In a Game Made Real, My Journey with Her

When I read it, there was a sense of fragmentation in some parts, and the sense of immersion was not very strong. Now that I seem to have never had a relatively complete and three-dimensional imagination of the world in the book, I feel that I only have a good idea of ​​the puppet house and theater. Maybe the author can consider adding more content in terms of world view. In contrast, the character creation is quite good, especially the role of Rika Deering. I feel like this is a book with potential.

Is it my imagination? Why do I always feel a strong sense of sadness between the lines? Aren't you planning on cutting the knife in the back? It makes me a little sad to see it... Come on, don't stop updating.

The writing style is very good, with a slight sense of sadness, but also interspersed with some funny scenes. This mixed feeling of sadness and joy made me involuntarily immersed in it, and I read the updated parts in one breath. Except for the slight tear in the front, which looked a little strange to me, the rest of the piece is great!! Miss Rika's modeling is great!!!

It's pretty good, and the characters are very attractive, but some of the plots at the beginning are a bit, um, erratic, and it's a bit difficult to follow the author's ideas. But it doesn't affect reading, and the more you write later, the better. Come on.

New books have been added to the library, and except for the first one, which takes a while, the others are very good (it is not a traditional (on Tomato) Western fantasy or light novel. It is actually quite rare to find your favorite book on Tomato, so you can give it a try!)

The author's character portrayal of each character is really vivid, and the description of communication and emotions is also very delicate. However, in some places, the way the Riddler and the perspective change are written are a little unfamiliar, which makes people feel unclear and slightly disconnected from the context. All in all, it's a pretty good book. I wish it had fewer knives and more sugar in the end.

So far, it seems to be a good novel, but I feel like there are a few people reading it, and the number of people urging for updates is quite small. I think it would be good for you to recommend your own book, otherwise it feels like not many people will read it, and it will feel cold, although it may be because this book has just been published.

It's so cute. Let's have more girls. The emotions are well described. It's totally ok to have more heroines.

Platinum investment, I couldn't sleep at night and read it in one sitting. 😳 The quiet writing style reveals sadness and tells a very interesting story. Don't cut off the woo, even if it is updated intermittently, I will do anything (

The author must have written with great care, but I just wanted to sleep while watching it 😎