Summon the Dan Guards: Develop the Sect's Power

It looks good. Keep writing, but it's too fast. This is the time to write about the transformation of gods. It's only a few chapters. Logically speaking, the most Yuanying can appear now, and in the end Wanbao Pavilion feels that one transformation is not enough. Does it mean that Dongxu is about to come out? It's too fast. . I'm afraid it won't be long before an immortal appears and writes like this

Not bad, it seems to my liking so far [I learned it]

In fact, if you come too soon, don't make it too small. For the outer sect elder, let's be Nascent Soul, and for the inner sect, let's transform into gods. If you want to divide the peaks into different peaks, you can merge into one and become the peak master. The subsequent realms will be dedicated to cultivation or hiding. Of course, the positions can also be adjusted. When you merge into the inner sect, become the elder of the outer sect.

Rich content, but not enough details

Quite pretty. How to write it? Go look at similar ones and try to change them.

Not bad, rate the subject matter

Much better than other sect novels, five stars for encouragement