? What's the hit rate? How many assists? You just said "Lead" and entered again? Brother, do you think it is reasonable for him to watch the game without looking at the score or personal data? [You taste carefully]

It's so long-winded. The first ball in the game was buzzing for a long time. After the steal, he dribbled like a walk until he walked to the opponent's side. No one was grabbing it and there was no fast break? Let's not talk about whether there is such a thing in reality. There is no such operation in slam dunk.

I gave up, I feel like the author didn't even understand who the heroine is, 😅The heroine of the basketball comic, please be decisive, you are almost the same as the reader looking at the cartoon of Duck Sky, that is the author's early disgusting female character who was hesitant about the polyamorous relationship of the male protagonist, you 😅The investment in Haruko around the Sakuragi line includes not wanting to give it to anyone, feeling that she has a good impression of Haruko, and then dismantling the Sakuragi line and worshiping Rukawa Kaede. There is nothing wrong with it. Consider taking it, [what]; Look, you are in an anime who likes immortality, [what], and then the latest reincarnation, Mitsui Kika, has a crush on her. I don't know how her brain is so stupid😅. In anime, I always feel that Haruko has a kind of pure beauty,😅then Girl, remember, you have the same kind as Akagi and Mu Shen, and are almost as mature as those in their 30s. What's so great about it? 😅The most amazing thing is that Haruko is fond of the male protagonist. The male protagonist changed his goals first and was really a scumbag. I wish you success🤭

The author cannot be allowed to play single-player [laughs evilly], please comment, except for the few chapters, there are no obvious shortcomings so far

Too much nonsense

What a fuss! Water numbers! A bit disappointed! Give me some encouragement! When writing about the first game, I wrote that the first half was a solo effort, but later I said that every goal was a team effort! What do you think?

In fact, it is more appropriate to write Megure. The first-year Shohoku only has Mitsui and Akagi, but their shortcomings are their combat ability. If Megure is appointed as the point guard, I think there is a chance to unseat Shoyo in the first year.

It doesn't matter how many points you give, just pour some cold water on it. It feels like writing a narrative, just like the feeling I had when I was writing a composition when I was in school. I just need to find something to say and make up the word count! It seems that I have not found the "secret" of writing novels. I look like a novice. What everyone says is long-winded and ink-stained. The author should take it to heart. There are too many psychological descriptions and too many statements. No one can read it if you write like this. Learn more routines, how to write monologues, and how to write dialogues. The finishing touch, what's missing is the soul! The protagonist described by the author is too self-centered and has too many mental activities, as if he is expressing his own aspirations and efforts to his fullest. I feel like I still haven't explained it clearly. It's clear to all observers. I hope the author can understand what I said.

I thought I was a newcomer, but I didn't expect that I have written three books based on the classics. How should I put it? The writing style is a little immature, the words are a little piled up, and the narrative is a bit slow. It can be seen that the author wants to use gorgeous words to express clearly, but the repeated use of some words is like the sequel to Journey to the West. Repeat it in slow motion, repeat it three times quickly, and then repeat it three times in the opposite direction. It seems very stiff😅😅😅