Zhu Ma Is the Villain, but the Protagonist Is Her Sister.

⭕ Set to attract ★★★★★ ——Brother's BL + sister's GL, the ancient Feng Aotian from the brother's perspective, the main plot of brother and sister looking for relatives + love and peace (world upgrading), in short, it is a story where the brother controls the sister, controls the younger brother, and rushes to each other, which is relatively new. ⭕ Plot rhythm ★★☆☆☆ ——The early stage is good, but the details in the middle and later stages are not appropriate, the transition is unnatural, and some plots are a bit boring. ⭕Character creation ★★★★☆ ——It's very lively, but it's a little hard to remember the repeated settings when there are too many people. ⭕ Emotional transition ★★★☆☆ ——Actually, the change is a bit sudden, but it's okay to have been together for so long. The loyal dog Green Tea 1 × the fishing system dom0, the younger brother is a love-minded, and the older brother is pure doting, all potential setbacks are eliminated in seconds. ⭕ Smooth writing ★★★☆☆ ——Basically no problem is enough. ⭕ Overall impression ★★★★☆ ——The narrative needs to be improved, but I like the setting so much. The combat power/hole cards are always there, so there is no sense of crisis, it's more relaxed. ⭐ Personal rating 8.9 ——Thank you for finishing this book, keep up the good work

Recommend a good book, the plot is very interesting, the background setting of ancient female videos, it seems that the author really likes this kind of novel about the heroine who is promoted by the academy to be favored by the group. The younger sister's CP is the same sex, and the brother's CP is also the same sex. Seeing that the latest chapter is still dealing with the brother and sister's vests, it is quite dragging anyway. There is no role for another male protagonist in this chapter, which is not completely absent. It feels like it is about the brother slowly discovering his feelings. In fact, the author could have written another novel from the younger sister's perspective. My brother is more comfortable or not, but my sister is really happy. You can write articles about group favorites who like to read the brother's perspective. Those who like to read cool stories about two male protagonists or sweet pets should endure the embarrassment, because it's not that fun. There is also the phenomenon that the main characters on both sides of the brother and sister have duplicate characters, making it difficult to distinguish who is who.

The development of the plot is not slow, not boring, and not watery. Don't be misled by the ratings. It's a very good article. Xiao Su's image is also well portrayed. He is a person who is keen on raising cubs and controlling girls. Hahahahaha, the system is also good, but it would be better with Twelve. Haha, I also really found the plot when Master Hua found Xiao Su, the first disciple of the sect is my brother? I'm looking forward to the plot of meeting my sister later. Don't be misled by the ratings. It's a very good article and the author's writing is not bad. Hurry up and you won't lose money if you invest.

I'm here to contribute a long review ① [Character creation] The personalities of the two protagonists are relatively distinct, and it can be seen that they are written with care, especially the possessiveness of Twelve, which is a special point for me. However, the label says micro-group portraits. I feel that for micro-group portraits, the shaping of the secondary protagonists in this book is not very obvious. The author did not put much effort into the description of the secondary characters, and I can't feel the three-dimensional vividness of the secondary characters. ② [Plot] I personally think the pace of this book is relatively fast, and the author's connection is okay, so it feels like it's not dragging out, and the writing is smooth and natural. I like this kind of fast-paced writing, but there are some places, like the ten-year process of becoming a god, that I think can even be written in more detail. The plot can be richer and more detailed. ③OverallThe advantages probably outweigh the disadvantages. I mainly read fairy tales. I have basically read all the two-male immortal novels on the market. The setting alone is amazing. This one is a double-strength one. I felt so happy reading it. Ps (Boss, please take a look at this book. I am very picky about articles. This book is really good. There are too few people following it. Please support this book. At least it should be finished for me and don't drop it)

I like the character design very much, and I'm really looking forward to the scene where the protagonist meets his sister. I just need to reflect on why the new books I'm looking for are all with 5 or 60 chapters. They're too short, and I cry.

