My Journey with Her in the Game That Became Reality

When I read it, there was a sense of fragmentation in some parts, and the sense of immersion was not very strong. Now that I seem to have never had a relatively complete and three-dimensional imagination of the world in the book, I feel that I only have a good idea of ​​the puppet house and theater. Maybe the author can consider adding more content in terms of world view. In contrast, the character creation is quite good, especially the role of Rika Deering. I feel like this is a book with potential.

Is it my imagination? Why do I always feel a strong sense of sadness between the lines? Aren't you planning on cutting the knife in the back? It makes me a little sad to see it... Come on, don't stop updating.

It's pretty good, and the characters are very attractive, but some of the plots at the beginning are a bit, um, erratic, and it's a bit difficult to follow the author's ideas. But it doesn't affect reading, and the more you write later, the better. Come on.

The writing style is very good, with a slight sense of sadness, but also interspersed with some funny scenes. This mixed feeling of sadness and joy made me involuntarily immersed in it, and I read the updated parts in one breath. Except for the slight tear in the front, which looked a little strange to me, the rest of the piece is great! ! Miss Rika's modeling is great! ! !

The author's character portrayal of each character is really vivid, and the description of communication and emotions is also very delicate. However, in some places, the way the Riddler and the perspective change are written are a little unfamiliar, which makes people feel unclear and slightly disconnected from the context. All in all, it's a pretty good book. I wish it had fewer knives and more sugar in the end.

New books have been added to the library, and except for the first one, which takes a while, the others are very good (it is not a traditional (on Tomato) Western fantasy or light novel. It is actually quite rare to find your favorite book on Tomato, so you can give it a try!)

So far, it seems to be a good novel, but I feel like there are a few people reading it, and the number of people urging for updates is quite small. I think it would be good for you to recommend your own book, otherwise it feels like not many people will read it, and it will feel cold, although it may be because this book has just been published.

It's so cute. Let's have more girls. The emotions are well described. It's totally ok to have more heroines.

The author must have written with great care, but I just wanted to sleep while watching it [cool]

Platinum investment, I couldn't sleep at night and read it in one sitting. [Shy] The quiet writing style reveals sadness and tells a very interesting story. Don't cut off the woo, even if it is updated intermittently, I will do anything (

Support me, don't cut it

It's really good, but it's a bit lacking. Let me keep it for a while before reading again. I hope it doesn't become a eunuch.

The author needs to work harder and try his best to enrich the characters. Looking at it now, it feels a little fresh [like]

After Chapter 25, the overall reading experience has been greatly improved, and the author's progress can be clearly felt. So the author needs to hold on [sending my heart]

The introduction is sunny, the content is positive, there is sadness hidden in the plainness, and there is sadness in the writing. In short, it is a good and relatively plain article.

I mainly clicked on it when I saw the tag "Steampunk". I haven't read this kind of thing for a long time. It felt a little fragmented at the beginning, but gradually decreased as the story unfolded. It was not a big problem. The tension and expression of the text were good. The description of some scenes and emotions was not slow and did not feel too simple. It summarizes a very good work (personal opinion is for reference only, it is recommended to enjoy it by yourself)

It's a pity that there are so few people watching (I guess I was persuaded to leave by the front, I was almost there too) Come on, author, keep updating. The writing is getting more and more interesting. I'm going to start the second brush.

Please support me. It's good to write. I like it very much.

It's very well written, good luck to the author!

It's a very good book. I hope the process can be a little more uneasy, but it must be better in the end.

It's good to watch^ω^The plot tends to be bland. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Well written and promising

Come on, big brother who writes books (/≧▽≦/)

Miss Rika Deering is so cute 😘 I hope she is the heroine, she will be!

The writing is pretty good, I'm looking forward to my future journey.

It looks good, I love watching it, mainly because it appeals to my taste.

It's a wonderful style, and the interactions between the characters are very, very well written.

With five-star support, by the way, is it a harem?

An excellent western fantasy work that I have seen recently [crying]

Use fewer knives. Reading now smells like blood. Thank you for bringing the camel milk back to life. It's really nice to give a five-star review. I would like to make a suggestion, although the knife can deepen the reader's impression of the character, and can also give the plot a lot of ups and downs, and give the reader an emotional bomb, a happy and united ending is also a good choice as the candy on the knife. After all, an article full of knives may not be able to bring about the ups and downs of the novel. After all, things must turn against each other.