Time Travel, the Hero's Junior Brother Is Good and Soft

[Love] After reading this, I am still unsatisfied. It is rare to see such a "normal" martial arts novel. It has a strong martial arts flavor and is an original martial arts novel. [Like] The weapon used by the protagonist is not a cookie-cutter sword. Instead, he uses a whip plus hidden weapons and poison, and he uses a knife for attack. Each group of friends and relatives has its own characteristics and highlights, but we will not use too much space to describe them. When Gong and Shou go out, they always act together. There is no plot that forces them to separate, and their relationship is naturally not entangled [eat melon]. The righteous way of martial arts is finally not the sanctimonious pseudo-righteous way it has been in recent years [like]. Those with strong martial arts skills and the right to speak are very chivalrous. The martial arts alliance is really doing things. There are also villains who pretend to be righteous, except for one that has more descriptions, but the protagonist is always on guard against something wrong with him, and goes offline quickly. Other people who are wrong are also brushed aside with the reminder of the protagonist. There are court scenes but not too much description. The affairs of the court are often mentioned in one stroke or in a short paragraph. The affairs of the court are dealt with by the people of the court, and the main perspective is not too focused. [Thinking] The protagonist is strong but not ridiculously strong. When encountering overly strong enemies, it is not said that the protagonist can overcome multiple levels of challenges alone. There is cooperation, mentors and friends to help. To borrow words from the article, extraordinary battles are [cool]. Facing the final BOSS, the protagonist plays an important supporting role in the battle. It is logical for the protagonist to become stronger and fight enemies. There are cheats but they will not be too big, and the protagonist will not feel aggrieved. [Laughing] [Understood] It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good. The main point of view is always smooth, refreshing but logical. When the plot of the main point of view is in progress, he will occasionally describe the plot of other supporting characters in several paragraphs or small chapters, so that readers can synchronize the plots of other hidden plots. [Thinking] In many places, the author's plot breaks some traditional martial arts routines. It's enjoyable to watch but doesn't seem brainless. The highlights and respective contributions of the protagonist and supporting characters will not obscure each other. The supporting characters can highlight their personalities and highlights in just a few plots, as well as have highlight scenes. It's rare to see such a "normal" martial arts article, or a story about upgrading and fighting monsters [or something]. I can only say "normal". The rare "normal" is that after reading other frustrating novels, I couldn't reach into the screen to slap my hands. I didn't know how to complain and felt powerless [punch out]. After reading this article, I felt "normal" [staring]. Smooth, not frustrating, logical, not entangled, and anti-routine, I feel comfortable after reading it and still have more to say. [Love] After writing so much, I feel like I haven't fully expressed my feelings [love] after reading the article. The real feelings can only be known after reading the article. [Shy] This is my first long review dedicated to this article, highly recommended. [Blow kiss][KISS][Love]

After the rating, it will definitely be higher than 9 points. The book is good. I have already caught up to the latest chapter. I didn't have enough to read this author's other books. I found that the novels written by this author are really rare in Tomato. They are logically online, good at ambush, easy to understand, and very immersive. I have not read enough of this book, and I sincerely recommend it. Looking at the author's other two works, the Beast World book is quite good, and the Guide book may not be exciting at the beginning, but the emotional development later is very addictive, and the emotional interaction between the two protagonists is extremely interesting. Of course, if you haven't read the Guide Sentinel book, it is best to understand the basic setting before reading it. The most praiseworthy point is that the emotional lines described by the author develop naturally, follow traces and are very logical. In addition, the author's writing style is easy and has a strong sense of substitution. I think the author will become a master in this direction sooner or later. I look forward to a steady stream of works from the author! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I like this kind of love, Da Da's writing is very good, Lian Li is smart and motivated, his personality is cheerful, lively and lovable, even when he is making progress, it makes people calm down and read, Zhou Zhou is so pampered without knowing it, and he protects it very well [Top post][Top post] Woohoo The martial arts theme really attracts me. It is one of the few rare and good-looking themes in Tomato. Two people develop a normal and healthy love relationship with each other. I like it very much [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Come on, come on, come on! [Love][Love][Love][Love] We are smart babies who never give up [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] Why am I not making a long comment [crying]XX Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much Like it very much super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice super nice I hope you won't abuse me [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's good to watch, hehe. Although the emotional line is relatively slow, the looming ambiguity between them is so delicious, and the experience is also very exciting. Like it and continue watching hehe.