Let's talk about the plot first. It's very novel. The protagonist, the demon cultivator, doesn't copy other versions of the demon cultivator who do all kinds of evil. It can be seen that the author has carefully polished the overall setting. However, the collective amnesia plot in the middle and later stages, to be honest, I don't like it very much. It is indeed very logical. There are a lot of characters, and most of them only appear for a short time. From my point of view, the author wants to write the feeling that everyone is his own protagonist. Well, it echoes the final ending. However, as a reader, the relationship between the characters is easy to be confused. Many characters have their own shining points, but they are not distinct enough and appear not often enough, so it is easy to forget. The author can actually reduce them a bit. In terms of the author's writing style, it's pretty good. I could read it smoothly before Chapter 180. After Chapter 180, I forgot too many characters, so I didn't read it so smoothly (Note: I only spent 4 days reading it). Overall, the writing is flawless and the plot is logical. There are too many characters and most of them have very few appearances. It is easy to get confused and forget.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but this book is really good. First of all, the plot is not sluggish and the pace is very comfortable to watch. The character of the protagonist is also very good. [Blow kiss] My language expression skills are not good, but the portrayal is very good.

So far, I think this article is really good. The plot is not draggy at all, and there are a lot of laughs. You can read it when you are depressed. There is also Xiao Su's white hair. I really like this kind of thing (｡>∀<｡) It's still a fishing style but innocent. I particularly like this type that is both good and fun-loving. It took me a day to tie it up. Of course, there is still a lot of room for improvement. For example, in fighting scenes, when Twelve is dueling with the demon king, he can use some short sentences or add more fighting verbs to make it more immersive. There is also an introduction to the famous scene where Twelve and his sister are "playing". You can also use more verbs to describe the scene, which is not too difficult. It needs to be pointed out directly that Twelve has no killing intent. It is best for readers to experience it directly from the description. That is, instead of directly saying what Twelve is like, write about how he lets go. You can practice it specifically in the future. I hope this book will get better and betterヽ(=^･ω･^=) ps: I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good, nor am I writing in disguise. I'm just giving the author some suggestions for improvement and improvement.

The author's writing style is very good. I've read about Jing Dian, and I'm about halfway through it. So far, it's great. It's in line with my taste, and it's a bit cool. It's just that this attack is too brother-controlled until now. I hope I don't have to use it [Adoration] Sorry, amnesia is really my thunderbolt, and it is the biggest thunderbolt. It is more thunderous than knives and abuse articles, so I gave up when I saw it.

Very nice! I just like this kind of unpretentious writing style! The plot has ups and downs without dragging on. I haven't finished it yet. I almost ran away after reading the emotional line. All in all, it's super interesting and highly recommended! ! Not too cruel, just a light and sweet text, sweet and reassuring [shy]

It's beautiful [Sending Hearts] The emotions are written very delicately and smoothly, and the various psychological and emotional changes are super attractive. The plot is also very novel and unique, with twists and turns and very interesting [laughs][like]

Feng Shi was a little scared when he came back, thinking he would separate and chase his wife to the crematorium, but it was love at first sight! The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are all so good [Admiration] It's unreasonable to be unfavorable! !

It's beautiful, no wonder I keep seeing it on the completion list. There are no problems with the career line and the relationship line in the early stage. The relationship between the two is very good. The career line is pure and refreshing, the rare bloodline is awakened, the boss is the master, the ghost market begs to be the ghost master, and the goodwill of the World of Warcraft spirit beasts is so great. But later on, when the bloodline was fully awakened, he became a little tired. Under the influence of the bloodline, he directly showed his cards, kissed Shou forcefully, and said some very weird words. At this time, I only treat him as a younger brother, but I blindly condone his behavior. I feel that I can't tolerate this. The main reason is that the relationship between the two of them was quite equal in the past. He probably had some darker thoughts, but he was able to restrain himself very well. It seemed that it was still pure love before, but now if there is such a big contrast suddenly, there is no way to accept it. However, the career line at the back is still very interesting. If you don't care about this, you can continue reading. I recommend [Chigua] [Like] [Like]

