Is There Any Kind of Immortality Writing About the Cool Senior Brother and the Madly Criticizing Young Junior Brother?
I really like the kind of cool senior brother and crazy little junior brother, they are both powerful.
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It's particularly good to watch, the plot flows smoothly without dragging on, the character of the protagonist is well portrayed (I'm not very good at praising people), and then the next! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh touched my xp! It's so good that I cry, meow meow meow! Author, I will pester you for the rest of my life! Come on update come on update! Really looking forward to it!
Pei Xingwang, Xuan Yin, and Xuan Qi. These three people really tortured me. Why are you so cruel? [Crying] To be honest, I feel that the writing of this article could be better. It may be because I did not get the vivid part of Chi Xiaoshu. I feel that the most interesting part of this book is the first volume. I feel that the author later wanted to write about the protagonist facing each living life but unable to escape his fate. In the end, he became a little numb and helpless to accept, but I always felt that this point was not written too clearly. But the three people above feel so sad💔especially the two at the back. I just always feel that the author could write better! Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][laughing][laughing][laughing] By the way, there are also some people who feel that the content and plot of the whole book are a little confusing. Sometimes I can't tell who the person is when I read it. I always feel that the image of the character is not that distinct.
Looks good, Chi Xiaoshu really takes control of senior brother. The most impressive thing is the lantern display. Chi Xiaoshu seems to have a lot of wishes, but really speaking, he loves senior brother, senior brother loves me, senior brother, please don't leave me [face covering] [OK] You really don't love me too much. And he tied them together with dry willow sticks. This thing is so fragile. It only depends on Xiao He's indulgence to him. Xiao He is so charming, so gentle, so fond of you. Chi Xiaoshu, you are so happy. After watching this, I deeply understand what it means: Crying children get candy.
How could we not have such a sweet and beautiful book! Have! Comment! Point! Especially the baby Chi Shu is so cute, he won't wear pipa bones like other crazy men and abuse our children [shy][admiration][admiration][blowing kisses]
!!!!!!!!! It feels like it involves some spoilers!!⚠️If you haven't finished the book, it's best not to read it🙅🏻♀️ The emotional line is very well written. Gong and Shou are always determined to choose each other. After Shou sees what happened to Gong and realizes her feelings for Gong, she doesn't delay at all and directly responds to Gong. Meimei is together. To be honest, towards the end, I felt a little frustrated. First of all, it was the emperor who secretly did so many bad things by himself and killed innocent people, so that both of his daughters did not end well (in my heart, Xiaoshi) Although my sister became the empress in the end, I find it difficult to let go of my sister becoming the artifact container for her.) But the emperor died very hastily in the end, and was killed all at once. How can I say, I can only sigh that although he has no cultivation, he is vicious and scheming enough. As for Lu Yi, he is also quite sadistic. He worked for the emperor to protect the people he cares about, but in the end no one survived. There is also the original male protagonist Yan Xiao, I dislike it the least I like his setting, not because I hate him, but to be precise, I hate the power of the plot. Although the protagonist Gong did not become the villain in the end, because of the plot setting, there must be a villain who was killed by Yan Xiao himself. This villain became the master and was killed by his apprentice. I felt it was a bit cruel. The person who died in the end changed from Shou's partner to Shou's master. I couldn't help but realize that the development of the story had really been changed? The story has not changed, but the people who are responsible for the setting have changed. In the end, it is the story of Xuan Yin and Xuan Qi. To be honest, at the beginning, I was wondering why the two of them had to face the Ghost King without any output. In the end, the Ghost King simply made a move and let them live and die. But they also understood that this is what they must go through. The revenge of killing relatives must have an end. It is also the pit buried by Xuan Qi's previous abnormalities, and it is also their performance to save the common people. I think the latter part is quite sadistic, and the endings of the supporting characters are unsatisfactory.