Good-looking, good-looking in every sense of the word. From the plot concept to the characterization, it is very comfortable and interesting. And what's rare is that the male and female protagonists in the original book are very good people, and they are good friends with the male protagonist in this article who help each other through life and death in a true sense. This is great. The other supporting characters in it are also well portrayed and have different personalities. Finally, let's look at the meaning of the extra chapter. There is a realm beyond the extraordinary. Let's see if the master finally goes to the world of immortality to wait for everyone. In fact, if it is possible to cultivate immortality in the future, I would also like to see the story of this group of masters, apprentices and friends cultivating immortality together in the future. [Send heart][Send heart][Please update]

It's good-looking, the character has a young chivalrous feel, and the feeling is also very cute. He has grown from a weak character to a knight in the arena through experience, and even has a complete world view of the arena's rules, travel, and travel arrangements. The protagonist also often complains that this is not a normal martial arts world, it is similar to the world of low-level demon cultivators. It's pretty good. The protagonist also has a part in women's clothing. The details of the plot are in place, the characters are good, and the process of getting together is not draggy. But I lost the patience to watch it almost halfway through. The style of this book (emphasis added, it's not a reference, no malice) is a bit like Lu Jiang's book "Women Dress Up to Provoke Long Ao Tianhou", which is a story about growing up, cuteness, and youthful spirit, about a young couple falling in love and growing up.

After reading it, I feel that I am still unsatisfied. When I saw the finale, I couldn't help but shed tears. Everyone is living well, and the two little ones are also very happy. Yun Huizhou also got what he wanted, marrying the most beautiful woman in the world. This time they don't have a bad ending like in the book, because Lian Li's appearance has brought light to everyone, and I like him very much. When I watched it, I was particularly worried about something happening to some of the island owners. Fortunately, it was a happy ending. Vice CP is also good. Originally I didn't particularly like the secondary CP, but I have to say that the secondary CP in the book is really good. Senior sister Qu is very gentle, and Zhao is very good. I really admire the part where he is a beggar lurking. He is worthy of being the male protagonist in the original book. Every character is very three-dimensional and does not appear to be facial makeup. I particularly like the island owners and the master. They are all very good.

It's a super good-looking article, full marks 💯. It fulfilled a lot of my fantasies about the world. Many of the fights were very detailed. I enjoyed reading it [laughs]. Li 🍐 and Yun ☁️ are sometimes childish but super cute in their normal interactions [blowing kisses]. They are also very decisive when facing enemies, with endless ideas and a tacit understanding to kill enemies. They are cool and handsome [admiration]. There are also various calculations of the villain boss, which were cleverly solved with Li Rich's unique ideas and our force. The four island owners and the master are also very reliable. The four island owners have different personalities, but they are really good. I really like the personalities and getting along with each island owner [blowing kiss]. I also want a long review. Really super pretty [blowing kiss] Really super pretty [admiration] Really super pretty [love] Really super pretty [KISS] It's really super pretty! [Love] It's really super pretty! [Love] It's really super pretty! [Love] It's really super pretty! [Love] It's really super pretty! [Love] It's really super pretty! It's really super pretty! It's really super pretty! Really super pretty [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] really super pretty [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] really super pretty [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] really super pretty [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] really super pretty [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] really super pretty [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

This book is really beautiful. The protagonists love without knowing it, and they pick on the details. That sugar is so sweet. The protagonist's various strange little thoughts add more interest to this book. The author's writing style is also very delicate, and the descriptions are also very detailed, so that people will not be confused or left speechless. The protagonist has an out-of-character personality and is also very funny. The protagonist Gong is also very fond of him. I can't tell you much about the plot, that's it. No loss in investing.