Super pretty! ! ! I really like the characters of the two protagonists! When will you meet your sister again? (Author, can I please update it? I used to update it once a day, but now why do I update it every few days? O(╥╥)o

Awesome, it is the background of a heroine in a female channel, which is quite rare. The overall story is relatively refreshing, without any knives. The early plot is very good, but there is a small flash point in the later stage, which is a bit inexplicable amnesia. The plot is a bit messy, and the ending is a bit rushed. If you really want to watch the later part, you can lose your mind and watch it. But overall they look great, and the young couple is very, very sweet! ! ! 🥰🥰🥰You can rush! ! !

Hehe, it's a good-looking story. It's a story about a younger brother who has coveted it for many years and finally gets his older brother who is actually quite indulgent. It's similar to a pseudo-bone. The story is mainly about the older brother. It's probably a heart-warming story about upgrades (not too sad, there are amnesia, system, past life memories, and the heroine of the original world-the protagonist is also the so-called brother's sister)

(The review is written for myself as a re-reader. My personal sense is heavy. If you have any opinions, please do not read it.) Five-star praise, respect the fruits of the author's labor. What's great is that the plot is also very interesting! It's just that there are some parts that are overdone and may not be that good, but it's already great. After watching about four-fifths of it, I can't stand the last part, but it's still good! Great writing!

Give me a five-star support. The dialogue descriptions in some places still feel a bit unnatural. Come on, author! What I like the most is that the male protagonist helps an eldest lady become the lord of the city, and the male protagonist's sister, the female protagonist in the original book, takes the Feng Aotian route, which is not bad [laughs]

Very beautiful! The author writes very well! ! ! ! The content is very novel, and the characters each have their own personalities. I particularly like the two protagonists. Great support for the author! [Sending Hearts] (Highly recommended, super good looking, very good looking!!!!!)

It's really beautiful, I've been waiting for the update [crying][crying][crying]

It's suitable for watching when you have free time. It's not rushed or slow, and it's very kind to my heart. You don't have to laugh to the point of laughter or torture yourself to death [smile]

The characters are great, and the settings starting from Xiaoxiao are so good. The plot of the original heroine is very suitable to my liking. I am a little worried about her short life. She doesn't have a knife [I'm about to cry]

Very exciting plot. This is a real duo. Hey, hey, it's delicious.

The rating of 8.2 Is definitely low. The quality of this article is very good. The emotional line is very natural and sweet. It is a real pair of strong characters. The supporting characters are also highlighted and the image is three-dimensional. It is not just about the protagonist. Overall, it is worth reading.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It's not enough.

I quite like it, the plot is neither too fast nor too slow, and the writing is pretty good too.

It's really beautiful. I like Su Yu's character very much. I'm really looking forward to the scene where the protagonist and his sister meet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhfrom me right out out there out out out out out out of

It's very interesting, the plot is interesting, I hope there will be more [smile]

Good book recommendations Friendship, love and family are all very good. The plot is not procrastinating, the emotional lines are clear, and the young lovers are sweet. He really is the Moon Demon, Feng Twelve is the Abyss Demon, and the High Priest and the Demon Lord are a match made in heaven! The young couple should be happy forever

I finished reading it on May 19, 2026. It's a very good setting. The relationship between the protagonists is well written. The male protagonist has never suffered any grievances throughout the story. He treats readers very well and his own identity is not bad. If there is an accident, the consciousness of the world will spontaneously open the back door for him. The system is very cute, the sister is very cute, and the relationship between friends is also very interesting. But I think this ending is a bit bland. Why did it end so suddenly without any feeling? ! Overall worth reading