The Mad Critic Read My Mind, I Changed the Plot to Get Crazy

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This is the top one I have seen so far for mind reading, or mind reading plus word changing plots. It is really not that embarrassing, and there is no real or fake daughter, hair pulling, or any emotional drama. Anyway, it really includes mind reading, mind reading speakers, and plot changing. The author is not soft-hearted and messy, he just follows the plot directly, and is decisive and ruthless. It is very interesting to watch. Author, cheers for more updates The more you look at it, the worse it becomes. And I think the author's title needs to be changed, it's also homophonic and can be changed at will. And I started to dislike the heroine less and less, it was very unsightly.

Don't get the names of the heroine and her sister reversed.

It looks good, support my brother

The plot and rhythm of this book are good, and the author also added some eavesdropping and other jokes. What I think is unnatural is the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, and I always feel that the male protagonist is good to the female protagonist because he heard the female protagonist's voice and knew that the female protagonist is powerful and can change his destiny. But this book does not take the relationship between the male and female protagonists as the main development line, so it is not a big problem.

Absolutely amazing, so beautiful

It's so good-looking, it's hilarious.

Jiang Yunchu: [Tongzi, my children are so powerful, so don't take any chances with them. She didn't want her children to join some space-time administration. System: [Um, host, we recruit people on a voluntary basis. ] [By the way, there are currently no plans to recruit them. ] Jiang Yunchu: [That's good, our family will be locked together. …

Hahaha, it's so funny. I laughed so much that my stomach hurt. Especially the first half of it, I really laughed out loud. The original plot with no way out was changed with just a few words. Hoho, the danger was immediately saved and came with a few laughs. Really, I suggest you give it a try if you are not interested in anything else. You can laugh your abs out.

It's pretty good, the content is interesting, the characters are pretty good, but the villain's death is a bit slow and the others are pretty good, except for the kids behind them, I think they're all awesome, they all have some strength [thoughts]

It's pretty good, the plot and pace are good. The content is very funny, sometimes a bit off-putting. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very sweet [Like][Like][Like] It's just that it's not very good for Genshin Impact players. There is a villain named Zhongli. I recommend Zhongli. It's a bit...[Grievance][grievance][grievance] Overall it's very good and worth watching [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's very novel. It's the first time I've read such a novel. The plot is attractive and funny. I hope the author will keep it up and update it more often.

Not bad, come on, come on, come on [eat melon][eat melon]

Haha, most of the content in it is really funny, I'm not going to lie, it's true

I haven't seen such a good article on plot modification for a long time, hahahaha

The novel is good, but the ending is too hasty. It's a pity that the heroine's mother is not a kind person, otherwise she could have a son and a daughter. I'm curious whether the heroine's fourth baby is a boy or a girl. If the heroine's fourth child is a boy, it will be perfect. Everything else is good.

This is the funniest and most beautiful novel I have ever read, bar none. I want to give the author a big thumbs up! 😘 My stomach hurts from laughing so hard [smirk] [smirk] I hope the author's future works will be as good as this novel. Look after you! Come on! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

2024.6.5 The finale came to an end before I knew it, and I finally finished reading another book. Haha (ꄱੈˍꄱੈ). It's quite funny. The revised plot is really funny. It's worthy of praise and recommendation [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Gaga, the laughing mouse looks so good

Sounds great, can't put it down

Made me laugh so hard hahaha

The first half is still very interesting. In the later stage, because the golden finger is too big, there are many restrictions and it is easy to skip the text.

It's pretty good, although some parts are a bit gingery, but overall it's quite cola.

Hey hey hey, this book is fun, I like it, love it, love it [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Say Nothing Quack is so funny, it's been a long time since I've had a novel that kept me updated all night long. In the middle of the night, I couldn't help but laugh and endure the pain.

Changing the plot is very interesting, mainly because of the fun. . ! It's so funny that the villain thinks he's possessed and deserves to be pinched, but I feel like the hero needs to be strengthened a bit.

It's beautiful (♥∀♥), so funny, not bad, I like it 😍, thank you so much for the author✊, I'm looking forward to your next work!

Very interesting and funny, worth watching

This is my first time reading a novel of this type, and it is quite novel. The heroine is pretty good. The plot is also quite funny.

It would be best if the male and female protagonists have a child.