After Showing Off, on the Issue of Too Many Losing Heroines

I just hope that the heroine in the end will not be Xia Xuexing who is complacent because of her own emotional flaws affecting others. To be honest, I can accept it even if my sister and Qingmei don't confess to Bai Qian because they only have a relationship with Bai Qian because they like others. After all, Bai Qian will really stay away if the label he gave them collapses. At least like Ruan, even if there is a problem, he will not affect others but accept it silently. The ending is without a heroine or anyone else, as long as it is not Xia Xuexing! It's best if there is no heroine and everyone becomes a loser!

A very good Japanese light novel, but I hope there will be no female protagonist or a female protagonist who only likes the protagonist. If the female protagonist loses, they will feel like they have been bullied, which will definitely become the biggest poisonous point of this book. If possible, it's best to keep the male protagonist single and get rid of those relationships with the female protagonist! ! ! ! ! It is now 1:28 in the morning on May 3, 2024. Author, don't let me down!

It's good to watch, but after reading the comments, I don't understand why I can't watch the plot of the defeated dog. Have you read too much Shuangwen? The heroine falls in love with the hero after failing to like someone else, and you can't accept it? It feels quite outrageous. Come on, author!

The author's writing is really great. This book is a bit like a Japanese light novel. Among them, I think the character of Yukisei is more profoundly portrayed. Whether it is the straightforwardness of speaking or the bravery of confession, it is impressive. Especially where the male protagonist is caught and threatened, Huanxi Enemies is written so well. Well, all in all, I still want Xuexing to be happy, and not to be too caught up in this first love. I hope that I can eventually get married to the male protagonist. The portrayal of other female characters is also remarkable, whether it is the flawless president, or the cute middle-schooler with a middle-school disease, or the naturally stupid Qingmei who cannot recognize her own heart and cannot grasp the distance, or even the teacher who works hard to help students out of difficulties, the image is really full and full, which is unbearable to read. However, I just hope that the male protagonist's character can be more three-dimensional. To be honest, the protagonist is not only the clue that drives the story, but also the guide who leads the readers through the story. I think the creation of the male protagonist is more relatable to readers, but now I really don't understand the motivations or values ​​of the male protagonist. Why did he start to give up on his studies, school relationships and desire to improve after losing Qingmei's love? Moreover, if the male protagonist is a bad actor, his motive is simply because Qingmei doesn't love him anymore, which is also a bit thin. I think it would be better if more things can be added. I have always believed that in romance novels, the female characters should be better shaped, and the male protagonists should be better shaped, so that the whole story can be more lively and interesting. This is my little suggestion. In addition, the development of the story is also quite exciting, and you can see the author's ingenuity in the plot. But when watching the development and continuous ups and downs of the story, I found that the emotional ups and downs were a little weak. How can I put it, if some psychological or action descriptions could be added, the story would be more exciting. For example, when the male protagonist confronts Lin Li, it is all dialogue, and the emotional resonance is a bit lacking. All in all, the author still describes a wonderful love story to us, or the love story of a defeated dog. It gave me a sense of déjà vu in "Too Many Heroines of Losing Dogs". I hope the author can continue to work hard and present us with a more exciting story about losing dogs. By the way, is there a group? I want to chat with the author, it's so cool [Blow a kiss]

First of all, poison? There are more (don't worry) compared to the previous series of foreshadowings, it is really easy to misunderstand, such as Lin, and then there is a very stomach-ache plot [vomit] [vomit] Really, I felt like my heart was in my heart when I watched it in the middle of the night! ! ! Ahhhhhh. Does the author really not update another book? ? Please, please [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] @winwin This book really doesn't feel as good as your debut novel. I really want to read it.

The author writes this book very well, and it is even more problematic than "Surrounded by Troubled Girls". I hope the author can catch up with the subsequent plot [punch out][punch out][punch out][punch out]

I can only say that the author is really good at writing Japanese-style stomachache love light novels. Although the logic is slightly flawed, it does not prevent me from giving it full marks. This main line revolves around the autism of the male protagonist and the supporting female characters. They are completely incapable of speaking straight and verbally. They are like Japanese high school students who don't understand the most direct emotions in their hearts and are escaping from them. In fact, it is obviously good for everyone to speak out what is in their hearts, but they just shut themselves off from each other and avoid each other. All in all, it gets a 4.5 Rating. The logic is slightly flawed and it is suitable for certain groups, such as counter-intuitive love routines and rivers of blood.