I stayed up late for a few days to finish catching up and comment! It's a book that I really like, and it's not surprising to me personally at all! The relationship between the two is sweet, cute and reassuring, and the relationship development does not feel abrupt. Moreover, the two of them are together for 99% of the time in the book. It feels like watching a young couple traveling together in the world. One point I particularly like is that in the beginning of the plot, when Lian Li was rescued and accepted as a disciple to practice on the island, Lian Li was very grateful, but the relationship between the two did not have a heavy relationship of "helper and helped person" or "high status person and ordinary status person". Lian Li's feelings for Yun Huizhou did not have the "filter sense of the savior", and they were just a natural couple between senior brothers. If you like watching Slow Water and Peaceful Cookies, this is the place to watch!

Li Li is very cute, righteous but not a virgin. To be honest, after reading the first chapter, I have no desire to follow him. But I still wanted to read it anyway, but what I never expected was that the more I read, the more surprised I became. Every character is portrayed very vividly and has its own characteristics. When I write a thousand words, I can rely on my horse to wait for the Zhuhua of Yeshui to illuminate the pen of Linchuan. All in all very nice

This is a sweet little novel, and I haven't seen anything too cruel yet. It's just that there are some places that don't need to be studied in detail. The author could update it more. Although this is not the first time I have seen this kind of subject matter, it is actually very rare to see it written well. I feel that the writing style is quite good and the emotions are also delicate. One thing I don't quite understand is whether Lian Li was originally a gay man or whether he gradually fell in love with Yun Huizhou? Also, when will the love lines come together? ! !

It's super good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I like the characters of the protagonists, one is sunny, cute and quirky, and the other is a free and unrestrained young man. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are cute, the characters have distinct personalities, and the writing is also good. It is a long-flowing type. Those who like ambiguous periods are in luck [Sending Hearts]

This is the first time a taciturn reader leaves a book review! I'm tired of reading too many fairy tales, and there are very few novels with a martial arts background. This one can be considered a masterpiece (I've already read it). It feels like every part is well-shaped and in place. 1. The balance between the "jianghu" and the "imperial court" in this book is very appropriate. In the later stage, it did not deviate from the imperial court, keeping the environment locked in the Jianghu, and you can feel the passionate, tense, and undercurrent atmosphere in the Jianghu. 2. The character setting and shaping are very good. Lian Li is smart, anti-routine, has a strong mouth and will not be bullied, and has his own three views. It is the first time he kills a cannon fodder villain easily, and he also thinks about the people when he is in the world. Yun Ze has strong martial arts skills and strong learning ability. Under the influence of Lian Li, he feels that he has gradually understood the routine. He is calm and rational, and can comfort and ease Lian Li's emotions in time. Sometimes his behavior is a bit funny. 3. The background setting is good. It is not a pure martial arts. Some of the martial arts settings have a little bit of immortality elements. It looks very refreshing and not frustrating. The golden finger of the protagonist who travels through the book is opened just right. The protagonist feels that he only knows a small part of the plot of the book. Every step after traveling through the book is filled with his own thoughts, which gives a strong sense of reality👍🏻. 4. The protagonist does not compete with the male and female protagonists of the original book, but the male and female protagonists of the original book can help at critical moments. 5. There is no sanctimonious plot setting, and the overall atmosphere of Jianghu feels very positive. 6. Other characters, such as the east, west, south, and north island owners, are all well portrayed, the characters are vivid, and the protagonists are surrounded by love. 7. The plot is very smooth, and the intrigue and excitement are well described without any sense of drag. It has a great sense of martial arts and a strong sense of fighting. It's passionate and a little funny. Finally, I would like to talk about some of the things I find unacceptable about this book, so as to clear up the confusion for those who are just as dissatisfied with it as I am. This is purely my fault and has nothing to do with this book. The protagonist Lian Li is not wearing a suit, but wearing a soul, but his appearance and name are exactly the same as the original owner. I am not sure if it is a plot arrangement (I suspect that the plot may have forced this carrier, and the original owner is just a plot setting). I cannot accept time-travelers using other people's bodies (even though they are exactly the same) and having intimate relationships with other people. But I think this point in this book is okay and harmless. The reading experience is still 100%, I hope more readers can discover this excellent work!

