[Primitive society-strong women-farming-no CP]
What would a woman with no passion for life do like if she traveled to primitive times?
I am a novice writer, writing a novel for the first time, and my writing is not good, so I accept all the good and bad advice.
Reader comments
The writing is great. The heroine is almost omnipotent. She established a country, but she still has no CP. I really like non-CP. The heroine is very powerful. In the end, she established a country and expanded the country's territory to the entire Middle East. She is super powerful. Of course, the author is also very capable and can finish a book. There is no abandonment or anything, it is really good. I rarely see a novel about a primitive society with a completed heroine and no CP.
1. Inheritance system (not the kind where whoever is more powerful becomes the boss, but where the leader's son becomes the boss)
2. The leader of the Shu tribe is a man, and he is also responsible for receiving guests. I guess the inheritance system must be that his son Ku will inherit the leader position, and the same is true for the tribe where the heroine belongs. After reading it, I found that almost all the successors of the tribe are sons.
3. Handicrafts and cooking are all done by women, while medical skills are done by fish (female)
①Stereotype (Girls still want to become whiter and more beautiful even when they don't have enough to eat or clothes to keep warm. Boys have a natural love for weapons.
② It was a matter of course that the heroine helped the savages. Her brothers wanted daggers, so she gave them what the heroine gave her. They didn't dare to ask for it, so she thought of her and asked the heroine to give it to her brothers, so that the leader would not dare to say anything.
③The pace of this article is a bit fast, and only one-third of the way through, the heroine tells those people that we don't need to save food, we can have three meals a day (but at this moment, the food is actually not enough)
④The witches in this tribe left people a little speechless (the heroine led them to build a house, eat three meals a day, practice weapons, make pottery and everything else, and then said that they should give a name to the house after it was built. He said that changing the name would not be a betrayal of faith)
⑤The previous patriarch's son Shi had his own way of doing things and did not obey the instructions of the heroine, which was annoying (the heroine almost got into an accident, but luckily she was saved by Gu, who then treated her for four or five days). Just like that, there were still many people interceding for him, saying that he didn't mean it. Damn it, if Gu hadn't blocked the heroine's way, the heroine would have died.
⑥The heroine in the previous life was over 40 years old
⑦ There are not many female high-profile characters. Currently, there are women (Gu, Xiaoxue, Hua, Yu, Yu's sister Yue) and men (Elder Ji, Leader Qi, Shi, Hei, Ji, Hou, Elder Tu, Hei, Luo, He, etc.). Until very late, there are no high-profile female characters. They are all men.
It's worth watching. The plot is reasonable. The heroine is kind, but not a virgin. She has principles and bottom lines, and is very powerful and omnipotent. However, I originally thought she was from a matriarchal society, but I found out that this is not the case. This is a bit disappointing. The other writing is quite good.
The article is well written, but too exaggerated. But boredom can also be worth a look
It's good to praise the author
Very good, don't tremble. So far, only the grain output has been high. Everything else is good.
Very good, very good. The female protagonist is the first person. She can have the world in mind, work hard, and devote her life. It is deeply touching. It is absolutely good. Among the novels about time travel to primitive tribes, only I Am a Primitive Man can compare with it in beauty.
Although the plot is simple and there is no male protagonist, the plot is reasonable and not exaggerated. It can be seen that the author has a wide range of knowledge. I can finish it, [like][like][like]
A lot of knowledge, worth reading
A glorious life, like a passerby, written too fast!
What would it be like if you couldn't get out of the virgin forest? Come and take a look at our heroine. Calmly build a house slowly and step by step.
I give it five stars. I read it in one sitting. I loved it.
The article is simple and unpretentious. Very interesting!
Four stars for encouragement!
Pretty good, very orderly
It's really well written. I gained a lot of knowledge. I like it.
This is the first time I have seen this kind of text. It is so beautiful. I support the author. Come on.
Great book, no kisses or hugs. I read it in one sitting and satisfied my fantasy. The writing is pretty good, so it's not uncomfortable.
Beautiful and worth recommending.
