Think Twice Before Making a Game Character: A Painless Gender Swap and a Flood of Tears

Did the author deliberately practice it? The fighting scenes are very powerful. After reading the whole article, I only feel that the protagonist, a "floating person", is a bit real. The other characters are all fixed templates, but I still feel the warmth in their words and actions. Every character is imperfect, and it is precisely because of these imperfections that they complete the false text. At least there is no real villain here from what I see. The only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is the nature of the businessman. The two largest landlords in the article cannot be blamed for murder and arson, but they cannot be easily forgiven. Maybe the protagonist will be called cold-hearted and unfeeling by future readers, which is exactly in line with the character. The humility, courtesy, and tolerance in the article are not weak but enrich the character image. This kind of person must be very happy in reality, whether it is him or the people around him (no intention to stir up gender disputes). Isolated game settings are very common, and they can quickly immerse readers into the game. The game has a lot of fun online, and the timeline adopts the "Ke Xue" world view, so the rhythm will never be a problem. I was so shocked that I was inadvertently revealed to a fledgling kid like me. The foreshadowing of the fast-paced online article was very short... At least as long as the author continues to write more, I will follow him |_)

The protagonist's perspective is different from others. Every time I see the protagonist being forcibly treated, I want to laugh. It's this personal pronoun that always makes me a little confused. I always have to think about whether it refers to the protagonist or the supporting role. After all, the protagonist now uses a female nickname, but I still use "he"

It's okay, the writing is on the pass line, and the difference between the protagonist's perspective and the perspective of others seems quite interesting. The protagonist is indifferent and focuses on cultivating, and looks like he is going to follow the level of Zhanmei Su. However, the author did not handle the connection between important plots well. The transitions are abrupt and there is a sense of pettiness in some places, giving people a sense of detachment. However, this may be because it is in a low-level world, and the fashion value may not be much higher. I hope that the plot in the future will not be that the protagonist is actually a local reborn, and the real world is a different world. This will directly bring down the fashion value of the protagonist without cp. In the end, the protagonist fights all the invincibles in the world, but loves no one. He returns to the real world without hesitation and leaves behind the legend of ascension. It would be cool. But it's okay to write according to the author's own ideas, and to be able to complete The Other Eunuch

The sense of separation between the protagonist's perspective and the outside world's perspective is quite novel, and overall it's very interesting to read. When else will I be able to eat sugar candies?

This book is actually pretty well written, but I feel that the main character, a human being and a machine, may not understand the setting. Imagine that the people around you, except those related to the protagonist Wu Aotian, who is your brother, all other normal people are similar to the faceless people in the horror game you play, how would you react to them. Moreover, for the protagonist, this world does not belong to him, nor does he belong to this absurd game world. The protagonist just wants to speed through the game and then return to his own world - the world where his very close friends live.

There are hundreds of millions more. I just want to read this kind of novel where the protagonist is miserable in the eyes of others, but in fact the protagonist is innocent. In the end, everyone is upset. I can even imagine that the protagonist dies in the eyes of others, but he still has one life because it is a game system. Others regret the crematorium😋😋😋😋😋😋

The protagonist has a faint human-machine feel 😄 When other people asked the protagonist, the protagonist was so dumb that it was very funny 😄

It feels like I have been reading a stand-alone novel, and the number of readers goes up and down. The most poisonous points of this book, in my opinion, are: The plot, characters, and world settings are incomplete, incomplete, and unreasonable [Who is the person (mother?) That Wu Wang dreamed about dead in his dream? Why do this? There are many characters, most of them are tool people, giving a sense of human-machine recognition (the protagonist's sect, family, etc... Are all tool people) The hole dug by the author was not filled in much before it was over, and the settings were not taken up once or twice. Some of the plot supplements are too blunt. So far, we still don't know the protagonist's interpersonal relationships (in the game and reality), and the motivation for returning home is incomplete (who is his friend? Does he miss him so much?) ...(Besides, there are many more, the above are purely personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them) But the paragraphs and sentences in the novel are smooth and fluent, and the writing style is okay. I like the character and behavior of the protagonist of the novel very much (mainly this, I give an extra star for this), the faint sense of humanity, the determination to go home... All in all, it's a good book to read without thinking. It can be used to kill time when you're bored. The wanderer finally returned to his hometown. Is it a pity? But it was like this This book may bring 1,000 Hamlets to 1,000 people. Just reading the novel makes me happy. Although there are many poisonous points, it is not as good as the masterpiece, but come on, author! (The early stage is good, the middle stage is okay, and the late stage is too messy)

The changes are simple, the writing is excellent, and there are zero descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. The book-traveling + system can be treated as a genderless protagonist. It has a fantasy cultivation background. The male protagonist is basically invincible, but the female protagonist will definitely fight the male protagonist in the future. The battle scenes are well described. Although the female protagonist has no cp, the emotional lines between the supporting characters are also quite touching and difficult to understand. Overall worth a look.

A+ Ending at 334. He is Yongzhen from the Shura line (definitely won by the plot), a tuner from the research institute (extracted with an ego), the demon king Amiya with the black crown, Precious who directly wiped out Kelsey, and a complete pest emperor (the social layer + suitcase are useless) Very good character creation, and the sense of oppression is powerful. The branch line Fazi Dao is very good. 3 Sword spirits are of little use except to increase the inheritance level. There is no emotional line, thank God, I just loved watching this. Looking forward to the ending.