A Taoist’s Life in Republican-Era China

The protagonist Qin Chuan practices the immortal way. In the Age of Ending Law, Lin Jiu and the others practice the divine way of meritorious deeds. It has too many disadvantages and cannot kill ordinary people without reason. The protagonist Qin Chuan follows the immortal way, is free and easy, and pursues immortality. All mortals in Immortal Rebellion belong to the immortal way.

Why isn't it segmented? Looks a little tired

So far, the writing is okay. As a time traveler, I don't reveal too much about the plot, and I don't need to use countless lies to cover up one lie. The role of the system is only to provide assistance, and it does not help the host to practice. The talent of the pig's feet is still average. The waste material flow is only suitable for immortality, because as long as you can survive, you can always succeed. Or the system will give him points. Those with top qualifications must either live in the light or hide, otherwise they will die early. After all, you can only be a thief for a thousand days, but not a thief for a thousand days.

The writing is good but the words are a bit short.

After reading this article, I feel like I have read an article.

Except that there are no paragraphs, the plot is okay. It doesn't become awesome all of a sudden, and there is no Virgin.

It's well written, but not dividing it into paragraphs would affect reading too much.

It's pretty good. It has the feeling of being a Buddhist monk in ordinary people's impressions. And the most rare thing is that it doesn't completely follow the plot and knows what to control and what not to control.

Come back after the pigs are fattened

Very good keep it up