It's very good-looking. Different from the stereotyped characters, Yhz has a youthful spirit but is not reckless. Although ll has a sick and weak character in the early stage, he is really not a sick and weak character. He is the kind of character who is wise and knows how to advance and retreat. It is sunny (forgive my poor words. It is really beautiful and I have watched it many times). Also, I want to see the extra story about Master and Master Xi, please🥺

Hey, it's been a long time since I've read a light-hearted cookie. This one is really sweet and makes me happy while still using my brain... It's a rare book that has a male protagonist and has a strong sense of "subplot". I really like this feeling. The emotional line is also very cute and refreshing, and both characters have good personalities. Once or twice in the middle, I felt that Lian Li's grasp of the routines was a bit too good. But after reading the whole thing, I thought about it and felt that this was also an important setting of the time-traveling book. The great thing about this book is that Lian Li didn't remember much about the specific plot except knowing that it was a book. He basically relied on his own common sense of routines to make inferences, avoiding the unreasonable "you can't remember it in such detail" that often happens in other time-traveling books. All in all, this book is very cute, suki!

It feels so good [shy][shy], the little girl's heart is boiling when she watches it, and she wonders if she can see this beautiful scenery with her lover. I wonder if I can personally participate in this dispute between rivers and lakes. Ah! With ordinary knowledge, the little girl felt that the character of the protagonist was so reasonable and so well matched with the protagonist's lover. It's a pity that the little girl can't see the two get married, she feels regretful! ! ! ! ! The angry little girl wished she could become the author and coded two hundred chapters to record the sweet daily life of the Taoist couple.

Nice! ! A rare theme! So annoying! I feel like it comes naturally, and we get along with each other very naturally. The character of the protagonist is also very interesting, sometimes very funny, hahahaha, it's so good to watch! ! ! !

This is the most tender and delicate emotional drama that I have rarely seen, and it is very moderate and not abrupt at all. The progress is like silent rain that moistens things, burying it bit by bit. By the time both of them reacted, the love in their hearts had already sprouted. [Send heart] [Send heart], good book.

This article is super nice! A very quirky protagonist (the first reaction is this word, because 🍐's brain circuit is too broad, and he feels very comfortable scolding people), Yun Ye is very heroic, although later it turns out that he is a young hero, strong and has a boyish spirit. Just finish this article right away. It's not frustrating or holy at all. It's over. The relationship between the two of them in the early stage was great, and the plot was a little bit funny. The plot that connected to the main plot was also very continuous, and the various characters were not brainless. All in all, it's very good to read. It's a good article that I will read again and again.

It's good to watch. I'll read it more and more. I like this character setting and personality very much. It feels like a long, thin stream of water. It's very comfortable to watch. All in all, it's not a loss to get into the trap.

Nice! I just didn't find it until the end. The plot was very smooth. It was in a tense atmosphere from the end. It felt a bit rushed in some places, but the flaws are not to be concealed. I really like this kind of atmosphere between the protagonists. I haven't seen this kind of thing in a long time. It's so good and I love watching it! Anyway, it looks good!

