The Origin Journey of the Daughter of Creation

Yes, the more the author goes to promote books about Tiamat, the more people will read them.

The author's basic skills are very good. All settings are very clear. It's not obtrusive at all, and you can't find the place where the police were dispatched. I am very satisfied with it. Give a hundred praises

Brothers, I am so happy. In Chapter 9, someone said that the root is part of Dayuan.

The impression is still okay, but what happened at the end of Fate and why did it jump to Shana?

The content is very novel, and innovation is encouraged. According to the previous plot, the subsequent structure will be very troublesome. This kind of plot has a wide scope and requires the ability to control the plot. The advantage of the large scene is that you can refer to war-like plots to mediate, help, watch, and participate in the form of a third party. The range of works you can choose is wider and more, but it requires higher plot control capabilities. The work is good As the first work written by a new author, everyone needs to be more considerate. After all, not many writers are born to be good at writing. It is more important to accumulate experience, the conception of writing techniques, the construction of characters, the formation of many characters, the overall integrity of the relationship network, the smooth connection from top to bottom, control of the plot, passionate battles, and leisurely daily life. Interactions between various friends, enemies, and lovers. Generally speaking, we still need to be more tolerant to writers who have new ideas. We can remind you of your opinions and don't go too far. The author also needs to interact with each other to build a certain group. As a suggestion from a Tomato reader with 6,000+ readers in five years, I wish the author a successful work.

Not bad, not bad. I am no longer Yunyuechu. I have only read the second volume, but I am very satisfied with the handling of the first volume. Although some people criticize the protagonist's combat power and feel that it is much weaker than the setting, I don't think there is any big problem, and fans do not need to grasp this so tightly. The evaluation is now complete: Yue Chefs can eat with confidence.

It's not enough. Please give me more. I've been waiting for a long time. Bring it up quickly [laughing]

Why did the world suddenly change?

It's a good read. It's rare to find a book about raising mothers. Come on, the author, don't give up 👍

I'm really happy to see a book that suits my taste. But do you know how painful it is for people who are free enough to read 800,000 words of novels a day to catch up on one or two chapters a day? 😢 It's really painful and happy at the same time.