Simple and relaxing to look at
Beautiful and rich in content
Really good, I like this kind of writing
Although written in the style of a running account, the plot is still exciting and rich in details.
The writing is great. The heroine is almost omnipotent. She established a country, but she still has no CP. I really like non-CP. The heroine is very powerful. In the end, she established a country and expanded the country's territory to the entire Middle East. She is super powerful. Of course, the author is also very capable and can finish a book. There is no abandonment or anything, it is really good. I rarely see a novel about a primitive society with a completed heroine and no CP. 1. Inheritance system (not the kind where whoever is more powerful becomes the boss, but where the leader's son becomes the boss) 2. The leader of the Shu tribe is a man, and he is also responsible for receiving guests. I guess the inheritance system must be that his son Ku will inherit the leader position, and the same is true for the tribe where the heroine belongs. After reading it, I found that almost all the successors of the tribe are sons. 3. Handicrafts and cooking are all done by women, while medical skills are done by fish (female) ①Stereotype (Girls still want to become whiter and more beautiful even when they don't have enough to eat or clothes to keep warm. Boys have a natural love for weapons. ② It was a matter of course that the heroine helped the savages. Her brothers wanted daggers, so she gave them what the heroine gave her. They didn't dare to ask for it, so she thought of her and asked the heroine to give it to her brothers, so that the leader would not dare to say anything. ③The pace of this article is a bit fast, and only one-third of the way through, the heroine tells those people that we don't need to save food, we can have three meals a day (but at this moment, the food is actually not enough) ④The witches in this tribe left people a little speechless (the heroine led them to build a house, eat three meals a day, practice weapons, make pottery and everything else, and then said that they should give a name to the house after it was built. He said that changing the name would not be a betrayal of faith) ⑤The previous patriarch's son Shi had his own way of doing things and did not obey the instructions of the heroine, which was annoying (the heroine almost got into an accident, but luckily she was saved by Gu, who then treated her for four or five days). Just like that, there were still many people interceding for him, saying that he didn't mean it. Damn it, if Gu hadn't blocked the heroine's way, the heroine would have died. ⑥The heroine in the previous life was over 40 years old ⑦ There are not many female high-profile characters. Currently, there are women (Gu, Xiaoxue, Hua, Yu, Yu's sister Yue) and men (Elder Ji, Leader Qi, Shi, Hei, Ji, Hou, Elder Tu, Hei, Luo, He, etc.). Until very late, there are no high-profile female characters. They are all men.
It's worth watching. The plot is reasonable. The heroine is kind, but not a virgin. She has principles and bottom lines, and is very powerful and omnipotent. However, I originally thought she was from a matriarchal society, but I found out that this is not the case. This is a bit disappointing. The other writing is quite good.
The article is well written, but too exaggerated. But boredom can also be worth a look
It's good to praise the author
Very good, don't tremble. So far, only the grain output has been high. Everything else is good. Very good, very good. The female protagonist is the first person. She can have the world in mind, work hard, and devote her life. It is deeply touching. It is absolutely good. Among the novels about time travel to primitive tribes, only I Am a Primitive Man can compare with it in beauty.
Although the plot is simple and there is no male protagonist, the plot is reasonable and not exaggerated. It can be seen that the author has a wide range of knowledge. I can finish it, [like][like][like]
A lot of knowledge, worth reading
A glorious life, like a passerby, written too fast!
What would it be like if you couldn't get out of the virgin forest? Come and take a look at our heroine. Calmly build a house slowly and step by step.
I give it five stars. I read it in one sitting. I loved it.
The article is simple and unpretentious. Very interesting!
Four stars for encouragement!
Pretty good, very orderly
It's really well written. I gained a lot of knowledge. I like it.
This is the first time I have seen this kind of text. It is so beautiful. I support the author. Come on.
Great book, no kisses or hugs. I read it in one sitting and satisfied my fantasy. The writing is pretty good, so it's not uncomfortable.
Beautiful and worth recommending.
Simple and relaxing to look at
Beautiful and rich in content
Really good, I like this kind of writing
Although written in the style of a running account, the plot is still exciting and rich in details.