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This book comes from the last book. This book inherits the characteristics of the previous book and is better than the previous one. Come on, author, it is a masterpiece if you don't give away your daughter.

The content is super interesting. The male protagonist is very unique. It's my favorite type of author. Your fans support you [like][like][like]

Actually, what they like is never the protagonist, but the handsome face of the protagonist. Before seeing the true appearance of the pig's trotters, they all ignore the pig's trotters and look down on them [Learned][Like][Understood][Take a closer look]

Come, the author reads with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark, a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words, day by day, and night by day.

Yes, the male protagonist's character is on the weak side, but it's not extreme. Strength is also growing. The middle aunt's tendency to become yandere makes me heartbroken. I don't like the plot of the yandere female protagonist and the weak male protagonist, it looks very depressing. Fortunately, it was settled midway, and I hope it won't develop in this direction. In addition, I feel that the male protagonist's personal charm should also add some other advantages besides his appearance. How to express it is not something I can do. Of course, I am just giving my opinions and suggestions.

You still need to practice your writing skills. Of course, there are no poisonous points and you can still read it.

After reading it for so long, I might as well comment on it. Although it is a short article with many blocking points, it can be read without thinking. However, after reading it with a brain, I feel that there are big problems. I feel it's okay, and I've been following the updates. I personally prefer anchors who are very good-looking. After all, my appearance is much better in reality, especially those who seize opportunities to cheat and beat up the villain heroines in time-traveling books. I may have watched them more. The previous feeling was too cliche, and this feels more novel. Just don't look at the map with your brain, just think of it as if women are all about their appearance.

Show them all to me, it's so beautiful [smile][smile][smile] Especially chapters 24 and 25. If you can survive it, you will be the God of War.

Holding the Grass is so beautiful, so beautiful. I don't know how to describe this novel. It's the first time I've seen a novel that suits me on Tomato. It's so good! ! ! Chapter 25: Take me down directly and become a god! ! Good-looking [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

You can deceive as many as you want, you can't suffer alone

Beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful lied to you

The content of this book is good, but the female protagonists' feelings for the male protagonist are still too sudden. It is impossible to like the male protagonist just because he is handsome. But a plot of a hero saving a beauty will be much better. Although it is cliché, it works, right [Like]

A yandere novel, should I send it to a girl? Without this statement, yandere novels can be written as Song Dynasty women's novels. Then I can only lament the author's amazing imagination. After all, in my impression, few women in yandere novels have normal thoughts. After all, the methods to get the male protagonist are all written in the criminal law. In addition, if it is a traditional yandere novel without redemption, it feels unfortunately unattractive, because I have read a lot of yandere novels. If it is just a common routine, it will not appeal to me at all. After all, I have read dozens of books about yanderes from other worlds, ancient yanderes, immortal yanderes, urban yanderes, and everyday yanderes. There are also the kind of apocalyptic yanderes and supernatural yanderes. These two types of yanderes are bold and crazy because they have no legal restrictions. If the yandere in the future can control himself, restrain himself, and change for the sake of the male protagonist, this will be a good point to watch in the later stage😊 But judging from the trend written by the author and the trend of the male protagonist's previous life, it is probably impossible →_→ Forget this five-star rating, it's a sign of respect for the author, seeing how hard the author worked so hard

It's pretty good. The last book was a bit discouraging, but this one is still a bit enjoyable to read. The problem is that the narration has too many modifiers. For example, after the heroine makes a big statement about the hero, the narration will say something that the heroine will regret later. The perception will be reduced a lot, because everyone knows that this will definitely be the direction, but the narration keeps emphasizing [face covering]. Also, the male protagonist's character is okay, but his emotional intelligence is a bit awkward. The female deskmate gave the male protagonist a cake, and the male protagonist's brother was unhappy, so the male protagonist gave the cake to his brother, and it was okay to share it. The male protagonist may be very kind, but if you think about it from the perspective of the female deskmate, she worked hard to make the cake just to please the male protagonist, and the male protagonist just changed hands and gave it away. The space is too short and there is not much more to say. Apart from the above problems, this article is quite interesting.

It's the same as the last grass Shen Nong ate.

Author, I think I can give the protagonist an inner demon, but this inner demon will not do any harm to the protagonist. I am more powerful than anyone else in the world, and will also come out to help the protagonist when the protagonist asks for help. More importantly, this inner demon is a woman, and she likes the protagonist very much

Don't worry about the ones that are there or not, just read it if you feel like you are suffering from hypoglycemia. The portrayal of the male and female protagonists in this book is simply like the Tang Dynasty, a sugar pill.

The best novels for beginners. Although the writing style is not as good as that of the big writers, it is enough to beat all the novels for beginners. And I am an old bookworm and am very picky. But I read this one and it is quite good. I just don't know when the male protagonist will be taken down. The idea of ​​​​the male protagonist can be changed a little more. In fact, there is no need to write too much about the male protagonist's simple thoughts, and it seems that the male protagonist is very noble, but the same sentence is enough to scorn everyone.

It's amazing, it suits my taste, it's not a popular yandere, it's loving and pampering, not a violent vent, and it's not tiring to watch, I have the desire to continue watching, and it's not so violent. I like it very much. I'm usually tired, and I don't feel perverted at all. Good luck, author.

Carter: ~( ~³ω³ )~☍Give me the glasses

The evergreen tree in Licking Dog and the mainstay in Joker McDonald's mascot, Gotham City's big boss Maximum number of playing cards Batman's big client The Nanbo Rabbit in the spare tire has a house in the blacklist

This novel really made me unable to put it down! The author's writing is very smooth and the storyline is exciting. The characters are vivid, especially the protagonist's personality and actions that made me relate to them. I loved this book and gave it five stars.

It's worth a look and suits my taste. There are many female protagonists, each with their own characteristics. But the male protagonist's appearance is too outrageous at his peak, and the female protagonist falls in love with each other. But good

My experience tells me that she is 100% female. Chapter 23 tells you what the Dragon King is.

Awesome author, your article is really awesome.

It's very beautiful. I recommend bringing Carter and the others back to life. Also, I didn't understand the last wave, who was that person?

Maybe it's because I don't understand girls. There are some parts that I can't understand and I feel like it makes some things complicated. Most of them are good to read. Maybe it's because I'm biased against romance novels and I can't stand them. Come on, author! !

Although it looks like it was written by a primary school student, the comment section is so exciting [laughing]

I can only give four stars (I hope the author doesn't mind) after reading it for a while. At first I was simply attracted by the name, and then I kept reading slowly until I finished it. I can see that this book has many problems. As the author said, it is a debut novel... The plot is very extensive, the elements are diverse, the ending is rushed, and I can't understand the last Easter egg... I hope the author can work hard! Looking forward to the new book! Give a helping hand

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