It's so good-looking [Sending my heart to you] The author must not stop updating, Crybao Gong is really a fairy tale
Four stars for young couples. The logic is too flawed in some places, and the character creation is actually a bit one-sided? But it can be seen that it was written with great care. I originally wanted to abandon the article because I wasn't very interested in it, but I hesitated every time I saw some heart-wrenching sentences. (It was because of the sentence "He seems to have only two expressions in front of him - one is to laugh, the other is to cry." This is to the effect.) The big words are actually quite spiritual. I believe if I write a little more, I can express myself more perfectly.
I like this kind of writing style, and the delicate emotions are eloquently expressed. The crybao attack really touched me. Chi Xiaoshu wrote it so well, and He He also described it very well. He is a really gentle senior brother, witty and brave [I learned]. What I like very much is that the senior brother is always the strongest fighting force [shy] and he can explain clearly when he has something to say. Xiaochi is really obedient when coaxed, so cute
It's good to watch, I hope it's more exciting hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Chi Xiaoshu and Yuan Xie are happy, Xiao Yuan and A Xiao are also happy, Xiao Yu is not happy... The most regrettable thing is Xuan Qi and Xuan Yin, I really cried to death, A Yin killed A Qi with his own hands, how painful it was for him oooooo [crying] [crying]
It has a beginning and an end, which is worthy of encouragement. The logic of the story line is quite smooth. But in the later period, the supporting roles became more outstanding. I even felt that Lu Yi was more like the protagonist. Can this be said? As well as the story of the ghost king and the protagonist when they were young, I think it would be more touching if the story could be described.
No culture, really good-looking, good-looking, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good! ! ! !
The appeal of this book was so irresistible that I read the whole book in one sitting. The characters are vividly and powerfully created, and the supporting roles are also lively and interesting. The character setting is even more eye-catching (who can resist the unique charm of a crying woman dressed as a puppy?) [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The image of the senior brother is really full. Step down from the altar and come to the world, experience the warmth and warmth of human relationships, and the changes in world affairs. The protagonists are very sober and will not die for their love. This still surprised me [laughing] but the ending was a bit rushed. Come on~
In winter, the snow and gold appear at the beginning of spring, and at the end of the moon, the sun shines brightly in the shadows.
It's very beautiful. If you mess with it, it's like being haunted. I want to see your work.
I quite like it. The writing is readable. The content and pacing may indeed be a bit lacking, but it's not a big problem. I felt very comfortable after reading it, and I really liked the setting. In fact, at first I was worried that Yan, who also likes senior brother, would compete with Chi [face covering], but it turns out I was overthinking it. Feelings can be considered sweet now. No big misunderstanding twists and turns. Micro group portrait, dead, dead, dead. See if you can accept it.
It's very beautiful. The micro-group portraits are well written and not very flattering. I felt inexplicably sad after it was finished. When I saw the 20 questions at the end, I had a real feeling that it was finished. Personally, I felt like I was a scumbag. The writing was like the fragrance of ink. Alas, how should I put it, I can't describe it. It's a very familiar feeling. It shouldn't be considered ky [exploration][exploration]
It's pretty good, but it's a bit sadistic in the back, but I think it's normal, and then it's so sweet. One of them cries, and the other is willing to keep coaxing me. I really like it so much.
So beautiful, so pure love, double clean
Although it feels a bit confusing, it's still pretty good. It's hard for a goldfish brain to remember people's names, especially those with similar names.
It's beautiful, but not many people see it.
It feels pretty good. At the point where I like it. It's just that sometimes I feel that Gong's personality makes me think he's a girl, but later on when I discovered my feelings, I really doted on Gong.
Wow, I really love it. It's rare to see a book like this that makes me fall in love with it. I really like the characters. Although it's a little short, it's really good-looking.
It's great, I love it, I'll read it more, it's so heart-wrenching to write about [I adore] I really like the character of the protagonist [laughs]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's my type
Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Very well written, sweet and sad
Not bad, very pretty