Good-looking, good-looking, number 31. I have read extensively and know that the routine is not the same, the king of strong talk, the first-class master who is only gentle to the family, and the lazy, carefree, strong and gentle brother boyfriend. There are also the original male and female protagonists who are capable of being benevolent and righteous heroes, as well as many virtuous seniors. The writing style is more like the previous martial arts novels, which are still relatively sparse. Some of the fights, plots, and descriptions of supporting characters are relatively simple, and you can feel the atmosphere of the world. The force value feels like the early stage of ancient martial arts. I have always felt that fantasy, cultivation, ancient martial arts (martial arts), and Xianxia (cultivation of immortals) are several different novels. Now most of BL is Xianxia. The early stages of the plot are the big competition, learning skills on Lotus Island, and the Chuangling Cult, which are mainly about cultivating feelings. The later stages are the treasure hunt in the desert, the fierce battle in the Misty Villa, the siege of the living corpses, and the final decisive battle. In fact, the focus is more on describing the plot and less on the environment, otherwise the desert, mountain villa, and besieged city could be very shocking.

I really liked this book. I had never read this subject before, but I was hooked after reading it. The main reason is that the protagonists have very good personalities, and they are very human, and there is nothing too bloody. Basically, I like all the characters who appear. The original male and female protagonists are also very good people, and the master group is also very good. It really makes people feel like Xia. I feel that the sense of proportion is very good. After all, I am the kind of person who would be annoyed if a supporting character acts as a demon when looking at the emotional line between the protagonists. There was nothing in the whole book that made me feel uncomfortable.

Super pretty! ! A Li and Hui Zhou are both super cute, and their relationship lines are also natural. There are no misunderstandings and no bloodshed. Hey, watching two cute children falling in love makes my heart melt [send heart][send heart][send heart]! ! ! The plot is also very good, it is fascinating step by step, and you will want to watch it all in one breath! The monster-killing upgrade flow is great! ! ! Master, Master, Master is also very cute! The hero and heroine are not bad guys like other novels, we have always been good friends! Ali's luck is indeed unrivaled, hahahahaha, not to mention he has mastered all the necessary routines in novels [laughing][laughing][laughing]. The friendship, family, and love lines are all well written, and the characters are also very distinctive. Huizhou, you kid, I finally let you get the most beautiful woman in the world! [Laugh][like][laugh][like]

It's very pretty, and I like it very much. I really like watching this kind of thing between Jianghu. The plot is very natural. The most important thing is that there are no random people appearing to hinder the protagonist's feelings. The interactions between the protagonists are so cute. To be honest, I like the character of the protagonist Gong very much. I rarely see the protagonist Gong who is young and chivalrous in Tomato! ! ! ! I love this book so much that I will update it quickly.

I really like this novel. The logic is clear, the emotional transitions are natural, and there are funny plots interspersed with it. It is relaxing and enjoyable, and has a strong sense of substitution. It seems that I have really seen the various experiences between the two of them. It is really good to read! !

It's really good. I've seen more than two hundred pictures now and watched them all in one go. It's really good. It caught my attention at the beginning and then I found it a bit funny. I mean, I feel like their relationship is flowing and very delicate. Especially after they confessed their feelings, they acted it out many times. I can say that I never dropped my lips until I was satisfied with it, and there was also a bit of humor in it. I felt that their master was really cute, with a naturally silly and social-phobic character, and the two protagonists were really easy to get along with, especially the confession. I played it many times just to remember the scene at that time. It's so sweet to me [shy]

I've finished chasing it. I originally thought the title was weird and I had been collecting it for a long time but I didn't really want to read it. But I was very surprised when I read it. It's very interesting. It's all about IQ. There are all kinds of counter-routines and the content is very interesting. I finished it in two days [Sending my heart]

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful, it's like having a um, the readers commented very much Some villains go offline when they should go offline, instead of running away accidentally over and over again, and then survive to the finale. I would really appreciate this kind of thing. Even if there was someone inside who was run away by him, he didn't take advantage of the protagonist a lot, and even if he ran away, he had a purpose of running away, rather than just running away. Then, this novel is relatively perfect in every aspect, and it doesn't make people feel weird that it's complete. Anyway, it's really good to read. Highly recommended (❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~