The Origin Journey of the Creation Daughter

Yes, the more the author goes to promote books about Tiamat, the more people will read them.

The author's basic skills are very good. All settings are very clear. It's not obtrusive at all, and you can't find the place where the police were dispatched. I am very satisfied with it. Give a hundred praises

Brothers, I am so happy. In Chapter 9, someone said that the root is part of Dayuan.

The impression is still okay, but what happened at the end of Fate and why did it jump to Shana?

The content is very novel, and innovation is encouraged. According to the previous plot, the subsequent structure will be very troublesome. This kind of plot has a wide scope and requires the ability to control the plot. The advantage of the large scene is that you can refer to war-like plots to mediate, help, watch, and participate in the form of a third party. The range of works you can choose is wider and more, but it requires higher plot control capabilities. The work is good As the first work written by a new author, everyone needs to be more considerate. After all, not many writers are born to be good at writing. It is more important to accumulate experience, the conception of writing techniques, the construction of characters, the formation of many characters, the overall integrity of the relationship network, the smooth connection from top to bottom, control of the plot, passionate battles, and leisurely daily life. Interactions between various friends, enemies, and lovers. Generally speaking, we still need to be more tolerant to writers who have new ideas. We can remind you of your opinions and don't go too far. The author also needs to interact with each other to build a certain group. As a suggestion from a Tomato reader with 6,000+ readers in five years, I wish the author a successful work.

Not bad, not bad. I am no longer Yunyuechu. I have only read the second volume, but I am very satisfied with the handling of the first volume. Although some people criticize the protagonist's combat power and feel that it is much weaker than the setting, I don't think there is any big problem, and fans do not need to grasp this so tightly. The evaluation is now complete: Yue Chefs can eat with confidence.

It's not enough. Please give me more. I've been waiting for a long time. Bring it up quickly [laughing]

Why did the world suddenly change?

I'm really happy to see a book that suits my taste. But do you know how painful it is for people who are free enough to read 800,000 words of novels a day to catch up on one or two chapters a day? [Crying] It's really painful and happy at the same time.

It's a good read. It's rare to find a book about raising mothers. Come on, the author, don't give up [Like]

It's okay, there are no settings errors at the moment

It's super good-looking, but there are too few of them. It disappeared after just a while. Please keep updating and support me!

Although the writing is immature, the paragraphing is not very good. But the story is quite good. I like to watch all the worlds I have traveled through, especially older dramas like "Shina of the Shakugan"

Brothers, why do I always see updates but can't get new chapters? @

Refreshing and not boring Incense. . . .

Good, good, the more, the merrier

As long as you like mom too, then we are half-brothers and sisters [laughing]

. . . . No one will start a new chapter and go to an earlier chapter. . [Angry][Punch out]

Not enough! Come on, author! Don't stop!

Be broad, this book is very good, good luck to the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Tomato's book has been well written, at least there are no particularly huge problems.

Apart from unstable updates, the story is well written. The adaptation tests your familiarity with the original work, and I am very much looking forward to the subsequent chapters.

Nice! Come on, author.

I saw one, so happy!

Laozuo, did you go to fight with the Avengers in Chapter 2 and get offline [face covering]

I've never watched the anime of The Second World, so I have no idea what I'm talking about.

The series I chose are all really old ones, and I feel like I was dreaming about watching fan fiction a few years ago.

I really like reading novels related to Tiamat, but there are not many. Please update it a lot (support support)

This book is also rated 6.7, It's incredible, the setting is not wrong, and the story development is okay. Isn't it because someone saw that Changing World is no longer in the Xingyue system and abandoned it [what]

By the way, where can I watch the follow-up?