It's okay, but it's not about love and affection. It's abstract. Anyway, just watch it for fun as the protagonist says. But since the protagonist hasn't come out of it himself, we have to watch it as fun for the protagonist. Bored, I want to see rivers of blood. Jpg So when did the author move the whole protagonist to the gentle childhood sweetheart transfer student, and then we can all be happy, the lost dog after getting to know the relationship, the lost dog who speaks unclearly [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

The book is good, but it just has this feature of taking over. It may be uncomfortable for most people. Finally, I wish the author a happy day😁

This novel has a very strange feeling, much like a light novel. It can be seen that the author has been deeply involved in the field of light novels for many years, and has the unique beauty of light novels. He has also continued to dig deeper into the subdivisions of each character to achieve a relative balance between each character.

The style is very novel, and the emotional description is quite good, but I can't figure out the character positioning @_@ It made my stomach hurt when I read it. I don't understand whether the author wants to write more female protagonists or something else. I hope it can be determined as soon as possible.

In fact, I wanted to give it a three-star rating at the beginning, because the twists of each character lacked a little warmth, and they lacked that understanding feeling when changing. Another reason is the worry about how it will end. For example, Lao Xue's reputation has been declining step by step, and it is difficult to imagine the beloved scene. But seeing the decision made by the author out of consideration of ability, I felt a little regretful. The ability to maintain stomachache throughout the work shows the author's level (although part of the credit is due to the awkwardness of the male protagonist rather than the ingenuity of the plot). Overall, it is on the lower end of the scale, a strategy card, and very suitable for the corresponding group of people. The only drawback is the character creation (for example, Lao Xue, this kind of withdrawn character is easy to shape the character arc, but I did not see it, only her impulsive part), and many times the reader will feel aggrieved. But as I said, this is an excellent work that can be played by a certain group of people, and the author's potential and shining points can be seen. I hope to work hard. Oh, yes, there is another question. There are just too many elements and characters, but I can't accurately describe the characteristics. Every time Lin Li appears, I have to spend time recalling who this person is () Some people say that there are too many seams. I think it is not a problem with the seams, but a certain sense of déjà vu. However, the problem of doing it for the sake of doing it is not outstanding, so we will overturn the verdict.

Indeed, like ordinary Japanese light novels, the characters are quite abstract. Japanese abstract

After watching it, I felt like there was a lump in my chest that wouldn't go away. The plot is interesting, but it was really uncomfortable to watch before the turning point. Uncomfortable, uncomfortable, uncomfortable

For the first time, harem lovers want to see no one survive. (Joy)

After watching Stomachache, I feel like I can refer to "You Are the One Who Likes Me", but the discomfort is greater and the taste is more like spring food? It's okay to read it, okay👌 I guess it won't make readers too happy, but it won't be uncomfortable either.

It looks good, I won't say much, I hope it will be updated soon, and I hope I can give my childhood sweetheart another chance.

At first it seemed like I had a stomachache, but after thinking about it, I may have read too many cool novels before. Looking back, the writing style of this novel is still very good. Although it is a bit toxic, it does not affect it as a relatively good novel.

It's a very interesting book, but it needs to be read on the radio. If it doesn't catch on, it can be said to be addicted. It's better to quit as soon as possible.

It's awesome [working on the manuscript], but it's even slower [almost crying], the twisted emotions are twisting and turning [laughing evilly], but just posting this is not enough to watch [crazy], five points of companionship, only one point of dissatisfaction from you🙁

Read this novel and be mentally prepared in advance. Many of them are losers. Well, some people say they don't like the male protagonist, but they actually like it. It's just a misunderstanding. It's quite heart-wrenching to read, but it's well written (≧∇≦*)

The writing is quite good, but the pace is slow. If the author writes it, it should be a novel with multiple female protagonists and more of a redemption story. There are not so many routines. It is considered a relatively novel novel.

The main character effect of the male supporting actors is too strong. Every suspension bridge effect is used to take off. Please help these women to remember it for so long.

Big cheers for the author! I will always support you! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good, I hope the author can keep writing [Like][Like][Like]

Generally speaking, the plot written by the author is relatively novel, but the narrative is a bit confusing. It may be necessary to make up a lot of settings later. There are no other major shortcomings. Good luck, author.

Now that I have seen it, I feel it is still very good. I prefer the author's pacing and the plot is also quite good. I hope that in the follow-up plot, a certain female brat will find that she has become a loser, and then stay away from Bai, and don't lick her face while taking advantage of Qingmei.

I've been reading it for a while and it feels good. It's a classic light novel style. Come on.

Super twisted but also super pretty! Everyone has delicate emotions. The protagonist is as rational as a god, but he also has flaws in his heart. I hope the ending will give him a 1v1

I personally prefer articles with this kind of atmosphere. Then, each person's character was written, whether good or bad. The bad side of the female character's creation can make people moved and uncomfortable, which is good.