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The author is a high school student. I usually write in a notebook after class and type during the holidays, so the efficiency is definitely not high and there are many mistakes. I'm sorry [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] During the holidays, I will read the comments and other things. If there are any mistakes, I will definitely correct them if I see them. Regarding plot discussions, I will also reply when I see them. We mainly focus on having a good attitude. Thank you Yanzu in front of the screen [love] [love] [love]

There is no poisonous point at the moment. The most eye-catching thing is that you don't have to fall in love with the target person. This is very good. To fall in love, you still have to fall in love with the person you like. This sentence is great. Come on, author.

The plot of the story is exciting, and the author's imagination is very attractive. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create more exciting plots.

Can see. Although the text is in a novice format, I can still read it. It's not toxic at the moment (although I can't write anything in a few pictures)

It's not bad. The trap of 500 people in the first part is supplemented by extras later. It's not bad. The story is worth reading, but the knife is not strong enough. (There are no other questions at the moment. If you have any, you can leave them in the comment area to help add them)

I don't think it's a sword, because I feel like there's something missing, just a foreshadowing. I think it's very important to write about the sword, so the encounter is very important. It's written at the beginning, and there are links and foreshadowing at the end. I was touched by the foreshadowing, which means that the type of extras I will watch should be like the scene when we finally come back and meet again, just like the scene where we first met. Of course, if I don't agree with my personal opinion, I'd better give the author a thumbs up and write it down.

Very good, never seen it before

In fact, I think it's pretty good-looking, but I'm a little uncomfortable with the modern version. I think the ancient one looks better, and what the author said about the fantasy world is that I feel the same [take a closer look], come on

It's very good, especially the second world. It's good that you're not forced to talk to the heroine about it. A mission is a mission, and love is love, but there's too little of it. When I first watched it, I didn't think it was too good, so I didn't keep it. Then I started watching it, and alas, it was too little.

No need to say more, okay?

I quite like this general genre. It's just that the emotional scenes and the knife parts are almost unconscious. I don't have a stomach ache. You can read the introduction of other authors' knife parts. It made my stomach hurt and shed some tears. But this is your first book and the writing is already good. I support you [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's really good to read. If you don't read the novel very much, you might not be used to it at first, but you'll slowly get used to it. So far, there's nothing too bad about it. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters! Urgent update! ! !

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It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Very good very good

Good book highly recommended

Big cheers for the author

It's really good, sweet

Okay, just a little short

Suddenly, this book was sent

Except for a few typos, everything else is okay and edible. I stayed up late and finished reading it. The author will update soon. Your second chapter touched me a little bit.

Not bad, I hope it can keep up

Not bad, the emotional description is okay. Also, please write more, it's a bit lacking.

Very good. It's one of the best I've seen in this genre. And it doesn't force the cp protagonist to have free love. I feel good about it. I hope the author will update more.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author will work hard and update [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's pretty good. I haven't read a book I like like this for a long time.

After reading the first story, I can see the author's efforts. Come on, author [eating melon] [eating melon]

So far it's pretty good. Although it's not very sharp and a little sweet, it's still very good [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

Not bad😌. Very distinctive. Very nice

It's very beautiful, not too sharp at all, very sweet [a heartfelt gift]